VN Ren'Py Package Perfect [v1.0 Ch.1] [Lewtopia]

[BroProHelpas]

I'm surely in the minority here - I really liked this update. Obviously I wish there was lewd content, but I thought the MC's inner monologue and the way her friends reacted was very honest and sweet. If development doesn't speed up... yeah, this game will come out in 2075 - but I'm hopeful it will improve.

storywise it was awesome

 

[Míster R]

After playing the update, I can say that at least there's character development. After six months, such a short update with not even a single masturbation scene would be a joke If there were no development either.

 

[Sneak Monkey]

Made a multi mod for this game

Features:

• Added option to rename the main character (Either when starting the game or you'll be asked only once on loading a save)
• Added an "unlock all" button to the gallery
• Edited the gallery so you can access it from the menu without having to go back to the main menu

Download: PIXELDRAIN MEGA

Seems to break the game. Loading saves or clicking past choosing a name at the beginning leads to errors

 

[Hotkillerz]

Made a multi mod for this game

Features:

• Added option to rename the main character (Either when starting the game or you'll be asked only once on loading a save)
• Added an "unlock all" button to the gallery
• Edited the gallery so you can access it from the menu without having to go back to the main menu

Download: PIXELDRAIN MEGA

something in this mod breaks the game as every convo when u start a new game is a error and u have to hit ignore.

 

[Nizzquizz]

Honestly .. the reaction was sweet, yes, and there was some character development, true, but all of that is still so mundane, I really don't think skipping through the entire thing would make you miss anything crucial.
At the very least some fan service with Hazel or Skye would have been nice, something, anything that leaves an impression..

 

[youraccount69]

PackagePerfect-CH1v1.0

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[Goofygooberhaha]

Seems like I have to let this one ferment for a little while longer

 

[fidgetspinner]

Hi way can't you Dev when you make a game with Futa/Tran . Even though there is no such thing as Futa . make their cocks look real . Not the size of a arm . put some people of a lot of games .just a thorough

This is a Futa game. Futa are as magical make believe creature as Unicorn or Dragon. Go complain about that elsewhere. Y'all are annoying as hell.

 

[Ms. Jade]

This story is so good! Worth the wait!

 

[Arius Zauber]

Based on the merit of this reply, it is safe to say that I am far better read than you lol.

"the main character, due to her complexes and fear of revealing herself, doesn't come across as very good"

lol wtf does this sentence even mean?

You can't see it, but there is a lot of complexity in these character relationships with some nice setup for future relationships and conflicts.

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Sure, I'd love more H-content, but for a first timer, this is pretty damn good, and the dev is one person. There's only so many ways to spin a wheel, and a lot of archetypes are covered here. We have moved past the totally mortified phase to the experimental phase, so it is easier and more organic to get spicy from here.

Bu yes, please keep insulting my ability to analyze the plot of a game. It is so well-founded and convincing.

"the main character, due to her complexes and fear of revealing herself, doesn't come across as very good" - For those especially gifted, I'll explain: this means that the main character doesn't really fit into the story or looks mediocre, and I can explain why.
Firstly, I have already seen similar characters in a number of games, Eruption Imminent for example MC there also constantly experiences emotional problems and self-doubt, so this is not something new.

The MC herself looks pathetic because of her complexes and lack of determination in many moments, not to mention the constant outbursts in many moments after which she runs away from her friends and then from her family. Personally, I would have enjoyed seeing a more mind stronger protagonist that will not run away from problems, but that's a matter of taste.

Apart from her appearance, the main character is not particularly distinctive, not her personality, nor some hidden power, nothing what would make her special in my eyes.


"You can't see it, but there is a lot of complexity in these character relationships with some nice setup for future relationships and conflicts." - I see this and I understand that this is all banality that I have already seen in many games and other works, there is nothing special about their personalities, they are all stereotypical.
"Bu yes, please keep insulting my ability to analyze the plot of a game. It is so well-founded and convincing." - It's funny, you were the first to insult my ability to analyze a plot, and now you're offended that I did the same.

 

[WzS]

Based on the merit of this reply, it is safe to say that I am far better read than you lol.

"the main character, due to her complexes and fear of revealing herself, doesn't come across as very good"

lol wtf does this sentence even mean?

You can't see it, but there is a lot of complexity in these character relationships with some nice setup for future relationships and conflicts.

Spoiler

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Sure, I'd love more H-content, but for a first timer, this is pretty damn good, and the dev is one person. There's only so many ways to spin a wheel, and a lot of archetypes are covered here. We have moved past the totally mortified phase to the experimental phase, so it is easier and more organic to get spicy from here.

Bu yes, please keep insulting my ability to analyze the plot of a game. It is so well-founded and convincing.

That's a cool analysis of the setups.

I also liked the bits of world building, which almost sets it up as Eruption Imminent but with males.

Spoiler: What we've got so far

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I'm not sure about the name though, it sounds like "famine"?

Spoiler: I asked AI about it

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I believe it serves as is, but maybe this could be explored more.

 

[Hsjsjjsjsj]

How old is grandma? She's one of the hottest characters in the game.

 

[VBoat]

That DONG is so big it should be another character in another VN!

 

[scrappy]

Seems to break the game. Loading saves or clicking past choosing a name at the beginning leads to errors

something in this mod breaks the game as every convo when u start a new game is a error and u have to hit ignore.

That didn't happen in my testing except when I installed the mod wrong. Do you have a "game" folder inside your Package Perfect/game folder? Then delete that one then drag and drop the game folder from the mod where the folders game/renpy/lib and the package perfect.exe are.

 

[Johan_0000]

That's a cool analysis of the setups.

I also liked the bits of world building, which almost sets it up as Eruption Imminent but with males.

Spoiler: What we've got so far

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I'm not sure about the name though, it sounds like "famine"?

Spoiler: I asked AI about it

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I believe it serves as is, but maybe this could be explored more.

"the main character, due to her complexes and fear of revealing herself, doesn't come across as very good" - For those especially gifted, I'll explain: this means that the main character doesn't really fit into the story or looks mediocre, and I can explain why.
Firstly, I have already seen similar characters in a number of games, Eruption Imminent for example MC there also constantly experiences emotional problems and self-doubt, so this is not something new.

The MC herself looks pathetic because of her complexes and lack of determination in many moments, not to mention the constant outbursts in many moments after which she runs away from her friends and then from her family. Personally, I would have enjoyed seeing a more mind stronger protagonist that will not run away from problems, but that's a matter of taste.

Apart from her appearance, the main character is not particularly distinctive, not her personality, nor some hidden power, nothing what would make her special in my eyes.


"You can't see it, but there is a lot of complexity in these character relationships with some nice setup for future relationships and conflicts." - I see this and I understand that this is all banality that I have already seen in many games and other works, there is nothing special about their personalities, they are all stereotypical.
"Bu yes, please keep insulting my ability to analyze the plot of a game. It is so well-founded and convincing." - It's funny, you were the first to insult my ability to analyze a plot, and now you're offended that I did the same.

Spoiler: WHy the MC appeared so frustrating/lack of real choices/no need it to make a big announcement

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Spoiler: Femine are supposed to be horny? really didn't seem that way to me. Atleast MC doesn't seem THAT horny

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Spoiler: Concerns I have for the father, I rly hope I'm wrong

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I rly hope you consider making some changes and GL to you dev/s






THX

 

[Baba junior]

top quality game with futa mc is a new but the real question is she really futa or trans ?

 

[Johan_0000]

First post on the board, and you've just now discovered the concept of Trans, congratulations. If you're not a fan, there's plenty of other kinks around.

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Don't call them trans. Futa and trans are 2 different things, you can call them herma or futas but trans is a different thing althogether




THX

 

[Johan_0000]

That didn't happen in my testing except when I installed the mod wrong. Do you have a "game" folder inside your Package Perfect/game folder? Then delete that one then drag and drop the game folder from the mod where the folders game/renpy/lib and the package perfect.exe are.

Played with your mod didn't break anything. Just needed to start a new game. since the game ain't that big skipping throuh most of it ain't difficult yet.
It does break if they are using something like zlzk mods though.




THX

 

[Johan_0000]

top quality game with futa mc is a new but the real question is she really futa or trans ?

Ayo, now that you mention we never saw if she had a pu$$y. Oh man I rly hope it's a futa dude...





THX

 

[Zorlond]

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Don't call them trans. Futa and trans are 2 different things, you can call them herma or futas but trans is a different thing althogether




THX

MC in this game is not futa. Dev has very specifically stated that they are shemale. I will take the dev's word over yours.

FYI, Futanari have both male and female reproductive organs.