First time I play this game. Here is a couple of things I thought about during my playthrough :
-Writing ranges from okay to very bad. Some sentences don't make any sense even if I try hard to understand them.
-Events are kinda fucked up. Even by having help in the character tab, most events seem to proc at random hours. (Ex: I have to train with Ali Taylor, she is training at the gym from 4 pm to 10 pm, yet despite coming at 4 pm the event didn't proc until 7 pm. This is so unnecessary and frustrating. Why not make the event proc whenever the player come to the gym during those hours ?)
-Related to the second point but the help on the characters tab is either nebulous or wrong.
-The time system is bad. Going 10 minutes by 10 minutes with very few events to do isn't fun. Time often bug and goes on a loop. Passing time on the phone is a good idea, but due to the volatile time period of the events, you often have to rely on not using that feature.
-The story is ok I guess. I've seen worst and at least it is somewhat original. A bonus for the pornstars who are also somewhat original.
-The UI isn't bad. You've obviously worked on this, and even though there are probably a few things to ameliorate, this is a good beginning.
But overall it's bad. Those type of games are usually my favorite and I really enjoy no matter how bad they are, but the simple fact that event where so hard to proc made me ragequit the game in about 20 minutes of playthrough.