VN Ren'Py Package Perfect [Demo] [Lewtopia]

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Gingernuts212

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Good game demo so far and will look forward to what is to come. For the issue about the dick size, I would suggest to possibly making a choice at the start of the game for the dick size we have now and another for a more realistic size.
 

Kukipett

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Well it could have been a good game if that futa was at least credible, why giving her that huge ridiculous dick that makes it totally absurd. It totally kills the game for me, it's a shame because the models looks great.
The beginning of the story is absolute cringe and annoying unfortunately.
And i forgot about the fact that she is about 18 and that her two sisters never had a clue, that's the cherry on top of the stupidity of that story.
 
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Zorlond

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Actually, now that I've had some time to think about it, is MC a futa? It's not clearly stated, and in every image in the game, the balls are in the way. So it's kinda impossible to tell if she's truly futanari or just trans (the difference being the presence of vagina). It's not a deal-breaker for me, but I definitely prefer futanari to get the full package.
 

Overlord070

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Actually, now that I've had some time to think about it, is MC a futa? It's not clearly stated, and in every image in the game, the balls are in the way. So it's kinda impossible to tell if she's truly futanari or just trans (the difference being the presence of vagina). It's not a deal-breaker for me, but I definitely prefer futanari to get the full package.
That's not the difference between futa and trans lol
From the demo it seems to be implied she was born this way, which removes trans straight away.

Futa only having a dick is for some reason the norm on here for most VNs, so that's probably what she has, since MC never mentioned having a pussy.
 

Kodek

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Actually, now that I've had some time to think about it, is MC a futa? It's not clearly stated, and in every image in the game, the balls are in the way. So it's kinda impossible to tell if she's truly futanari or just trans (the difference being the presence of vagina). It's not a deal-breaker for me, but I definitely prefer futanari to get the full package.
From what I gathered she was born with a dick, don't know about she having a pussy or not. I would guess that she doesn't since the Dev called her a 'dickgirl' instead of a futa in the description, but who knows?

And from the overall dialogue we already have from the game, her situation is probably not unique, but incredible rare and people have huge stigma for dickgirls in her world, which's why she hides it. But them we have the fact that her sisters don't know about it... so maybe she could have actually gotten the dick later? I understand and don't understand her sister being the only two members of her family to not know about her condition.

Well, I will just wait a proper 0.1 release so we can get more clues.
 

Knight_of_the_lance

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First, about all the "controversy" about size. I genuinely am glad for people looking for oversized cocks on girls. Everyone should have games that fit their tastes more and less. It's not my kink, but am glad for those that like it. My only real concern with those oversized renditions is during intercourse. Seeing jaws extend to fit the dick in a blowjob scene or the bassin magically extend are what really get me out of it. Durring the masturbation scene, having the option to have the MC autofellate as a solution to the cum problem could have given me an example of how the dev wants to portray penetrations in the game, but I understand that, for story reasons, her not even thinking about it shows her innocent side. (Maybe add a sentence there to hint the player in that direction because it felt a bit frustrating for me that she didn't think of that at that moment and it's only later that I made that connection. (maybe player frustration was the goal?))

I find a bit funny that up to this point I have read only one comment linking the cock size and breast sizes. For me the fact that both are on the bigger side for every characters also helps with accepting the dick sizes. I just hope that in that universe everyone is packing even the ones that we would consider smaller.

On the other side, the writing is good enough for me to overlook my preference for "more reasonable" sizes. I must admit I usually skip those and didn't this one and liked it enough to comment.

Speaking of, I saw a bit of comments about feeling that there is too much doom and gloom and ask for a lighter tone. I don't agree... well kind of. What I find is that we have a hard time connecting with the MC's anxiety and stress. we see the extent to which she is affected, but we don't see the cause. We only know that she is in a conservative environment and that even her sisters don't, somehow, know her secret. It's visibly weighting on her, but that doesn't tell us all the stakes. I feel that the dream at the start is a representation of her fear. They feel more like normal teenage fears than something life threatening. Having an example of how far ostracisation could go would help a lot sell her anxiety as well as the setting and connect with the MC. Eruption Imminent did that in a nice way with the news of the streamer that was pushed to suicide by her harassers for example. A sentence by the teacher about an alternative past or an other student insulting an other by using her "condition" as the insult and the other responding as if the worst possible thing had been said about them are just things that came of the top of my head. As a player witnessing MC's reality and not just her fears would help me understand better her headspace. On the other hand I am glad that there are no clear info dump. I much prefer to learn the setting by witnessing it with the MC.

About the world, is the environment made by the dev? If yes it's quite impressive. I only have two point of criticism in that department and they can be expressed with this render.

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Ok. That is enough good start, eagerly waiting for more and see the dev get better.
 

Guyin Cognito

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OH! There's like another 200 responses? Yeah, so, I'm not gonna be reading this entire thread before giving my own response. Sorry if I repeat stuff!

I like the presentation of Luna's quasi-paranoia about her problem. That is totally how it feels to have something one's been made to feel shame for and be worried people will find out about, especially when a person is young and feeling embarassed or humiliated is such a strong fear. (I'm 43 now, and I already hardly give a shit what people think of me :LOL:, but I remember what it was like.)

I totally relate to poor Isaac. :ROFLMAO: I've never been dumb enough to say it in conversation like he tried to, but that "isn't NOT being an aggressive a-hole what people WANT from me?!" feeling is so felt. All of the characters feel like real people, perhaps with a touch of dramatic exaggeration, but hey that's what art's for right?

I've only rarely seen the giant-cock style futa paired with a realistic art style. It's an interesting look and a solid combo of metaphor being placed in an otherwise realistic setting. I'm glad to finally be seeing it in a game. (On the porn side, I'm really hoping that size shows itself when in use. I much prefer a cartoonish stomach bulge on the receiver than a magically disappearing Megalodong.)

The art is great. The animations are borderline too great for my poor old wheezing computer (that pan up the mom was like a series of jerky images for me rather than a smooth video, but I can see from other commenters that that's just me.)

The only thing I would want to see change is the highlighting on choices, especially if the game will have separate paths worth exploring. I save while the mouse is hovering over the choice I plan to make, so that I can see on the save screen which choice I made on that playthrough, and it's a little hard to make out currently.

Love the game overall. Can't wait for me! You do you! (See my signature? That.)

("Megalodong" copyright Lockheart games)
 
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sashamitsell

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decent game overall so far and you really cant go wrong with red heads or green eyes. unfortunately have to agree that penis is just to big. maybe go to a site like ashemale tube and do some research. the biggest I've seen there is 10 inches, not 30. that would be a more realistic scenario. otherwise well done for a first attempt.
 

mafiki5384

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Why is like half the comments people yapping about the dick being too big? :unsure: It's a game, it's not real, futas dont exist. I don't see half the comments complaining about the dick being too small whenever there's an MC with a 5-6 inch schlong.
Because of the tone of the narrative. However, if dev makes believable sex scenes, that is, when the characters don't know what to do and can neither penetrate nor suck, it will be interesting to watch their numerous training and attempts to conquer this monster. It's not a fact that he would go this route, but it would be a great solution and the penis size would be justified. This is the kind of character development we clearly lack in porn, not the usual deep throat on the first date.
 
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