VN Ren'Py Pale Carnations [Ch.4 Up.5 Public] [Mutt & Jeff]

[DirtyMario]

Spoiler: How dare they bring in a new girl at this critical point in time?

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[Ass prefer]

Spoiler: How dare they bring in a new girl at this critical point in time?

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And why are her boobs hanging she doesn't look like a milf?

 

[Ottoeight]

Spoiler: How dare they bring in a new girl at this critical point in time?

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She's not a new girl. We've already had a flashback with her when Edwin thinks about her for a moment.

 

[DirtyMario]

She's not a new girl. We've already had a flashback with her when Edwin thinks about her for a moment.

A flashback is one thing.
Second flashback means it's getting serious.

 

[DarkLords00]

A flashback is one thing.
Second flashback means it's getting serious.

I wouldn't get my hopes up too much, doubt putting Edwin's Ex back in the picture would help the story in any way shape or form but then again I'm not the writer her so what do I know.

Honestly as far as the Mallow (I think this was her name) and Edwin previous relationship goes, the only thing I'm curious about is how it ended, especially if it was because of something like her catching Edwin in the middle of one of his "therapy" sessions with his mother previous "work".
That would be hilarious

 

[broxitar]

I have to wonder. The summer exhibition threatened to have some really twisted stuff in store. And given where it started, with what Veronica was forced to do in her punishment, I believe it. How far is it going to go?

Since these are all warped, rich assholes who get a kick out of seeing women humiliated, used, and degraded sexually, is there bestiality in the exhibition's future? I just...I can't help but imagine "The Worst Thing" for the finale of the exhibition, where there's a challenge where the girls have to let themselves be fucked by a dog or a horse or something. Or (and I'm also horrified this thought occurred to me) maybe a thing involving animal semen, bringing things back around to what Veronica had to endure in the prologue. I don't imagine the dev crossing into scatological territory, and I pray he doesn't. Short of that, if there's anything certain to leave a lasting mark on these women (which seems the goal of the men who sponsored them, to be honest), I imagine it's having to lower themselves to be fucked by an animal in front of an audience.

Has the dev mentioned anything on that score?

 

[Ottoeight]

I have to wonder. The summer exhibition threatened to have some really twisted stuff in store. And given where it started, with what Veronica was forced to do in her punishment, I believe it. How far is it going to go?

Since these are all warped, rich assholes who get a kick out of seeing women humiliated, used, and degraded sexually, is there bestiality in the exhibition's future? I can just imagine the finale of the exhibition having a challenge where the girls have to let themselves be fucked by a dog or a horse or something. Or maybe an extra, final final challenge where they're forced to drink animal semen, bringing things back around to what Veronica had to endure in the prologue. I don't imagine the dev crossing into scatological territory, nor do I want him to. Short of that, if there's anything certain to leave a lasting mark on these women (which seems the goal of the men who sponsored them, to be honest), I imagine it's having to lower themselves to be fucked by an animal in front of an audience.

Has the dev mentioned anything on that score?

You only wondered because you wish it happens.

First, you forgot that - as you saw with the usb video in the prologue - the exhibition ends with the patrons gangbanging the Carnations. I don't think our esteemed club members would want to be animals' sloppy seconds.

Secondly, I think that bestiality content would jeopardize this game on Patreon. They would shut it down.

 

[broxitar]

You only wondered because you wish it happens.

First, you forgot that - as you saw with the usb video in the prologue - the exhibition ends with the patrons gangbanging the Carnations. I don't think our esteemed club members would want to be animals' sloppy seconds.

Secondly, I think that bestiality content would jeopardize this game on Patreon. They would shut it down.

Okay. I wasn't aware that the usb video in the prologue was of that specific club, just of some porn his mom ended up doing. Still, a gangbang of the girls we've come to love by all the men we've come to loathe is pretty nauseating.

 

[lustforsex]

I wouldn't get my hopes up too much, doubt putting Edwin's Ex back in the picture would help the story in any way shape or form but then again I'm not the writer her so what do I know.

Honestly as far as the Mallow (I think this was her name) and Edwin previous relationship goes, the only thing I'm curious about is how it ended, especially if it was because of something like her catching Edwin in the middle of one of his "therapy" sessions with his mother previous "work".
That would be hilarious

Apparently Ian "helped" him end his relationship with Marlow.
And it seems that for Edwin this relationship meant a lot.

Spoiler: Thanks Ian

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[ename144]

First, you forgot that - as you saw with the usb video in the prologue - the exhibition ends with the patrons gangbanging the Carnations. I don't think our esteemed club members would want to be animals' sloppy seconds.

Secondly, I think that bestiality content would jeopardize this game on Patreon. They would shut it down.

The first part isn't correct. The USB video from the prologue shows week three of a previous exhibition, and the theme of that week ("Public Use") is different than this year's theme ("Hell Week"). The events vary from year to year.

The second part is correct, so I doubt we'll see any bestiality. And frankly I think Kathleen can come up with other, more tailored techniques to achieve all the humiliation she needs.

 

[Ottoeight]

Okay. I wasn't aware that the usb video in the prologue was of that specific club, just of some porn his mom ended up doing. Still, a gangbang of the girls we've come to love by all the men we've come to loathe is pretty nauseating.

Well, ain't this what English folks call "clutching at straws"...

 

[Ottoeight]

The first part isn't correct. The USB video from the prologue shows week three of a previous exhibition, and the theme of that week ("Public Use") is different than this year's theme ("Hell Week"). The events vary from year to year.

Nope. The gangbang ends and Kathleen announces the winner, so that was the final event.

 

[broxitar]

Well, ain't this what English folks call "clutching at straws"...

I don't know what you mean by that. Fact: I wasn't aware the usb was what you said. Comment: Seeing the contestants get gangbanged by rich men, including their execrable sponsors, would be pretty bad on its own, now that I think about it. Thanks for correcting me. I wasn't grasping at anything.

 

[Simpgor]

I wouldn't get my hopes up too much, doubt putting Edwin's Ex back in the picture would help the story in any way shape or form but then again I'm not the writer her so what do I know.

Honestly as far as the Mallow (I think this was her name) and Edwin previous relationship goes, the only thing I'm curious about is how it ended, especially if it was because of something like her catching Edwin in the middle of one of his "therapy" sessions with his mother previous "work".
That would be hilarious

I agree that bringing her in this late would be kind of "out of left field" but them meeting back up having a discussion, maybe even a scene could feel "organic", Considering how ready Edwin was to tell Hana his mom also did porn i could see an argument that he wanted to get "ahead" of the issue and not be randomly caught watching it (like he might have theoretically)

I have to wonder. The summer exhibition threatened to have some really twisted stuff in store. And given where it started, with what Veronica was forced to do in her punishment, I believe it. How far is it going to go?

Since these are all warped, rich assholes who get a kick out of seeing women humiliated, used, and degraded sexually, is there bestiality in the exhibition's future? I just...I can't help but imagine "The Worst Thing" for the finale of the exhibition, where there's a challenge where the girls have to let themselves be fucked by a dog or a horse or something. Or (and I'm also horrified this thought occurred to me) maybe a thing involving animal semen, bringing things back around to what Veronica had to endure in the prologue. I don't imagine the dev crossing into scatological territory, and I pray he doesn't. Short of that, if there's anything certain to leave a lasting mark on these women (which seems the goal of the men who sponsored them, to be honest), I imagine it's having to lower themselves to be fucked by an animal in front of an audience.

Has the dev mentioned anything on that score?

Like others have said you gotta skate some pretty fine lines on pateron iirc most beast stuff is either not on there, small enough to avoid detection, or uses the classic "unaffiliated" patch. However Im a firm believer that this shows going to get pretty fucked at least during felicas part.... Kathleen knows that she cant beat felica into being a "whore" like vero and rose as is shown by her lasting the entire time on the vibrating thing during the last show, we know that kathleen is having a club member buy a piece of artwork that is very emotionally important to felicia.... combined with the fact that we still (iirc) havent gotten a check for the felica confidence variable I would not be suprised if felica has a "make it or break it" (so long as the overall storyline is maintained) type moments....

also her husband is there but IMO theres no drama or supsesne there as soon as he can tell its his obviously hot ass wife the jig is up and he is removed as something contributing to the idea of "hell week" which speaking of how do you think that will manifest? just devil coustumes? will vero have to sit in a tank full of spiders? what about rose? The name "hell week" combined with the lack of hints weve been given so far and the idea of a narrative needing to get progressivley "more" has me super worried about this week even if no animals are invovled

 

[ename144]

Nope. The gangbang ends and Kathleen announces the winner, so that was the final event.

Kathleen announces a winner every week, that doesn't mean it's the end of the entire Summer Exhibition.

 

[broxitar]

I agree that bringing her in this late would be kind of "out of left field" but them meeting back up having a discussion, maybe even a scene could feel "organic", Considering how ready Edwin was to tell Hana his mom also did porn i could see an argument that he wanted to get "ahead" of the issue and not be randomly caught watching it (like he might have theoretically)



Like others have said you gotta skate some pretty fine lines on pateron iirc most beast stuff is either not on there, small enough to avoid detection, or uses the classic "unaffiliated" patch. However Im a firm believer that this shows going to get pretty fucked at least during felicas part.... Kathleen knows that she cant beat felica into being a "whore" like vero and rose as is shown by her lasting the entire time on the vibrating thing during the last show, we know that kathleen is having a club member buy a piece of artwork that is very emotionally important to felicia.... combined with the fact that we still (iirc) havent gotten a check for the felica confidence variable I would not be suprised if felica has a "make it or break it" (so long as the overall storyline is maintained) type moments....

also her husband is there but IMO theres no drama or supsesne there as soon as he can tell its his obviously hot ass wife the jig is up and he is removed as something contributing to the idea of "hell week" which speaking of how do you think that will manifest? just devil coustumes? will vero have to sit in a tank full of spiders? what about rose? The name "hell week" combined with the lack of hints weve been given so far and the idea of a narrative needing to get progressivley "more" has me super worried about this week even if no animals are invovled

That's comforting to hear. Or at least as comforting as it can be. I didn't ask because I want to see bestiality stuff. Just tried to imagine what twisted thing Kathleen could come up with, and given her obvious sadism, lack of empathy, and that promise to let the MC live out "any twisted fantasy he could dream of"...well, you see where my thinking went. Exactly like you said, the narrative needing to get progressively "more" after where it started has me super worried.

Having Veronica sit in a tank full of spiders made me ill just typing it. I never even considered that, and I'm pretty sure I'd lose my fucking mind. I think Hell Week is going to manifest as extreme, dangerous, revolting stuff, like college hazing. What Kathleen might do to sexualize that as a finale scares me.

 

[Simpgor]

That's comforting to hear. Or at least as comforting as it can be. I didn't ask because I want to see bestiality stuff. Just tried to imagine what twisted thing Kathleen could come up with, and given her obvious sadism, lack of empathy, and that promise to let the MC live out "any twisted fantasy he could dream of"...well, you see where my thinking went. Exactly like you said, the narrative needing to get progressively "more" after where it started has me super worried.

Having Veronica sit in a tank full of spiders made me ill just typing it. I never even considered that, and I'm pretty sure I'd lose my fucking mind. I think Hell Week is going to manifest as extreme, dangerous, revolting stuff, like college hazing. What Kathleen might do to sexualize that as a finale scares me.

Fun fact i literally stole that idea from an episode of fear factor

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sfw obviously lol

Felicia specifically mentions the last week(?) being similar to how she was hazed in college doesn't she? as far as it being a sybian on stage so "college hazing" while fitting the name perfectly doesnt sound like it would go far enough for kathleen, imo it also doesnt explain why kathleen needed to jump through hoops for the painting ie sending someone to convince the club guy to buy the painting instead of convincing him herself, or just outright buying it herself....honestly im glad the artist seems so shy/reserved otherwise i could see kathleen convincing her to hand deliver it to the club during the show

 

[Ottoeight]

I don't know what you mean by that. Fact: I wasn't aware the usb was what you said. Comment: Seeing the contestants get gangbanged by rich men, including their execrable sponsors, would be pretty bad on its own, now that I think about it. Thanks for correcting me. I wasn't grasping at anything.

Ooops, I got the wrong impression that you were advocating for bestiality content in the story.

Anyway, seeing Felicia's hubby entering the club is a hint of what might happen at the next exhibition.

 

[Ottoeight]

The first part isn't correct. The USB video from the prologue shows week three of a previous exhibition, and the theme of that week ("Public Use") is different than this year's theme ("Hell Week"). The events vary from year to year.

Yeah, you're right: it tells exhibition 3 - 2017 session. Anyway, I don't think the club patrons would like that kind of "show", unless it's "their kink", and it isn't.

 

[Simpgor]

Yeah, you're right: it tells exhibition 3 - 2017 session. Anyway, I don't think the club patrons would like that kind of "show", unless it's "their kink", and it isn't.

they liked it the first time judging by the tape also pretty sure that the patrons haven't gone through sweeping changes since then, i feel like most patrons would love to have a go at at least one of the carnations (at least 1 for each). Anybody wanting to cuck Elias would love to freely use Felicia while he "forced to watch" lest he run away like a "lil cuck bitch", Samson would love to freely use vero and clearly can get past other people (edwin) fucking her, uh.... maybe the tit guy for rose? im sure someone would end up with her.

I agree with the idea that we are unlikey to see any free use in the same way we saw on the tape though