VN Ren'Py Package Perfect [Demo] [Lewtopia]

[junkgkj]

My only concern about the dick size debate is if this is what the dev wants to do and not doing it will kill the joy of doing the project. I've said in my review that I'm down for a comically oversized donger, and it somewhat depends on what the dev is trying to accomplish.
Things could seem "realistic" but once it gets to the lewd aspect, suddenly the rules of biology don't matter as the ladies get bulged up past the sternum. XD
It'd certainly let this game stand out from more of the usual futa games seen around here.
I'm not saying that is what will happen, but I'm still down for it if that is the case.

But this could also be a case where she has a giga-donger but it just kind of vanishes into the void once someone is penetrated to the base.

Regardless, I'm sold on the devs current direction with it and will be seeing how it plays out.

I will also note that a concern I have with taking input on a core fundamental like this and changing it, is it shows that there may be other things in the future I might be looking forward to that the dev might cave on and get rid of because other users have commented against them. Like if I were to financially support the game for a year and then major planned elements I like were removed. I just supported for three figures to get screwed over.
This is why I prefer a dev to stick to the guns on major elements that can't be made optional, and make optional some things that can be made optional if there is some pushback.
But that is what VNs are about, making choices that take you down the road based on your choices.

 

[Ver Greeneyes]

Here's another vote in favor of the current size. Hell, make it bigger! There's already too many "big but not too big" games to go around.

 

[notgeilerdude]

If the dev decided to give her a missile sized cock who the fuck are you people to think you can come in here and bust his balls and push him to change it? it's not even entitlement, it's stupidity. It's low IQ behavior.
No difference between you people and the ones asking to remove futa in a futa game.
Do you go in the BaDik thread and ask Pink to change Bella's boobs?
14k games on this site and you people keep going in threads asking devs to change the game to YOUR personal tastes. How insanely narcissistic. How insanely NPC behavior.
This is one of the worst communities i have ever been part of, and i've been on /v/ since 2008.

Seriously, these people got some screws loose in their head. They haven't even given the dev the chance to show what he can do with the models he created. Just a single masturbation scene so far and they are losing their shit over a futa dick. At least wait for future releases so you can give CONSTRUCTIVE feedback. Nobody cares about your preferences.

 

[Zorlond]

On the topic of her dick size, the standard length in Daz is 14.2", which is already about 3x average erect length. MC looks to be about twice that

That can't be right. 14" is the average distance from elbow to knuckles on a 6' guy. Unless 90% of Daz users are at least halving that length, no way that's the default. I'm guessing that's just the number on whatever slider system Daz uses. It'd be more believable if Daz uses cm instead, as 14.2cm is just 5.6".

Trust me, when a guy's dick is literally as long as his forearm, it's very easy to notice the comparison.

 

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[Knight_of_the_lance]

On an other completely different note, I wonder what is the dev's inclination concerning body hair, piercings and tattoos. Since they are not tags in the forum and are not in the future tags either. Concerning piercings and tattoos, I admit, I can't really see the characters we've been introduced to up to now sporting any, but perhaps a character in the future acting as a catalyst for aiming the Mc in a certain direction. As far as body hair is concerned, I can see a character or two not grooming thinking their time will only come once they are married so what is the need to shave in the mean time.

 

[Alley_Cat]

That can't be right. 14" is the average distance from elbow to knuckles on a 6' guy. Unless 90% of Daz users are at least halving that length, no way that's the default. I'm guessing that's just the number on whatever slider system Daz uses. It'd be more believable if Daz uses cm instead, as 14.2cm is just 5.6".

Trust me, when a guy's dick is literally as long as his forearm, it's very easy to notice the comparison.

Daz does use cm. A 1x1 cube I believe is 1m by 1m. There is also a plugin called Measure Metrics which you can use. Great for finding out cup sizes.

Meanwhile, to actually talk about the game for a second, I'm enjoying the different variety of characters. Hazel is probably my favourite so far, followed by Skye.

Noticed a few grammatical errors, but nothing really significant. The main one I noticed was "homeworks". The plural, like rain, isn't rains, but more rain.

 

[Ms. Jade]

Hello, there should be a way to get out of gallery playback without having to click through to the end nor turning on skip unseen dialogue. Thanks! Hope you enjoy making more.

 

[Robotai]

"The dick isn't big enough, how dare you complain about the dick size, if a futa can't pretend to be a tripod with it's too small!! I want it bigger!!!"

I like futa stuff, but goddamn, futa fans are some of the worst gooners on the planet, I swear.

 

[Nikephouros]

I played through the demo and I really like it so far. Is MC futa or trans, and will there be any opportunity to have MC be a bottom?

 

[Sober drunk]

futa fans are some of the worst gooners on the planet, I swear.

Aren't the worst gooners the ones who criticize other people's fetishes?

 

[Robotai]

Aren't the worst gooners the ones who criticize other people's fetishes?

Worst gooner in that they are bad at being a gooner, perhaps, but that's not what I meant.

 

[Alley_Cat]

Hey Lewtopia, are we going to see bulging under clothing?

 

[kalakumiho]

Always happy to see another futa project on here, and the character models and animations look great so far! Keep up the good work!

My only criticism would be in the dick size debate, I do lean more "realistic" sizes myself. So giant horse dicks do just sort of make me chuckle and take me out of the mood. But you do you and make the game you want. Also, curious if she is a full-package hermaphrodite or just a dickgirl. Not to mention, wondering if there are other futa in the world, or is she unique? Betting on Grandma being a futa.

 

[Kodek]

"The dick isn't big enough, how dare you complain about the dick size, if a futa can't pretend to be a tripod with it's too small!! I want it bigger!!!"

I like futa stuff, but goddamn, futa fans are some of the worst gooners on the planet, I swear.

No one is seriously asking it to be bigger and also, if you just go back to the start of thread, it wasn't futa fans that started anything, we just started giving the Dev support because of the many "Dick is big! Me cry! Want it gone!" appearing from the very first page of this section. We actually never start shit, the most preemptive action the more average futa fan do is asking a Dev if they have futanari content planned for the game... and that's it, they ask a question get free hate from 30 randoms and go back to their stuff.

But try looking for what futa haters do. They go into a game with basically futa as the main content and asks the dev to make the content optional, they see that ONE character is futa and they already go "Oh no, now the dev is going to start making everyone a futa, they lost me in this one".
Futa fans asks for planned futute content and the haters asks for the content to be taken away because they can't avoid ONE character or can't skip ONE game that has it.

 

[Kodek]

My only concern about the dick size debate is if this is what the dev wants to do and not doing it will kill the joy of doing the project. I've said in my review that I'm down for a comically oversized donger, and it somewhat depends on what the dev is trying to accomplish.
Things could seem "realistic" but once it gets to the lewd aspect, suddenly the rules of biology don't matter as the ladies get bulged up past the sternum. XD
It'd certainly let this game stand out from more of the usual futa games seen around here.
I'm not saying that is what will happen, but I'm still down for it if that is the case.

But this could also be a case where she has a giga-donger but it just kind of vanishes into the void once someone is penetrated to the base.

Regardless, I'm sold on the devs current direction with it and will be seeing how it plays out.

I will also note that a concern I have with taking input on a core fundamental like this and changing it, is it shows that there may be other things in the future I might be looking forward to that the dev might cave on and get rid of because other users have commented against them. Like if I were to financially support the game for a year and then major planned elements I like were removed. I just supported for three figures to get screwed over.
This is why I prefer a dev to stick to the guns on major elements that can't be made optional, and make optional some things that can be made optional if there is some pushback.
But that is what VNs are about, making choices that take you down the road based on your choices.

The last part of your comment is the prime reason I don't subscribe to games as much as I used too. I've been screwed hard by some Devs just losing the interest in continuing the game, finishing it halfassedly and starting a new project... this after I've been an active subscriber for more than half the development of the game.

This game really gave good vibes and I liked how the Dev positioned themselves in this thread, so I'm honestly considering subscribing already if the full release of the first version of the game keeps the same quality and that's just not something I usually do.

 

[Futa_Buddy]

This demo is great! The art (models), the story, the setting, all great!

But I'd like to hear what kind of content the dev plans to put into the game (other then just futa). Going by the dialog choices it looks like the mc can give either dominant or submissive responses, so I'm guessing the game will have dom and sub paths (I hope).

Also it would be great if the game was available on Patreon, since I don't use Subscribesta (I'd sign up for the Patreon day one). And I think a Steam release would be a good idea too. Having a Hard Time (another futa mc game) is on Steam, Star Periphery (another futa focused game) is coming to Steam, so clearly it works...

 

[Alley_Cat]

It might just be me, but in my playthrough, it appears that Skye and Isaac have a bit of a rivalry going on. Isaac seemed to wanted to stand up for himself in his own way, but then Skye came in just as he was warming up.

Also, in one Scene, one of the choices was red, but still clickable. I assume that means it either starts or ends a romance.

 

[yunosykk]

Also, in one Scene, one of the choices was red, but still clickable. I assume that means it either starts or ends a romance.

That red or pink choice was there because,that choice progresses the game to the next scene...which means you can select both the other white choices first before picking the pink choice to move to the next scene

 

[Melissa fan]

If the dev decided to give her a missile sized cock who the fuck are you people to think you can come in here and bust his balls and push him to change it? it's not even entitlement, it's stupidity. It's low IQ behavior.
No difference between you people and the ones asking to remove futa in a futa game.
Do you go in the BaDik thread and ask Pink to change Bella's boobs?
14k games on this site and you people keep going in threads asking devs to change the game to YOUR personal tastes. How insanely narcissistic. How insanely NPC behavior.
This is one of the worst communities i have ever been part of, and i've been on /v/ since 2008.

The stupid thing here is your post. People have no right to demand a dev to change something but the point of threads like this is to discuss the game and your opinions about what you do and do not like about the games.

The people giving their opinions about the MCs dick being too big can be very helpful to the dev and the game. If everyone that hated the dick size just left without saying anything then there might be 100 players with 10 paying and the dev thinking no one is interested in the game and just giving up on it. If everyone that wanted to play but didn't because the dick size actually said so then at least the dev will know how to get more players if the game doesn't earn enough money to continue. If the dick size was reduced or there was an option for huge dick or normal dick then there would be more people trying the game and possibly paying for it.

Do you go in the BaDik thread and ask Pink to change Bella's boobs?

She is very easy to ignore when there are 3 more main girls and plenty of side girls. This is the MC that will be in every sex scene with a dick so huge that it would never happen IRL.

I agree with a lot of people here that the MCs dick is too big. I would have loved to have tried the game and if I enjoyed it and continued playing I would have been happy to pay for it but seeing the preview of the dick half the size of a person really put me off. Seeing something that it wouldn't be physically possible like a dick that big really takes me out of scenes.

If the size of the dick is important to the plot then the game just isn't for me and the others complaining but if it doesn't affect the plot at all and you would like more people to try out the game I would suggest a smaller dick either by reducing the size or to make everyone happy by giving an option of a huge or more realistic size.