- Jun 26, 2017
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If the Dev adds some good clothes bulges it's actually good that the cock is that big, the bulges are hot. Plus, tucking and old, fugly and resilient underware can only do so much to hide the beast.
- Thread starter Lewtopia
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- Jan 30, 2018
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Dev for the love of Futa goddess please resize that cock
- Jan 2, 2018
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- Nov 6, 2017
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Very nice. The UI is well put together, the characters are varied and beautifully done. I like the story potential, and find what's put so far interesting. I wish Lewtopia all the best. I will definitely support if the next update shows good results. I just have 1 piece of advice to share: You do what you set out to do, tell your story the way you want, and you will find your audience. Best of luck, looking forward to the next story update..
- Mar 19, 2018
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Negatives:
The writing here is... rough. The beginning felt way too heavy. I understand she's upset about her body, but it felt way too over the top, especially for a porn game. Showing her dream of everyone turning on her felt pretty gross. That dream sequence felt like this wasn't a porn game and more like something I would see in school about "accepting everyone".
Hated that "toxic masculinity" line. That crap is so overused anytime a girl gets mad at a dude. Would cut that from the game entirely.
For more examples on the writing, it gets a bit ridiculous. When we meet Hazel, her questions to Luna about her day are somehow exactly about events that happened to Luna at school earlier. It felt ridiculous. This omniscient kind of writing feels so out of place. Then the line Hazel says: "We accept you as you are." felt really bad. Like yes, we get it game, Luna is struggling with her having a dick and she would love to hear that someone else is accepting her. It just feels unearned and rushed. Then of course she has to ask why she wasn't allowed in Luna's room earlier, again making the writing feel rough and rushed. It's only the beginning of the game and it's like every character somehow knows about her massive dick and are trying to find ways to make her come out and say it. The dialogue in these instances just feel forced. Easily my biggest problem with the writing. Nothing feels natural.
Also, the MC's dick is just too big. The people complaining about it here are right. It needs to be smaller. I'd personally reduce it by a third. I don't get why she needs to have a dick the size of a damn horse. It just makes her situation so much more difficult to believe. Like, how has this monster horse dong not been found out yet after all this time? It needs to be believable.
Positives:
The female characters are pretty hot and well designed, and I was really surprised by the quality of the animations. The animations for a visual novel like this are easily some of the best I have ever seen.
I know I dogged on the writing but there were moments that I actually enjoyed, like the dinner scene when the dad accidentally tells Hazel to tell him everything about her day. Seeing everyone's expression was hilarious. That right there is the kind of stuff I am wanting in a game like this. More comedic, fun moments that don't feel preachy. A shame it came at the end of the demo, that's when I started to enjoy the game besides the one solo masturbation scene.
Overall the game is just way too heavy and problematic with her condition. The game is all doom and gloom where she worries about it every second she breathes. This was not fun to sit and read through because of that feeling for the entire demo until the funny bit at the end. The animations and character designs are almost enough for me to ignore the not so good writing. I'll keep an eye on this in hopes the writing gets better. I would suggest just lightening the story a bit with her situation.
My hopes for this game is to see some fun embarrassing moments of her trying to not get found out and not have it be so sad and frightening for her all the time. Would love to see her have sex with all her family members too (except her dad and grandma, that'd be gross). Overall just make this game a bit more fun.
The writing here is... rough. The beginning felt way too heavy. I understand she's upset about her body, but it felt way too over the top, especially for a porn game. Showing her dream of everyone turning on her felt pretty gross. That dream sequence felt like this wasn't a porn game and more like something I would see in school about "accepting everyone".
Hated that "toxic masculinity" line. That crap is so overused anytime a girl gets mad at a dude. Would cut that from the game entirely.
For more examples on the writing, it gets a bit ridiculous. When we meet Hazel, her questions to Luna about her day are somehow exactly about events that happened to Luna at school earlier. It felt ridiculous. This omniscient kind of writing feels so out of place. Then the line Hazel says: "We accept you as you are." felt really bad. Like yes, we get it game, Luna is struggling with her having a dick and she would love to hear that someone else is accepting her. It just feels unearned and rushed. Then of course she has to ask why she wasn't allowed in Luna's room earlier, again making the writing feel rough and rushed. It's only the beginning of the game and it's like every character somehow knows about her massive dick and are trying to find ways to make her come out and say it. The dialogue in these instances just feel forced. Easily my biggest problem with the writing. Nothing feels natural.
Also, the MC's dick is just too big. The people complaining about it here are right. It needs to be smaller. I'd personally reduce it by a third. I don't get why she needs to have a dick the size of a damn horse. It just makes her situation so much more difficult to believe. Like, how has this monster horse dong not been found out yet after all this time? It needs to be believable.
Positives:
The female characters are pretty hot and well designed, and I was really surprised by the quality of the animations. The animations for a visual novel like this are easily some of the best I have ever seen.
I know I dogged on the writing but there were moments that I actually enjoyed, like the dinner scene when the dad accidentally tells Hazel to tell him everything about her day. Seeing everyone's expression was hilarious. That right there is the kind of stuff I am wanting in a game like this. More comedic, fun moments that don't feel preachy. A shame it came at the end of the demo, that's when I started to enjoy the game besides the one solo masturbation scene.
Overall the game is just way too heavy and problematic with her condition. The game is all doom and gloom where she worries about it every second she breathes. This was not fun to sit and read through because of that feeling for the entire demo until the funny bit at the end. The animations and character designs are almost enough for me to ignore the not so good writing. I'll keep an eye on this in hopes the writing gets better. I would suggest just lightening the story a bit with her situation.
My hopes for this game is to see some fun embarrassing moments of her trying to not get found out and not have it be so sad and frightening for her all the time. Would love to see her have sex with all her family members too (except her dad and grandma, that'd be gross). Overall just make this game a bit more fun.
- Oct 13, 2017
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Very nice. Great renders, great characters, great UI ... And I like the futa protag.
Just wished it was a normal sized dick.
Just wished it was a normal sized dick.
jfc there's a simple, obvious answer to this - because the dev wanted to. Why the fuck are so many people coming in here and complaining that the thing the dev has made isn't catering perfectly to their interests?
OP, this is a good demo for an interesting looking game set-up. Dickgirl in a conservative location concerned about people finding out is an neat premise, character models all look good so far, and the characters themselves seem relatively interesting. Could the cock be smaller? Probably. Should you make it smaller? Nahhh, you do you, if this is what you want to make, please dear god keep making it. That jerk-off scene was pretty great, and I'm very much looking forward to seeing where you're going with this. Big-cocked cute ginger dickgirl with a feminine body, the promise of incest, and that range of future planned tags? As long as you're planning on making some of the more extreme content clearly labelled and/or easily disabled!
- Oct 13, 2022
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- Jun 1, 2022
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I hope the dev sticks to his original vision and keeps the MC dick size the way it is now, I am tired of people on this site feeling extremely entitled to changing a games content just because it doesnt appeal to their own personal kinks and fetishes by bullying and harassing devs to get them to do what they want.
Its honestly pathetic to see so many people behaving like children throwing a tantrum because they dint get what they wanted and its even funnier to see people who don't support devs financially act more entitled than the people who are actually subbed to devs and supporting them financially.
Its honestly pathetic to see so many people behaving like children throwing a tantrum because they dint get what they wanted and its even funnier to see people who don't support devs financially act more entitled than the people who are actually subbed to devs and supporting them financially.
- Oct 27, 2017
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- Aug 5, 2017
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(except her dad and grandma, that'd be gross)
Thicc Nana needs to get it too, not enough Gilfs in VN's nowadays.
- Jul 30, 2017
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As I see a lot of people already said (in great detail) everything I was thinking during and after the game. So just two things.
One: don't worry about the people who say "the dick is too big" "oh no, the futa ruins it" and stupid things like that. People who don't like it shouldn't open the thread clearly tagged with futa.
Two: this is great, you are awesome, can't wait to see more!
One: don't worry about the people who say "the dick is too big" "oh no, the futa ruins it" and stupid things like that. People who don't like it shouldn't open the thread clearly tagged with futa.
Two: this is great, you are awesome, can't wait to see more!
- Aug 2, 2017
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- Aug 2, 2017
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Just please keep her cock as is... The ridiculous oversize is so comedically great as well as
Demo is so Promising! cant wait to see more! amazing job!!!
- Dec 2, 2022
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I think everything is fine with the size of the dick
The game itself turned out great. I'll be waiting for new updates
The game itself turned out great. I'll be waiting for new updates
I was 100% on board until I saw her cock. Not because its unrealistic, but because that monster would absolutely ruin any sex scenes for me. Instead of thinking how hot the scene is I'd be thinking "Christ, she's going to fucking murder that poor woman!". It's a massive turn off.
- May 3, 2017
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