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Here’s hoping it’s the start of a proper romance path with herNo, just kissing/fondling.
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Here’s hoping it’s the start of a proper romance path with herNo, just kissing/fondling.
So, you hope this game gets completed in 2040, I guess.Here’s hoping it’s the start of a proper romance path with her
With Lucy? I don't think that's ever going to happen, just enjoy whatever scenes we get.Here’s hoping it’s the start of a proper romance path with her
AND still some of you guys push and ask for more side routes and whole paths involving side characters!?!
They were talking about Kathleen, who is not a side character.With Lucy? I don't think that's ever going to happen, just enjoy whatever scenes we get.
In terms of romance she's a side girl, on par with Sophia. There are 5 main girlsThey were talking about Kathleen, who is not a side character.
Sophia doesn't have her own gallery page. Kathleen does.In terms of romance she's a side girl, on par with Sophia. There are 5 main girls
Is she not? She very much looks like a Mg to me. Even if she is not use as a poster girl like the other 5 and is a bit peculiar and unique as LI in an Avns.In terms of romance she's a side girl, on par with Sophia. There are 5 main girls
And a stats page in the menu with the other MGs.Sophia doesn't have her own gallery page. Kathleen does.
I'm sure she will get it eventuallySophia doesn't have her own gallery page. Kathleen does.
She has been demoted. She didn't appear on the lastIs she not? She very much looks like a Mg to me. Even if she is not use as a poster girl like the other 5 and is a bit peculiar and unique as LI in an Avns.
Who Katheleen?Hopefully one of the devs could give us some clarification
Would be a shame if she is only considered a side girl
Just a small clarification, it doesn't strictly need to be kissing. Edwin who chose to molest Lucy can have the scene with her in the latest update, too.For Lucy, you need to have kissed her at Felicia's Art Exhibition date
Yea I'm sorry but I disagree with this, I feel like in this situation Edwin would take some time to think before acting, he had just woken up, it makes sense he would at least do his morning routine first, also the text chat not only took probably less than 5-15 minutes but it's also better for the pacing of the update imo, it's a lighthearted moment of calm, he chats with Veronica and it also helps him make up his mind on what he has to do.exactly
i love veronica and liked that fact that they're chatting regularly sharing things about eachother
on it's own it's a good scene nothing to complain about
but the episode began with edwin wondering about his mother
sure a few minutes of early morning self reflection alone is great
but chatting with a girl when he should be with his mother felt underwhelming
let's walk through the sequence of eventsYea I'm sorry but I disagree with this, I feel like in this situation Edwin would take some time to think before acting, he had just woken up, it makes sense he would at least do his morning routine first, also the text chat not only took probably less than 5-15 minutes but it's also better for the pacing of the update imo, it's a lighthearted moment of calm, he chats with Veronica and it also helps him make up his mind on what he has to do.
The Sophia visit is fine too, there would be no other moment in the update to fit this scene, and again, it's not like it was too long either, so I don't see the issue. This is ofc just my opinion.
You are aware a good portion of what you typed should be using "if" not "when" right? Because they are player choice? Ian does not even have to be there and you are given 2 choices between this and the last update (not telling him she did porn, not inviting him to the morning discussion iirc) with that in mind does the current structure make sense?the content in both are the same yet the emotional depth is very different
TrueYou are aware a good portion of what you typed should be using "if" not "when" right? Because they are player choice? Ian does not even have to be there and you are given 2 choices between this and the last update (not telling him she did porn, not inviting him to the morning discussion iirc) with that in mind does the current structure make sense?
The one thing I'll push back on here is that as a person with ADHD (I don't know that Edwin has it, necessarily, but I do) I can absolutely 100000% confirm that I will start doomscrolling or replying to Discord messages or launch a stupid phone game even while part of my brain is actively screaming THIS IS STUPID DON'T DO IT YOU HAVE SHIT TO DO and the rest of my dopamine-starved neurospicy brain replies "yeah whatever I'll do my shit later."let's walk through the sequence of events
after going through a LOT the night before the MC (Edwin) wakes up having a nice dream about his father and what does he do after a bit of morning self reflection ?
he checks his phone and he sees that he got a text message from ronnie checking in if he is ok after she saw him leave early the day before
this is great stuff but you will notice something - edwin doesn't immediately text back ronnie
instead he is concerned about his mother and the aftermath of last nights events
he promptly gives his mother a call and she doesn't pick it up
so far so good
the flow of events matches something someone would do in that situation
but then things begin to turn almost immediately
instead of calling Ian next like he did with his mother (the most logical outcome)
he instead starts doom scrolling in his phone and starts reading film reviews
i know that we all react differently in such stressful situations and maybe he needed to spend some time doing something "mundane" to keep his mind off from last nights events
and only then he starts texting ronnie and after that he finally decides to call ian and ask for his help consoling his mother
see now do you get what i mean?
somethings always take a higher priority over other things especially when it's already well established by now much edwin loves his mother
so i found it weird and frustrating that he gives up and starts doom scrolling after Vicky didn't pick up the phone and only to finally realise what he meant to do and then he asks for ians help
I loved that Veronica was the only LI who not only noticed edwin leaving early but also cared enough to check up on him
all of this is great but he spends time unnecessarily doomscrooling film reviews about some D grade film when he has better things to do
i know that sometimes when you're going through a lot even having a mundane conversation with someone you like/love can lift up the mood
again from a plotline PoV there is nothing wrong with the texting scene
plus Ronnie knows about Edwins mother did some sort of sex work (he told her during their date) so it would have been ok even if he had told Ronnie what's happening with him and his mother
so let's go through these events again but let's rearrange the chronological sequence of events a bit different and see which one of them gives you that emotional depth
Edwin wakes up after having a dream about his father, checks his phone sees that he has a message from ronnie
he ignores it (for now) , tries calling his mother first
she doesn't pick the call so he immediately checks up on ian
ians agrees agrees with edwin to meet Vicky says he will be there in a few minutes to pick him up (remember edwin still can't drive) while waiting he texts Ronnie ,maybe even tells her all about and then sophie ends up at his door unannounced says she wants to apologise again edwin here is in a bit of hurry but ian isn't still here so he hears her out then sends her away ASAP and then both Ian and edwin make it to their mother house and rest of the events transpires as it is
see the difference between both versions?
the content in both are the same yet the emotional depth is very different