I like this game. It has fun moments and the story, although simple, does seem to have at least a bit of an actual 'story'. The only realy thing i can say against it is that the scenes end somewhat abruptly. If you'd introduce 1 or 2 extra panels or lines that 'close the scene' it would feel more natural.
The characters are fun and for the most part consistend. I've seen too many games where the characters (especially the MC) is all over the place with their behaviour.
The renders are very nice, and characters look realistic. Realistic in terms of body shape and size, aside from the drug-induced effects moments.
I like the free-roam part of the game. It gives you a sense of manouverability, in what otherwise seems to be a full visual novel, where you can only see what the writer wants you to see.
Keep it up OP. You're doing great.
(also... i'd love to see more of brick-Liv (when she was shot up with the steroid drug). She looked hot as balls.)