Listen, you've been part of part of the discussions in this thread for a long time now and I take what you said for what it is: honest criticism. I appreciate that, even if I push back partly out of defensiveness and partly to process the criticism leveled. I look forward to releases because I enjoy seeing the thread active again and, to be honest, that includes this kind of back and forth - but I get it's impossible to have a conversation when 4 or 5 people are quoting you.
Still, thank you for taking the time to voice your thoughts. It wasn't merely just "update small" or "I'm disappointed", there was consideration behind them.
As for my Hana defense, I was hoping her (rapid) acceptance of the place would portend what's to come. Stuff like quickly coming around on the Kimber thing, her becoming more friendly with August, and even her not outright rejecting Kat. Then there's the exhibition, of which is the big TBD.
To go back to an earlier suggestion you made, we actually did consider having Edwin and Hana interrupted during the photo shoot, but I shelved that complication. So, good instincts, but the way I saw it, it amounted to a "get out of here" or an "oops, sorry" as it's not like any of the patrons would have anything on Hana or Edwin for fucking around - or any reason to make a big deal out of it. It is, perhaps, a wasted opportunity for a small character moment though.