VN Ren'Py Pale Carnations [Ch.4 Up.6 Public] [Mutt & Jeff]

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I hate this whole fucking f95zone and all you perverts for exposing me to so much incest that i'm starting to get into it and was hoping something would happen with the mother, maybe ending up at the club too.

 

[Vinecreek]

Mac version please

 

[ioriya]

A fantastic update done. I'm a fan of pretty much all of the girls so far. My least favorite at the moment is probably Veronica, but there is still a certain appeal to her.

The plotline I'm probably looking to most forward to is NTR'ing Killian and getting with Mina. In the first release Killian was like, kind of an asshole sure, but in this update with him drunkenly stumbling into your apartment with a random girl shows that he's actively cheating on her. With that fact in place I'm all for pursuing Mina lol. Plus the slow burn of it all is fun.

Of the three carnations I lean more towards Rosalind. I think it's because she has the most sympathetic angle. Felicia seems like fun I guess, but her motivation being purely for pleasure seems like she's not even interested in "winning" so it feels like there's no real reason to care about how she ends up doing in the games at the moment.

One of the minor details that seemed skipped over that has me curious is how Killian seems to obviously have a crush on MC's mom, but also doesn't seem aware of the fact that she did porn. I would think this will end up being revealed at some point so I'm curious as to what the consequences of that will be.

It was nice to see Lucy again. Even if she doesn't end up being part of the main cast I hope she still pops up for the MC to have fun with.

This is probably just me, but I kinda wish there was a bit more to the sex scenes. Like if they were a bit longer or involved more poses and such in each encounter. The Gonzo reward was probably the most actual action the MC got and it felt like it kind of glossed over the scene after the injection. Like with Rosalind it was fine that the MC ate her out until she came, but then it felt like there was more effort put into that part of the scene compared to when he actually has sex with her.

Our birthday is coming up so you know we may have something happening. Mina was kind of excited about learning the number.

 

[Naxos]

A fantastic update done. I'm a fan of pretty much all of the girls so far. My least favorite at the moment is probably Veronica, but there is still a certain appeal to her.

The plotline I'm probably looking to most forward to is NTR'ing Killian and getting with Mina. In the first release Killian was like, kind of an asshole sure, but in this update with him drunkenly stumbling into your apartment with a random girl shows that he's actively cheating on her. With that fact in place I'm all for pursuing Mina lol. Plus the slow burn of it all is fun.

Of the three carnations I lean more towards Rosalind. I think it's because she has the most sympathetic angle. Felicia seems like fun I guess, but her motivation being purely for pleasure seems like she's not even interested in "winning" so it feels like there's no real reason to care about how she ends up doing in the games at the moment.

One of the minor details that seemed skipped over that has me curious is how Killian seems to obviously have a crush on MC's mom, but also doesn't seem aware of the fact that she did porn. I would think this will end up being revealed at some point so I'm curious as to what the consequences of that will be.

It was nice to see Lucy again. Even if she doesn't end up being part of the main cast I hope she still pops up for the MC to have fun with.

This is probably just me, but I kinda wish there was a bit more to the sex scenes. Like if they were a bit longer or involved more poses and such in each encounter. The Gonzo reward was probably the most actual action the MC got and it felt like it kind of glossed over the scene after the injection. Like with Rosalind it was fine that the MC ate her out until she came, but then it felt like there was more effort put into that part of the scene compared to when he actually has sex with her.

I'm feel the same on a lot of that. Though my least favourite would be some of the "minor" characters, namely the band chick, Harper and Hanna. Mainly because tats are a turn off for me.

I really hope nothing happens with Killian and the Mom, of if something does, the MC goes alpha on him and kicks the crap out him, but I'd prefer her to shoot him down.

When i think of the 3 carnations and that kill/fuck/marry game, I'm surprised at my choices. Veronica is what got me interested in the game, Felica kept me playing it, but if had to choose it would be kill Veronica, fuck Felicia and marry Rose.

Seeing Lucy in the profiles I had a feeling we were not done with her, and I was expecting her to be wildcard entry for the show, but I'm glad she's in as club girl.

 

[Destriss]

Note:This choice will fail if you obtained only [RosaTakeAdv], & NOT[RosaTAApology]

I have both , but i cant go coffee with Rosalind , normal ?

 

[Naxos]

Note:This choice will fail if you obtained only [RosaTakeAdv], & NOT[RosaTAApology]

I have both , but i cant go coffee with Rosalind , normal ?

No, if you took advantage and apologized you should be able to go.
If you didn't apologize it you won't be able to go.

 

[Destriss]

No, if you took advantage and apologized you should be able to go.
If you didn't apologize it you won't be able to go.

Its weird , i take advantage and i apologize but nothing , i try again

 

[Destriss]

I think i take another save without the good choice , now is good

 

[Ninro]

Loved veronica thank you for this game

 

[Skylaroo]

It feels weird for me to describe Pale Carnations as "most beautifully written", but I really have no better choice. It's the most suitable way to describe the game. The level of care is amazing, and I can't stop admiring how well the characters are written.

As the MC, I feel so invested into these characters. I want to give Mina a much better treatment than what she got from Killian. I want to help Hana with her family issue. I want to understand Felicia's struggle despite being married to a very successful person. Heck, I want to help the gym to succeed too! Help people stay healthy AND make lots of money while doing it!

Then there's also the realistic characterization of the lesser NPCs that I appreciate. Someone like Lucy who basically has no other option left. Someone like Harper who doesn't hate MC but doesn't like him either because he's "management". Someone like Hana's dad who can't bring himself to openly support her but probably still has a father's concern. And so on.

Pale Carnations is just a game that is most beautifully written.

 

[ShadedWilderness]

Beautifully written and deliciously debauched. Magnifico.

 

[whoishe79]

It's difficult to add something unique after so many repetitive and, at the same time, of course very positive reviews. Initially, I've decided to check this game because of Veronica renders and now, I have so many more reasons to do it.

I am not really into big time debaucheries or old hags desperately trying to stay attractive. I also have limited interest in sex business and even lower in heavily tattoed girls. Yet, so far this game despite consisting all these elements, is nothing short of fantastic entertainment for me, with great writing, storyline pacing, attention to details and renders. Hope it will continue for a long time (with of course as short breaks between episodes as humanly possible).

Two really, really minor things:
1) MC is quite a clean-cut guy. From my experience and perspective, it's really rare to see this kind of guy dating (in romance sense) heavily tattoed girl like Hana. I know we are here in 'fiction' business, but psychology and personal relationships seem to be treated seriously in this game, so potential romance/dating/serious relationship between them IMO will seem very off.

2) Apology if previously mentioned as I didn't read all the recent posts. I think there's a mistake with dialogue visible on Image I posted below, text is spoken by August and not MC (Wojtek in my case) when visiting club for Hana's band performance.

 

[Ooh]

It's difficult to add something unique after so many repetitive and, at the same time, of course very positive reviews. Initially, I've decided to check this game because of Veronica renders and now...

I'll piggyback off of this notion and just sound repetitive. GREAT GAME. I even wrote a rare "before completion" review. If this dev updates on a regular basis this will be the best Kink game on this site. Period. I love the game Corruption, have played Tyrant, Maxs Life, etc but where this game stands out is the realistic dialogue that doesnt sound like everyone is 12 years old.

My only gripe is the forced NTR. Mainly because I want the option to skip it. Having to watch the Amazon swallow jizz was not my cup of tee and I hate pressing CTRL on this game because they Dev has fit SO much awesome scenes into the game you'll sneeze and miss one. Only NTR I prefer is actually doing the cucking. One more thing, please lets us bring the Mom out of retirement!!!! No NTR, just a livestream for the world to see us giving her the best D she ever had.

 

[Skylaroo]

1) MC is quite a clean-cut guy. From my experience and perspective, it's really rare to see this kind of guy dating (in romance sense) heavily tattoed girl like Hana. I know we are here in 'fiction' business, but psychology and personal relationships seem to be treated seriously in this game, so potential romance/dating/serious relationship between them IMO will seem very off.

No offense, but if you've already acknowledged that it's really rare, it also means that it's definitely possible and it does happen. So I don't see why it would make the relationship seem very off. Plus, if you think that it's very off and it's that big of a deal for you, then you always have the option to not date Hana. This is not an attack on you, but this is about how deep you care about the MC and the NPCs. If you're in so deep that you (as the MC) feel that a relationship between clean-cut MC and heavily-tattooed Hana feels off, you should steer the MC to a relationship that would feel more suitable. That's the purpose of having multiple love interests.

My only gripe is the forced NTR. Mainly because I want the option to skip it.

Usually, I'm not a big fan of NTR myself (similarly with BDSM, porn star/prostitution setting). BUT, this is also another example of how Pale Carnations is so beautifully written that it allows me to be deeply engrossed into a game that I don't normally go for. I'm not the dev, but I think the devs have a really good way to convey the story that they want to tell to the point that if we start skipping things, I feel like it'd just make the game worse. My suggestion is to power through those NTR scenes that you might not enjoy, it'd pay off in the world and character building of the game. Just like when you watch a superhero movie, there will be times in the movie where the superhero is losing, but it's part of the big picture.

 

[Retromancer]

This game is - so far - incredible. Female corruption is one of my favorite fetishes and this one looks like it will deliver. The renders are great, the writing is top notch, and the plot, while stupid for the real world (although maybe not so much after I learned all about what Epstein was up to), is way better than a lot of porn games. I came in thinking I would go hard for Veronica but Rosalind just captured me on my first playthrough so I'm sticking with her until the game is done and then will try to play other routes.

For people complaining about NTR - I know this definition gets argued about endlessly, but - WTF? From what I can gather three of the 5 girls the MC can possibly romance are in a sex competition in a rich man pervert club. This is the spine of the plot. One other is already dating/fucking your best friend, and the other is the bartender who plays in a punk band. If your definition of NTR is that any girl in the game should only fuck the MC, it seems pretty obvious this game is not for you and coming in here to complain about it is useless.

 

[techweight]

Cant top anyone elses review of such an amazing game, but its the first time in years that a game was so good I felt the need to leave one. Definitely supporting this game and the dev(s?).

 

[Yuzupepper]

Cant top anyone elses review of such an amazing game, but its the first time in years that a game was so good I felt the need to leave one. Definitely supporting this game and the dev(s?).

I felt the same way. In fact, I think this was the first game that I gave a proper review on this site.
There are two devs to my knowledge. TD and Gil. From what I know, TD does story and Gil does the modeling. I think TD does the coding but Gil may have some part in that too.

 

[TD1900]

came in thinking I would go hard for Veronica but Rosalind just captured me on my first playthrough so I'm sticking with her until the game is done and then will try to play other routes.

Glad to see Rosalind get some love in the comments. She seemed to be (understandably) the least popular Carnation during the initial release, but her character has a special place in my heart.

There are two devs to my knowledge. TD and Gil. From what I know, TD does story and Gil does the modeling. I think TD does the coding but Gil may have some part in that too.

You got it. There's the two of us. I do the words and ren'py stuff while GIL tirelessly does the picture side of things.

 

[Nulldev]

Recipe for a good life: Mina-Hana sandwich with a sprinkle of Felicia on top

 

[GMDominance]

After this update, I kinda want an ending with both Mina and Hana. Not to mention we can increase Mina bi-curious stat so it's possible right?