VN Ren'Py Paracosmic Reality [v1.10.2 Main] [Jiggly Stone Studios]

[JigglyStone - Fero Seele]

So far this is an outstanding game, really nice that someone made a game in the wholesome niche with some rarer kinks like size diff. Renders, direction are great. While the writing may sound unusual at some points (I was surprised by the sis calling us 'Guy' with a capital G too), it definitely got it's unique charm and is wholesome. So far characters are introduced and besides the sis and Orra we don't have much content yet but I'm looking forward to see more of each girl. The MC is likable too, it's nice that he's a smaller guy but not a wimp or a wet blanket. Hope the mystery angle is done right.

The tiniest subjective observations are that we rethread many times a few events, like eating when nothing major happens. I get it adds to the slice of life feel and I also struggle with how to include some daily scenes without sounding too repetitive. The other is that I don't like piercings besides that the girls are perfect!!

Glad to hear you enjoyed the game!

Though, as a heads up, Jade isn't MC's sister and the guy/Guy is a colloquialism similar to dude/bro/bud/etc. Though I did mean to go back and swap out the capital G's for lowercase. I believe grammatically speaking Guy is correct, but it looks more normal /casual as lowercase. I'll make sure those are all fixed in the next update.

As for the eating, I kinda agree. Part of it is meant to keep the slice-of-life aspect, but I am working on chopping through the food scenes a fair bit quicker than they originally were. I want to retain the cozy SoL feeling but there are only so many foods I can do xD so the less I focus on them, the less repetitive it'll feel for them.

 

[avador02]

I gotta say this was a lot better than most games here.
It's got that same feelgood vibe like MNF, Serenity and Single Again amongst others.
It's still early but this has definitely gone in my top 5 here.

The atmosphere is solid, the game looks a lot better than half the games i like and I've only seen like one or two typo's. (which is just me being hyperfocused on those things)

I'm looking forward to seeing more especially if it keeps being this quality.

 

[JigglyStone - Fero Seele]

I gotta say this was a lot better than most games here.
It's got that same feelgood vibe like MNF, Serenity and Single Again amongst others.
It's still early but this has definitely gone in my top 5 here.

The atmosphere is solid, the game looks a lot better than half the games i like and I've only seen like one or two typo's. (which is just me being hyperfocused on those things)

I'm looking forward to seeing more especially if it keeps being this quality.

Be sure to let me know of any typos that you find either here, in DMs, Discord, etc.

Some of them are semi-intentional sorta. There are a few that are personal vendettas of mine cause I think the fact that they are typos is dumb xD but if they are legitimate accidental typos then I'll get em fixed up in the next update. Pics preferred if you would please. It helps me track down which specific line of text you're referring to.

 

[Josseppe]

i love this game so much ... but .....but i want more of it ... i´m sad now .... all jokes aside .. i really love the direction it is heading and the chars are adorable.... i really can´t wait for more of this ... hopefully much much MUCH more ... i think i´m addictet to it

 

[JigglyStone - Fero Seele]

i love this game so much ... but .....but i want more of it ... i´m sad now .... all jokes aside .. i really love the direction it is heading and the chars are adorable.... i really can´t wait for more of this ... hopefully much much MUCH more ... i think i´m addictet to it

Glad to hear xD I'm working as fast as I can bud. Thank you for the support!

 

[sangryu]

This game looks amazing. The renders quality is really good. Ty for the game dev, I'll def support <3
Also, just to confirm: no futa yet, right?

 

[TigerWolfe]

Have not played since like the first update that dropped, so there was a decent amount to get through. Dev, shit's great, keep it up. Fuck anyone who complains about how long it's taking you.

Damn, I'm bummed I've reached the end.

Anyway found a typo

Spoiler: Too many thats

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[JigglyStone - Fero Seele]

This game looks amazing. The renders quality is really good. Ty for the game dev, I'll def support <3
Also, just to confirm: no futa yet, right?

Correct. I occasionally swap out some outro scenes using my persona but they are a femboy/trans/new-half/shemale/etc. Male with curves. Call em whatever works for your brain lol. Futa will be coming a fair bit down the road once the story and main Li's are established.

 

[JigglyStone - Fero Seele]

Have not played since like the first update that dropped, so there was a decent amount to get through. Dev, shit's great, keep it up. Fuck anyone who complains about how long it's taking you.

Damn, I'm bummed I've reached the end.

Anyway found a typo

Spoiler: Too many thats

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Glad to hear you're still enjoying it Tiger!

Thanks for the type report xD I'll make sure to get it cleaned up for the next build! xD feel dumb for missing that one lmao.
Brain works well enough spotting misspelled words, not so much on catching words that are spelled right but make the sentence wrong. xD

 

[TigerWolfe]

Glad to hear you're still enjoying it Tiger!

Thanks for the type report xD I'll make sure to get it cleaned up for the next build! xD feel dumb for missing that one lmao.
Brain works well enough spotting misspelled words, not so much on catching words that are spelled right but make the sentence wrong. xD

No worries. Oh the chain over the nose piercing on... Uh Lily(?) cool to see that in game I've only seen it online on like TikTok, not even in the "wild" yet, but I dig it. I think this is the first game I've played that had an LI with one.

 

[JigglyStone - Fero Seele]

No worries. Oh the chain over the nose piercing on... Uh Lily(?) cool to see that in game I've only seen it online on like TikTok, not even in the "wild" yet, but I dig it. I think this is the first game I've played that had an LI with one.

Yeah I've always liked weird piercings like that. Nose rings and chains are kinda neato IMO. That one is just blingy/small enough to look fairly girly but also stand out as a slightly rebellious statement x3 really works well for her I think.

 

[Danv]

what with constant "Guy" everywhere? is it intended or should it be [p] instead?

 

[Hordragg]

what with constant "Guy" everywhere? is it intended or should it be [p] instead?

Matthew 7:7

 

[Danv]

Matthew 7:7

got it - dev from another planet, happens sometimes

edit: if anyone bothered by it just as much as me - fix

 

[TigerWolfe]

what with constant "Guy" everywhere? is it intended or should it be [p] instead?

If only there were a search feature where you could search the term and find the discussion explaining it's just like dude or bro...

 

[OhTheLove]

I'd say MC looks pretty far from feminine. Androgynous maybe, but definitely not feminine.

As for futa content, there's been a lot of comments in the past talking about it. MC only pitches and won't be catching. So any futa content that the player will encounter will be optional and will be as a spectator or fucking the futa themselves.

You're right, androgynous is the word. Great to hear that our boy won't be catching anything.

But if I'm being honest all this stopped mattering the moment I saw Orra, I have to see this through to the end now. As if Cool Jade, Voluptuous Emma, Snarky Lily, Lovely Lotus, Cute Sylvie and even Crazy Chloe aren't already stars in their own right, you throw in this sexy giant of a woman?!! Yes!!!

 

[JigglyStone - Fero Seele]

got it - dev from another planet, happens sometimes

edit: if anyone bothered by it just as much as me - fix

I wouldn't say from another planet lol but you do you boo.

I will say that you're going to be missing some of the context by using a word swap fix that swaps "guy" for "[p]". You don't always refer to your friends in online chats by their real/usernames. Something you call them shorthand names. Dude, Bro, Bitch, Cunt (ok maybe I hang with aussies too much xD) but you get my point.

Calling someone by their name can be quite a formal thing and be a bit much for some of the more casual situations.

If it really bothers you that much, I'd recommend swapping "guy" out for dude/bro/etc. Some other shorthand name rather than [p]. That way you still get a similar context/feel for the conversation.

 

[JigglyStone - Fero Seele]

You're right, androgynous is the word. Great to hear that our boy won't be catching anything.

But if I'm being honest all this stopped mattering the moment I saw Orra, I have to see this through to the end now. As if Cool Jade, Voluptuous Emma, Snarky Lily, Lovely Lotus, Cute Sylvie and even Crazy Chloe aren't already stars in their own right, you throw in this sexy giant of a woman?!! Yes!!!

Glad you liked her! xD It's really really hard to say which of the characters are my favorite honestly xD each of them has their own little quirks and styles about them that I personally just get so excited to work with every time I do.

There's a few new characters joining the mix soon that I hope you all will enjoy just as much! Though just as a forewarning/cautionary advisory, characters are going to be slowly added into the game but it doesn't always mean that they'll always be around or be a prominent part of the story any time soon. I want to try and convey a sense of these characters existing and habiting the world before MC comes along. So just keep that in mind with some of em.

 

[S1nsational]

Finished my first play through, amazingly sweet and cute. I get the feel it's going to have perfect blend of wholesome and pervy. Wish there was more content. I love all the girls, but I think one could nearly be tricked into thinking Orra is the reall MC of the game, everything so far seem designed to make her happy. Just look at all the cute kittens she gets to play with!!

I know girl on girl scenes can be contentious in a lot of games and threads, but I hope there'll be threesomes etc in the game. Orra gives off really strong bisexual energy, and I could see a good few of the others being bi too.

Also, something I'd really like is if some of the girls have hairy pussys, and not for all the girls to be shaved.

Anyway, really enjoyed what's there and looking forward to more

 

[Danv]

You don't always refer to your friends in online chats by their real/usernames. Something you call them shorthand names. Dude, Bro, Bitch, Cunt (ok maybe I hang with aussies too much xD) but you get my point.

sure, it works for friends, but i don't see how it's viable for a main LI, i don't want my girl to call me dude, bro, bitch, cunt, that guy or big dick femboy midget, if this are alternatives - i'll stick with just a name, thanks
wanna more familiar approach - define separate nickname for MC what player can type in and LIs will be using on occasion, many devs do so, along with nicknames for LIs

also, critique - there are such things like "exposition" and "world building", you can really use some in your game, dev
it helps setup characters, logic of their actions and understanding limits and possibilities of the world around them, so there wouldn't be questions like - why no one gives a fuck about sudden 1000yo girl, magically appearing mansion, what's the deal with all the weird races and what else happening in this world... main characters' backstories can use some filling too