VN Ren'Py Package Perfect [Demo] [Lewtopia]

[fidgetspinner]

Hey guys, Lewtopia here. I'm so happy to share my first game. It took all my effort and time to bring this game to life.

Each character was created from scratch with unique attributes, and the UI is custom-made. I'll do my best to improve every aspect of the game over time and would really appreciate constructive criticism—it will be a huge help along the way.

If you can't afford to support me via SubscribeStar, please consider leaving a review and comment.

Any chance for a free level sub on SubscribeStar to follow game development/ Text only update? Public post won't appear on feed otherwise.

 

[ZZBible128]

hope she is not the only futa n does trap planned tag trap mean futa w trap top or bottom?

 

[princeofpoon]

Guess I'll do the obligatory ask: Will there be pregnancy? And considering it's futa, will there be cumflation? And considering the 1/3 of her body mass index is cock, will there be stomach bulging? Or is the cock just gonna magically dissapear into the "black hole" vagina? XD

 

[ProPlay]

Dev name the game :
Package Perfect

if it was me i will name it :
Package Extra

of how big that cock

 

[Octave87]

Everything looks polished and great.

I always say there needs to be more of futa on male content out there (not sure if this is even planned). However, gotta say I side with others where the cartoonishly large member always puts me off, regardless of who the MC is or storyline; boobs for that matter too.

But hey, you're not making this for me, so make what you want

 

[mafiki5384]

I can see that for commenters the MC`s package being a major issue and I think the developer should decide for themselves, this is going to be a serious story so the size should be normal, or it's going to be a fun story then this size is ok. Although I'm a fan of futanari power, the size is really bigger than usual in similar games: Summoner's Legacy, MILF Breeder, Instinct Unleashed.

Lewtopia, if the current size is important to you, then stick to your opinion. If you're willing to compromise, make a few smaller penis size options that you find acceptable to you and take a poll among your supporters on SubscribeStar.

 

[Heranwen]

Interactions with Isaac in the main storyline and choosing him as a possible sexual partner will be two different things. He can remain Luna's best friend or become something more, depending on your choice at the beginning(When I add the menu for kinks and fetishes). However, if you're asking whether you can 'completely avoid and never see him again, even as a friend' - sadly, that's not the case. He represents the male perspective in Luna's life and is a really kind person. Perhaps you could give it another try with the full release of the game and see what I'm trying to achieve with Isaac and Luna's friendship.

Nice. I'm looking forward to male on futa options, there is a lack of that kind of content. Good luck with your project!

 

[Real human bean]

Really?

 

[SpyderArachnid]

Eh, I liked it. It was pretty fun.

Just a demo right now, so not much criticism to give. Renders look great, animations are nice, and the music is good. Only thing that bugged me, like someone else mentioned already, is reading everyone else's thoughts. Was never a fan of that. Always preferred their expressions to say what they were thinking, rather than having telepathy.

But otherwise, everything else is pretty good for an intro. Curious to see how things are going to go, especially when people start finding out her secret (especially her sisters). Best of luck with this and thanks.

 

[twink fucker]

didn't even see trap in the planned tags last time i checked

genuinely has potential to be top 10 games oat on this site

 

[Marshall343]

So first things first, I think the game looks great. the art is great, the writing and story up to now is great.
I personally would prefer if her dick was smaller, maybe like half the size (I'd say somewhere around 15-20cm [6-8inch]) though it's not a deal breaker and it doesn't bother me all that much (enough to mention my preference but not enough to not play the game going forward)

I think Issac might be trans (or masc presenting futa). When I saw him the first time I thought they were trans (or maybe reverse trap), then I'm pretty sure he has a bulge when he's being held in the headlock (though if they are trans they could just be stuffing their pants [I'm specifically talking non-transitioned])

Also I hope one of her sisters finds out about her "little secret" by walking in and getting a facial (maybe accidentally swallowing some)

 

[Yarokold]

comically large cock again

 

[Torsten Toresten]

well at least there are onest and make clear its dickgirl (event tho like everything regarding futa... that word has also kinda lost its meaning)

 

[Buletti]

Man, 10 pages in about one day. This VN really made an impact here. Gotta say one of the best starts I have seen in quite some time. Very well curated OP, great sample pics.

I am really impressed by the professionalism and hope this will translate into the story.

Well done mate!

 

[Exodius]

Lewtopia I have a bit of a suggestion for a comical element, if you would take it into consideration...
Using in consideration that Luna made a mess when first she masturbated, during the second part of the masturbation maybe make her cum in her own mouth. In order to avoid extra cleaning of her room.

Giving her a mouthful of cum, spilling all over her. It's the ultimate big dick futa trope.

Although we know that cum is not "orange-juice-tasty", it would tie up nicely with the teasing Hazel gives her when she exits the room about the perfume.

"Hmmm, it tastes nicely... And the aroma is really good. I wonder why I haven't tried this before."

 

[youbet567]

im more here for the big boob mom than the big dick MC
how will she react when she sees MCs dick?
thats more interesting

just like in Eruption Imminent
the mom is far more interesting than the futa mc.
or is it the combination of both? maybe

i dont think the Dev should bother with all lame complaints here.
continue to do what you do
the fact that the game already has 9 pages proves its interesting and worth talking about.

 

[Zorlond]

Hey, Lewtopia, ignore all the haters saying the dick's too big. They just jealous. If anything, I'd favor taking it up a notch or two. Truly Huge Dick material around here is depressingly rare, anyone who says different just doesn't comprehend what Truly Huge Dick is. Keep up the good work!

Guess I'll do the obligatory ask: Will there be pregnancy? And considering it's futa, will there be cumflation? And considering the 1/3 of her body mass index is cock, will there be stomach bulging? Or is the cock just gonna magically dissapear into the "black hole" vagina? XD

These are good questions I'd also like answered.

 

[Rexermus]

Demo unfortunately doesn’t work on Ren’py Reader, but the previews look amazing. Adorable futa mc with a huge cock, and according to other comments, a harem?

 

[combige]

So, what do I like more - beauty or non-futa...

 

[notgeilerdude]

I actually never thought about that before. For now, it's not something I am planning to do if you want me to give you an immediate answer.

I really like the MC's size but I think the sex scenes would look weird if you don't include any deformation. Just my 2 cents. Wish you all the best with the project.