VN Ren'Py Pale Carnations [Ch.4 Up.5 Public] [Mutt & Jeff]

Ottoeight · Nov 10, 2023

se20299 said:
Idk man, I just think it'd be pretty lame if it turned out to be a red herring after so much teasing, especially since her dislike of Chuck at the beginning of the game is very weird and unfounded, given his "friendly uncle" public persona and her friendship with Ian, which means she most likely met him under different circumstances during her porno years, perhaps maybe falling victim to Chuck's perversions. But she can't tell Edwin any of that, outside of vague warnings.

Or maybe that's just wishful thinking on my part, because I want them to do more with Vicky aside from Edwin's PTSD flashbacks and the occasional cameo.

The answer to your question about Victoria disliking Chuck comes from Victoria herself:

after exhbition week 2 ends, choose to crash at your mom's. Next morning you will ask her why she doesn't like Chuck and she will answer you.

And... as she says:

Just leave Victoria alone, will you?

DirtyMario · Nov 10, 2023

Ottoeight said:
Someone who claims that prostitutes having sex in a brothel is ntr just entered my ignore list. I think I won't miss his intelligent, poignant and intense posts.

With 6 posts in 2.5 years you probably won't miss that much in the future honestly.

Jungles70 · Nov 10, 2023

Maxmillon said:
This is full of NTR scene and not avoidable

Gamer1178 · Nov 11, 2023

is there compressed version?

Takkatakka · Nov 11, 2023

Gamer1178 said:
is there compressed version?

https://f95zone.to/threads/pale-carnations-ch-4-update-3-mutt-jeff.50281/post-11569488

The Senior Perv · Nov 11, 2023

Maxmillon said:
This is full of NTR scene and not avoidable

Lame post

mnfalo · Nov 11, 2023

Hi guys, How many scenes are there with Kathleen so far? I just unlocked the only one where she is in the white lingerie

Ottoeight · Nov 11, 2023

Well, guys, I was bored...

so I wrote a Pale Carnations story timeline, day by day and scene by scene.

What's the point with it? it tells everything that happens, when it happens: so, read it only after you finished playing the game. It might help you as a reminder when you're not sure about some plot events (when they exactly happen and why). It might help when you play a new gameplay/play a new update after a while, I think.

Well, use it as you like it, but remember: it spoils almost everything.

edit:

I mentioned choices ONLY when they trigger different scenes (different dialogues don't count).
I didn't mention the conditions you need to be on a girl's path because this is NOT a walkthrough.

This is a story outline with chronology.

So, you're supposed to throughly play the game before reading this outline. Check Mr Bubu's walkthrough if you need one.

edit again: I edited and updated the pdf after ename144's remarks.

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ename144 · Nov 11, 2023

Ottoeight said:
Well, guys, I was bored...

so I wrote a Pale Carnations story timeline, day by day and scene by scene.

What's the point with it? it tells everything that happens, when it happens: so, read it only after you finished playing the game. It might help you as a reminder when you're not sure about some plot events (when they exactly happen and why). It might help when you play a new gameplay/play a new update after a while, I think.

Well, use it as you like it, but remember: it spoils almost everything.

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Very interesting read, thanks for doing that! I did have a few quibbles, though.

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Takkatakka · Nov 11, 2023

ename144 said:
Very interesting read, thanks for doing that! I did have a few quibbles, though.

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Ottoeight · Nov 11, 2023

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Thanks for the feedback!

On june 9/10: yes, you need to accept the deal/tell her you're doing it for free, too (Takkatakka is right).

I mention choices ONLY when they trigger different scenes (different dialogues don't count).

On Veronica: ~~that's why I skipped the choices you mention - because they don't immediately trigger different scenes.~~ you're right

On Ian: the choice doesn't trigger a different scene in that moment. The difference is mentioned when you call him at night (being with Alice or Amber).

I didn't mention the conditions you need to be on a girl's path because this is NOT a walkthrough.

This is a story outline with chronology.

You're supposed to throughly play the game before reading this outline. Check Mr Bubu's walkthrough if you need one.

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edit: I edited the guide after your remarks

leogg · Nov 12, 2023

DirtyMario said:
With 6 posts in 2.5 years you probably won't miss that much in the future honestly.

Ah come on. I average just above one comment a year and I'm not half his bad.

Oh, I get it. You meant he won't post anything really.

Ungawa · Nov 12, 2023

Scene - Veronica's Gym

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*sweat on Mina, utter exhaustion on face*

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Can't hate the playa, can't hate the game...

helo138 · Nov 12, 2023

mnfalo said:
Hi guys, How many scenes are there with Kathleen so far? I just unlocked the only one where she is in the white lingerie

Currently only this one going all the way. There are further (lewd) scenes involving her, but always splitting the focus with other girls.
I myself am suffering from Kathy withdrawal symptoms, hopefully the update after the next one will alleviate my pain.

DirtyMario · Nov 12, 2023

Ungawa said:
Scene - Veronica's Gym

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Can't hate the playa, can't hate the game...

God I hate that you made me click 13 times expecting bad fanfic, and then it really was bad fanfic

Ottoeight · Nov 12, 2023

helo138 said:
Currently only this one going all the way. There are further (lewd) scenes involving her, but always splitting the focus with other girls.
I myself am suffering from Kathy withdrawal symptoms, hopefully the update after the next one will alleviate my pain.

For my part, the Old Mad Bitch must rot in hell.

And remember guys, if you help Harper down, she promises you "a reward"

. She will remind you her promise when you meet her in the hall the day before the 2nd exhibition night.

So, I think our favourite Authors will reward us with Harper in a future update.

DirtyMario · Nov 12, 2023

Ottoeight said:
For my part, the Old Mad Bitch must rot in hell.

And remember guys, if you help Harper down, she promises you "a reward" . She will remind you her promise when you meet her in the hall the day before the 2nd exhibition night.

So, I think our favourite Authors will reward us with Harper in a future update.

Aaaaand I can't accept that because I'm Hana exclusive. Existence is hard sometimes.

Ungawa · Nov 12, 2023

DirtyMario said:
God I hate that you made me click 13 times expecting bad fanfic, and then it really was bad fanfic

... Damn, why you hit TD like that... I thought the scene was hot...

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lkjhgfdfghjkl · Nov 12, 2023

helo138 said:
There are further (lewd) scenes involving her, but always splitting the focus with other girls.

The only one being split was Veronica by a giant strap-on.

Kathleen's erotic catalog is fairly substantial if you can get over the fact that Edwin is ill-suited to lezdom content. Not even sure if you can make the most out of their characters 1on1

helo138 · Nov 12, 2023

lkjhgfdfghjkl said:
The only one being split was Veronica by a giant strap-on.

Kathleen's erotic catalog is fairly substantial if you can get over the fact that Edwin is ill-suited to lezdom content. Not even sure if you can make the most out of their characters 1on1

You may be right, that's why I am looking forward to the next update with the suitcase. At some point, the "main" story around club politics should take off, at this point the dynamic between MC and Kathleen may change as well, hopefully depending on our choices.

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