VN Ren'Py Package Perfect [v1.0 Ch.1] [Lewtopia]

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I rly hope you consider making some changes and GL to you dev/s






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Seriously dude, are you suggesting killing the father so that fucking the mother won't make you uncomfortable? I understand that you want to fuck her, but for me personally, it's not worth it. The father is too good a person (he's God), even if the grandmother says otherwise; on the other hand, the mother is a controlling bitch. I'd make Luna fuck her with hatred, but out of respect for the father, I'll refrain. There's plenty of pussy in the city, so I'll do the healthy thing and fuck the sisters, and maybe the grandmother too. I haven't decided yet. :ROFLMAO:

But still the one that supports her always is her father its heavily implied that their relationship is really great .... Maybe not looking at it as cucking the father just look at it as a weird threeway relationship ... And if that doesnt hit the bucket I honestly dont mind the mom not being involved with luna Ever ngl ..... Kinda not like the mother herself ... Almost want her to hook up with every single character And not the mother :D

...I dont think its ever gonna go down the cuck road i could be wrong
We'll have to see how this fucking the mother thing works out. I'm not one to judge; everyone plays however they want, but I hope there's an option to be nice to my old man. Stepping over him even if I wanted to doesn't make him any less bad.
 
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I get what you're saying, but yeah sry I can't... I have the mental blockage that it's just a man with breast lol. Ik it's dumb but yeah, I can't unsee it now.
Here's how my dumb brain works lol : Is X character a female with a shlong, then it's a futa. Is X character a male with breasts then it's a shemale, trans... Well and identifying a male from a female is easy, they have a d1ck, it's a male. They have a pu$$y it's a female. A futa can bear kids while a trans, shemale... can't
I used to not care at all but I think the whole propaganda about seggsuality gave me the subconcious need to find an anchor.
So yeah, even if you say it's something you completely created, the human brain likes to make connection and in the end it is an effiminated man with breast so that guy was kinda right in his thinking when he said it isn't futa and more akin to a shemale or trans.
Anyway but that's just me and my nitpicking, my brain overworks for no reason lol. I just wonder why you went down that route when futas are more interesting from nearly every perspective. They have more possibility for seggs scenes, they are more accepted than shemale/trans...
Genuine curiosity, again I wish you all the best with your game mate. I was here since the demo and I do hope you succeed even if I don't stick to see it.

Ok killing him might a bit much but maybe him divorcing his wife or smt. I'd rather not cuck a cool guy. I'm alrdy not that much into NTR whatever the type of ntr but if it's a cool guy that'd feel real sh1tty. Why I wanted him dead? Bc I'd rather see that than see him humiliated for the plot. But yeah dying in a plot can have several meanings. It can just mean him having less relevance in the story and not be important to any LI routes.
If he does plan to have a cuck route for him, I hope it will be avoidable. Ofc this is all me making theories but yeah that coversation he was having with the mom before they were interrupted kinda open the possibility.
Idk maybe you're into that, but you always have to consider the opposite side and yeah that'd definitely be a no no for me. I don't like forced content without a choice anyway.






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Well, we didn't hear the entire conversation between Luna's parents, but most likely the father is impotent, and they haven't had sex for a long time, and something tells me that in future chapters, the mother will want a "piece" of Luna, perhaps this will happen when Luna loses her virginity with someone in earlier chapters (and perhaps some pheromone will awaken in her) and it will strongly make women "want" Luna (a similar pheromone was in another game with a futanari MC - Instinct Unleashed).
 

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This is a really nice game. I really enjoyed the characters so far. I'm pleasantly surprised to see that not only is the dad alive he isn't a total sack of shit which sadly seems to be the default in these games. Although it seems like there's some hints towards him having health issues but I hope that isn't the case.

I'm looking forward to seeing how others besides her friends respond to her having a penis since that seems to be a point of prejudice. I'm not sure how heavy the tone of the game will be. So far it's been light hearted but I don't know if the tone will get as heavy as Having a Hard Time or even Confusion.
 
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This is a really nice game. I really enjoyed the characters so far. I'm pleasantly surprised to see that not only is the dad alive he isn't a total sack of shit which sadly seems to be the default in these games. Although it seems like there's some hints towards him having health issues but I hope that isn't the case.

I'm looking forward to seeing how others besides her friends respond to her having a penis since that seems to be a point of prejudice. I'm not sure how heavy the tone of the game will be. So far it's been light hearted but I don't know if the tone will get as heavy as Having a Hard Time or even Confusion.
I highly doubt we will reach the extremes of HAHT and confusion, even though her mother and the story want to paint Luna's life as social suicide if she comes out of the closet. Let's think about it, how bad could it be? Luna lives in a beautiful house with a pool, a loving family, and two best friends who accepted her right away for who she is, and surely her sisters and grandmother will do the same. so Luna is not in such a bad position. The only thing that could ruin this would be an angry mob wanting to lynch Luna and her family, but thankfully this is not Devilman, and they only isolate the “Femine.”
 

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Seriously dude, are you suggesting killing the father so that fucking the mother won't make you uncomfortable? I understand that you want to fuck her, but for me personally, it's not worth it. The father is too good a person (he's God), even if the grandmother says otherwise; on the other hand, the mother is a controlling bitch. I'd make Luna fuck her with hatred, but out of respect for the father, I'll refrain. There's plenty of pussy in the city, so I'll do the healthy thing and fuck the sisters, and maybe the grandmother too. I haven't decided yet. :ROFLMAO:
Lol, I didn't make it clear in my previous com but I was talking abt it as being unavoidable. I mean the whole 1st chapter had near to 0 real choices. For exemple I personally didn't want to tell the friends abt the secret and wanted them to discover it if we ever got involved romantically with any of them. However, we didn't have that choice.
The whole I need to tell them thingy was useless in my opinion, if your best friends can't respect your privacy and boundaries. They aren't meant to be your best friends.
Anyway, what I was trying to say is I'd rather have him die plot wise (divorce, marry smn else...) or have him in an actual life or death situation than have forced netori content. I'd rather avoid romancing her altogether
The mother ain't a b1ch, that's just your opinion. All mothers are controlling to some point, I actually think she was in the right. I, myself was betrayed by some "best friends" of mine. Wether by accident (slip ups), or not, it can still "ruin your life". SO yeah, I don't think she was in the wrong with her approach.
Ultimately, once the daughter has matured and is an adult it's her choice wether she wants to confide in them. the whole way she talked to her mother just kinda proves my point. She's still a kiddo that needs to grow up (not saying the mother is without flaws but yeah she's still her "mother") . I mean just by looking into her eyes when she talks abt it, you can tell there is a backstory as to why she's so affraid of her daughter being recognized as a Femine.
However why do so if you aren't planning to f1ck them right here right now? Why do they need to know what the hell is going on in your pants lol. Like I said the whole thing just felt forced to me right from the start when she said she didn't want to go to the spa. Eve since her childhood they have known her to be shy about her body not liking being touched, seen...
However, now for some reason it's not acceptable anymore, plsu the logical thing to say would have just been to say that she's not comfortable being touched or seen without much clothing. Instead she chose smt abt being allergic to products or whatever. All in all, whatever the excuse she used, as her friend they should've just gone with it. That's called being considerate. Last time I checked this isn't a matter of life and death, why would they need to be so pushy. Now, I know they are young, they makes mistakes... but I'd have liked a choice there to refuse telling them.
Honestly, the whole thing just seemed like an easy way for the dev to clearly establish a before and an after in their relationships. However it could have been done a lot more naturally over the course of the story. Especially when the story happens at an age where hormones are going crazy. There would have been tons of occasions to make these advancements in the story more natural.
Why am I being so noisy about it? because this isn't a kinetic novel. There is a difference between things your MC don't have control over (external events, what side characters do, how they react...) and what your MC does without your input. Now IK we can't control ever single little decisions. But c'mon smt are obviously big decisions not giving the player any input during those rly make it feel like a linear novel.
The whole thing just caused a big amount of frustation building up so don't mind my venting lol.

All of this to say yeah, I was only saying this in case dev plans to continue the whole game in a linear way for the game.



Well, we didn't hear the entire conversation between Luna's parents, but most likely the father is impotent, and they haven't had sex for a long time, and something tells me that in future chapters, the mother will want a "piece" of Luna, perhaps this will happen when Luna loses her virginity with someone in earlier chapters (and perhaps some pheromone will awaken in her) and it will strongly make women "want" Luna (a similar pheromone was in another game with a futanari MC - Instinct Unleashed).
Exactly my reasoning, maybe not the whole pheromonone thingy but that's what it seemed like to me. I just hope it's avoidable, I'd rather he has some incurable disease that he doesn't want to talk about. That leads to some character development and change dynamics of the family than forced netori content.
Some concers I have is about the father. I know it's kinda weird to say but I really hope his prblm is related to a life or death sickness. I swear if it's anything like erectile dysfunction and us cucking him I am gonna crash out.
Honestly as long as the dad's there it'd be rly weird to have something develop with the mom, especially since he seems like a cool dude. I don't rly see why he is needed for the story he is just gonna make things weird tbh. So as much as it's a weird, horrible thing to say, I'd rather not have him here. Maybe divorce or whatever....






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Lol, I didn't make it clear in my previous com but I was talking abt it as being unavoidable. I mean the whole 1st chapter had near to 0 real choices. For exemple I personally didn't want to tell the friends abt the secret and wanted them to discover it if we ever got involved romantically with any of them. However, we didn't have that choice.
The whole I need to tell them thingy was useless in my opinion, if your best friends can't respect your privacy and boundaries. They aren't meant to be your best friends.
Anyway, what I was trying to say is I'd rather have him die plot wise (divorce, marry smn else...) or have him in an actual life or death situation than have forced netori content. I'd rather avoid romancing her altogether
The mother ain't a b1ch, that's just your opinion. All mothers are controlling to some point, I actually think she was in the right. I, myself was betrayed by some "best friends" of mine. Wether by accident (slip ups), or not, it can still "ruin your life". SO yeah, I don't think she was in the wrong with her approach.
Ultimately, once the daughter has matured and is an adult it's her choice wether she wants to confide in them. the whole way she talked to her mother just kinda proves my point. She's still a kiddo that needs to grow up (not saying the mother is without flaws but yeah she's still her "mother") . I mean just by looking into her eyes when she talks abt it, you can tell there is a backstory as to why she's so affraid of her daughter being recognized as a Femine.
However why do so if you aren't planning to f1ck them right here right now? Why do they need to know what the hell is going on in your pants lol. Like I said the whole thing just felt forced to me right from the start when she said she didn't want to go to the spa. Eve since her childhood they have known her to be shy about her body not liking being touched, seen...
However, now for some reason it's not acceptable anymore, plsu the logical thing to say would have just been to say that she's not comfortable being touched or seen without much clothing. Instead she chose smt abt being allergic to products or whatever. All in all, whatever the excuse she used, as her friend they should've just gone with it. That's called being considerate. Last time I checked this isn't a matter of life and death, why would they need to be so pushy. Now, I know they are young, they makes mistakes... but I'd have liked a choice there to refuse telling them.
Honestly, the whole thing just seemed like an easy way for the dev to clearly establish a before and an after in their relationships. However it could have been done a lot more naturally over the course of the story. Especially when the story happens at an age where hormones are going crazy. There would have been tons of occasions to make these advancements in the story more natural.
Why am I being so noisy about it? because this isn't a kinetic novel. There is a difference between things your MC don't have control over (external events, what side characters do, how they react...) and what your MC does without your input. Now IK we can't control ever single little decisions. But c'mon smt are obviously big decisions not giving the player any input during those rly make it feel like a linear novel.
The whole thing just caused a big amount of frustation building up so don't mind my venting lol.

All of this to say yeah, I was only saying this in case dev plans to continue the whole game in a linear way for the game.




Exactly my reasoning, maybe not the whole pheromonone thingy but that's what it seemed like to me. I just hope it's avoidable, I'd rather he has some incurable disease that he doesn't want to talk about. That leads to some character development and change dynamics of the family than forced netori content.








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Yes, I agree, anything is better than cheating on daddy, and if important decisions need to be made, like telling assholes to fuck off. So let's hope there's something in the next update, and God willing, we can tell the sisters and grandmother once and for all. I think it's a huge mistake for parents to isolate them like that for their whole lives. It only causes Luna more anxiety, which could lead to psychological problems.
 

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Yes, I agree, anything is better than cheating on daddy, and if important decisions need to be made, like telling assholes to fuck off. So let's hope there's something in the next update, and God willing, we can tell the sisters and grandmother once and for all. I think it's a huge mistake for parents to isolate them like that for their whole lives. It only causes Luna more anxiety, which could lead to psychological problems.
And how extreme this isolation is what I'm worried about. If the mom thinks she needs to hide this fact from others in the family I'm just wondering how bad the prejudice truly is. Her friends are also somewhat considered outcasts so of course they'd support their best friend I just hope the bully isn't the normal way people would react since being a minority leads to pretty heavy discrimination. The family seems to be well off but that can change if being fem is a really big taboo.
 
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Play the game that the dev made & if you don't like it fuck off to another because nobody cares about anyone else's crying about the daddy issues some seem so worried over or make your own game and create watever so ppl can tell you all bout wat is not liked or to redo

Real issue is soon as it loads game just closes immediately wtf can cause it
 

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I like the game so far, but its really only an intro for whats to come.

I highly recommend adding a "choice" to the end to go back to the main menu, so people and rollback and save, and know they hit the end of content, instead of just the game crashing to menu suddenly.

Likewise some of the back to back panning shots need to be toned down. We're not in awe of the vista, we're in the living room talking to our own Grandma, one short introduction pan is fine, but 15seconds including 2 different directions is NOT. We get it, you recently learned how to make a "higher production value" thing and your proud, but less is more. The same goes for things like the "v1.0" text bouncing on the main menu, its like using a highlighter on a text book, very effective to grab our attention to a few important things, worse than useless if your wasting our time on things that aren't important to either player nor the shocking to protagonist as character.

The "sync mode" is an example of doing it well. Optional, effective, used for one of the "highlights" and for a duration thats a little slower than normal pace prehaps, but not excessive (and I can see how making it faster will be an issue for some people failing to read the longest messages).
 

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I like the game so far, but its really only an intro for whats to come.

I highly recommend adding a "choice" to the end to go back to the main menu, so people and rollback and save, and know they hit the end of content, instead of just the game crashing to menu suddenly.

Likewise some of the back to back panning shots need to be toned down. We're not in awe of the vista, we're in the living room talking to our own Grandma, one short introduction pan is fine, but 15seconds including 2 different directions is NOT. We get it, you recently learned how to make a "higher production value" thing and your proud, but less is more. The same goes for things like the "v1.0" text bouncing on the main menu, its like using a highlighter on a text book, very effective to grab our attention to a few important things, worse than useless if your wasting our time on things that aren't important to either player nor the shocking to protagonist as character.

The "sync mode" is an example of doing it well. Optional, effective, used for one of the "highlights" and for a duration thats a little slower than normal pace prehaps, but not excessive (and I can see how making it faster will be an issue for some people failing to read the longest messages).
yea those pan animations dont really add much except a little wow factor and holding up a pc while they render out. holds up development time.
 

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I liked the update, even if it doesn't have much in the way of lewd content, but I do share concerns with others about the slow pace of the story. Kinda feels bad because it almost feels like the story is locked into being slow too, just because of how the plot is set up. It almost feels like it's another 6 months of development before the main character would even get a handjob, and an additional 6 months before there's a scene hot enough for me to jerk off to.

The graphics and quality of renders stand out as being really good, the writing is generally solid without being too long (I think some dialogues with the two best friends were a bit long). Another thing that makes this game stand out from similar games is that there's actually a father figure, and compared to most games on this site with a father figure, he's actually a really nice dad for a change. I thought that was a nice touch.
 

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I'm only curious about one thing:
what did the author want to achieve by attaching a dick to the MC that would make a real adult horse in his prime envious? Why not then attach a shlong that would reach into another room? I won't even mention that it's impossible to hide something like that in your underwear.
This absolute nonsense has completely ruined my desire to sympathize with and empathize with the problems of the MC.
And this is despite the fact that I liked the VN from the very beginning.

I would be grateful if someone could explain it to me
 

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I'm only curious about one thing:
what did the author want to achieve by attaching a dick to the MC that would make a real adult horse in his prime envious? Why not then attach a shlong that would reach into another room? I won't even mention that it's impossible to hide something like that in your underwear.
This absolute nonsense has completely ruined my desire to sympathize with and empathize with the problems of the MC.
And this is despite the fact that I liked the VN from the very beginning.

I would be grateful if someone could explain it to me
Futa Characters usually have big dicks. A common stereotype of those games is that the dick is hard to hide.

I am more curious why people prefer small dicks. And this does not only apply to Futa games, I have seen Devs who made a somewhat successful game with a male MC who has a big dick suddenly making the dicks of their MCs smaller in future games because people complained.
Is it really just insecurity because a fictional person is well-endowed?
 
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Futa Characters usually have big dicks. A common stereotype of those games is that the dick is hard to hide.

I am more curious why people prefer small dicks. And this does not only apply to Futa games, I have seen Devs who made a somewhat successful game with a male MC who has a big dick suddenly making the dicks of their MCs smaller in future games because people complained.
Is it really just insecurity because a fictional person is well-endowed?
The key word is fiction!
This topic is long over and changes have already been made! Why poke a stick at a corpse!?
 
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