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Au Naturel
Chapter 10 over,200 pages
pages 186-200,all text
Chapter 10 over,200 pages
pages 186-200,all text
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PS is makign Brandi say more BS after every page, fuck it, this whole chapter was bad as fuck. Why would he say to Brandi she never did anything wrong after what she did? "Yeah son I love you and never wanted to hurt you, but I still fucked this dude because reasons, not caring how it could affect you at all, but it's ok because I love you" that's bad writing as it finest, hell this whole chapter was a disaster, all the buildup of the early chapters ruined, same as the characters, I'm glad that I stoped supporting him when he started to fuck the story with this chapter.
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AN10 last 15 pages complete Brandy explanation
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Thx for the detailed description, but it still feels like PS is just feeding us his BS to make us ok with the way this shitty chapter went.
The excuse of Brandi about being jealous and suddently fucking Rory makes no sense, more if we see the scene, she had literally no time to even feel jealous during all that, she saw them fucking Gina, she find it hot and start to masturbate, then Rory say a few Bullshit to her and she felt for it and fucked him, she didn't inteded to hurt her son but when she saw her son being pissed she couldn't stop fucking Rory because it felt too good to stop, so this feel more like PS trying to fix the disaster this chapter was than anything more.
Hell if she loves her son that much and she didn't want to hurt him, then her fucking Rory makes no sense because with it she had hurt her son, and from now on every dude she fucks will hurt her son more, but she won't care. If she was jealous of it happening, she could have joined the bedroom and fuck her son, but instead decided to do a stupid thing like the dumb slut she has become in this chapter and fucked other, jealous and scared of losing her son to another "I know if I fuck Rory he will surelly come to me" perfect writing
. the worst thing is that now PS has the perfect excuse every time he shows Brandi fucking others "Dylan baby you weren't there and I needed a distraction, so I fucked half the island, but don't worry I still love you".Hell this whole explanation feels more like BS if you read Brandi's thoughts in this same chapter, where she even thinks that Dylan and Rory enjoyed it all, it is incompatible with her now aknowledging that she saw her son being pissed.
And Dylan saying to her she didn't do anything wrong, well she has just told you she fucked a dude and new it could hurt you, saw it hurt you but she still did it, so she is no saint, him being pissed with anyone but not with Brandi makes no sense. This was such a waste of character development that is just a pity, from now on PS will keep feeding us Brandi fucking around while Dylan is thinking "she loves me, but I still need to train more to get that slut, I mean to earn her love for me". I mean if the slut fucked another dude now after professing her love for Dylan, what's stopping her from keep doing it when Dylan finish his "training" and fucks her? Or will she stop being dumb after this chapter? Because frankly I can see a future chapter in a sequel off the island, where Brandi needs a distraction and fucks a coworker or a few guys, and her excuse will be "Baby I was stressed from working and I needed a distraction from my mind, so I fucked a soccer team, hope you don't mind and sorry" it won't surprise me anymore after this disaster of a chapter, I hope the cucks payed him well because I won't be doing it ever again.
Lol got a few good chuckles from this explanation. At this point is it safe to assume she suffers from multiple personality disorder or she was born a twin but absorbed the other fetus and that brain developed and is fighting to gain control or something? I mean clearly her impulses and instincts are much stronger then anything she has with the son but. She's so jealous and scared of losing him that instead of going in to stop it or being honest with herself and agreeing with what he's been saying the entire time and what they both really want, she decides to do something that will assuredly hurt him and possibly push him away? THAT was the only distraction she could think of to get out of her head? She didn't mean to hurt him when she saw his face but saw how upset he was but just continued on like nothing happened? In every instance she chose sex over the son even with the obvious solution being sex with the son being readily available? Not only were there multiple opportunities to easily stop the rapidly deteriorating situation but also so many chances to move things in the direction she claims to want but at no point does she take advantage of them. Huh??? Am I taking crazy pills?
Don't get me wrong, I know she's not beholden to him, it just seems like what gets said after the fact too often seems to contradict with what happened at the time. If she realized all these things while they were happening then her impulses are stronger then anything she has with her son and everything said after the fact is kind of moot. Multiple chapters of the son trying to get the mom to be more honest and free and the other mother and son do it in one chapter lol. I originally thought her sexual awakening would feel more natural and almost like a renaissance but given how the chapter played out and the direction of things it's to be expected that it feels more on the cheap manipulation/slightly sleazy side.
I assume the remainder of the story will be the son trying to become the greatest cocksmith she's ever known while the mother sleeps around and compares the son to everyone else. Yadda yadda yadda, eventually after much back and forth and sex with everyone on the island, she decides to stay with the son because supposedly that was the original premise. Blah blah blah happily ever after. The end.
There are plenty of comics I dislike but I don't waste my time or other peoples on long whiney complaints. If you don't like it move on, there are plenty of other comics....Thx for the detailed description, but it still feels like PS is just feeding us his BS to make us ok with the way this shitty chapter went.
The excuse of Brandi about being jealous and suddently fucking Rory makes no sense, more if we see the scene, she had literally no time to even feel jealous during all that, she saw them fucking Gina, she find it hot and start to masturbate, then Rory say a few Bullshit to her and she felt for it and fucked him, she didn't inteded to hurt her son but when she saw her son being pissed she couldn't stop fucking Rory because it felt too good to stop, so this feel more like PS trying to fix the disaster this chapter was than anything more.
Hell if she loves her son that much and she didn't want to hurt him, then her fucking Rory makes no sense because with it she had hurt her son, and from now on every dude she fucks will hurt her son more, but she won't care. If she was jealous of it happening, she could have joined the bedroom and fuck her son, but instead decided to do a stupid thing like the dumb slut she has become in this chapter and fucked other, jealous and scared of losing her son to another "I know if I fuck Rory he will surelly come to me" perfect writing
Hell this whole explanation feels more like BS if you read Brandi's thoughts in this same chapter, where she even thinks that Dylan and Rory enjoyed it all, it is incompatible with her now aknowledging that she saw her son being pissed.
And Dylan saying to her she didn't do anything wrong, well she has just told you she fucked a dude and new it could hurt you, saw it hurt you but she still did it, so she is no saint, him being pissed with anyone but not with Brandi makes no sense. This was such a waste of character development that is just a pity, from now on PS will keep feeding us Brandi fucking around while Dylan is thinking "she loves me, but I still need to train more to get that slut, I mean to earn her love for me". I mean if the slut fucked another dude now after professing her love for Dylan, what's stopping her from keep doing it when Dylan finish his "training" and fucks her? Or will she stop being dumb after this chapter? Because frankly I can see a future chapter in a sequel off the island, where Brandi needs a distraction and fucks a coworker or a few guys, and her excuse will be "Baby I was stressed from working and I needed a distraction from my mind, so I fucked a soccer team, hope you don't mind and sorry" it won't surprise me anymore after this disaster of a chapter, I hope the cucks payed him well because I won't be doing it ever again.
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Lol wow almost identical to what I wrote. Spot on.Thx for the detailed description, but it still feels like PS is just feeding us his BS to make us ok with the way this shitty chapter went.
The excuse of Brandi about being jealous and suddently fucking Rory makes no sense, more if we see the scene, she had literally no time to even feel jealous during all that, she saw them fucking Gina, she find it hot and start to masturbate, then Rory say a few Bullshit to her and she felt for it and fucked him, she didn't inteded to hurt her son but when she saw her son being pissed she couldn't stop fucking Rory because it felt too good to stop, so this feel more like PS trying to fix the disaster this chapter was than anything more.
Hell if she loves her son that much and she didn't want to hurt him, then her fucking Rory makes no sense because with it she had hurt her son, and from now on every dude she fucks will hurt her son more, but she won't care. If she was jealous of it happening, she could have joined the bedroom and fuck her son, but instead decided to do a stupid thing like the dumb slut she has become in this chapter and fucked other, jealous and scared of losing her son to another "I know if I fuck Rory he will surelly come to me" perfect writing
Hell this whole explanation feels more like BS if you read Brandi's thoughts in this same chapter, where she even thinks that Dylan and Rory enjoyed it all, it is incompatible with her now aknowledging that she saw her son being pissed.
And Dylan saying to her she didn't do anything wrong, well she has just told you she fucked a dude and new it could hurt you, saw it hurt you but she still did it, so she is no saint, him being pissed with anyone but not with Brandi makes no sense. This was such a waste of character development that is just a pity, from now on PS will keep feeding us Brandi fucking around while Dylan is thinking "she loves me, but I still need to train more to get that slut, I mean to earn her love for me". I mean if the slut fucked another dude now after professing her love for Dylan, what's stopping her from keep doing it when Dylan finish his "training" and fucks her? Or will she stop being dumb after this chapter? Because frankly I can see a future chapter in a sequel off the island, where Brandi needs a distraction and fucks a coworker or a few guys, and her excuse will be "Baby I was stressed from working and I needed a distraction from my mind, so I fucked a soccer team, hope you don't mind and sorry" it won't surprise me anymore after this disaster of a chapter, I hope the cucks payed him well because I won't be doing it ever again.
That's what happens when artists lie to their fans and contradict themselves more often than they tell the truth.
Wait... you expected her to admit she was wrong for the shit she did and for hurting her son ?? Bro', that's like PS admitting this whole shitshow was just a big ass commission work for his 50/100$ subs... it won't happen, my man.
I agree. Heard some fans were really vocal on SS about this sudden 'plot twist' and he straight up ignored them, which can only mean one thing, right ?? PS's in a really delicate situation after this chapter's bullshit, so he should reconsider some things that are obviously gonna happen if he don't wanna lose supporters. Let's see how that works out for him.
Yep, that's the textbook definition of a bullshit explanation for an obvious lie.
Well, she did profess her unconditional love for her son and her desire to settle down with him while getting fucked senseless by an assole who just wanted fresh pussy, so she failed big time at not hurting him.
Hope PS doesn't read your post. We don't need any more 'logical' shit and 'twists' like that after what we saw in this Ch.
Course they did. I bet they splashed their monitors with lots of 'appreciation' after what happened in this Ch.
Naaww, it's nothing that ridiculous or dramatic. What our hero Trile spoiled for us only shows that PS suffers from the Vince McMahon it's-all-about-the-mooooneeeyyy$$$ virus, and this Ch is the proof of that.
Shh, spoilers, bro. Don't 'ruin' the amazing story... sluts can't help themselves when they horny. You either give it to her good to satisfy her or watch her dump your ass for a motherfucker who can, but the only fool here is the person who's stupid enough to wanna romance a slut.
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You could have not read it, or better yet ignore me and everyone that doesn't think like you, there is a button for that, that way you won't suffer long post of a comic/game in a forum, you know what forums are for right? Or I'm only allowed to say nice comic?
I'm sure you are enjoying the "masterpiece" this whole chapter was, so just ignore me and don't complain about people expresing their opinion of a comic in a forum thread my dude.
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Yeah I was really liking the character designs/story of Au naturel but all the incest scenes in the comic weren't my thing (went into reading this comic without looking into the tags)
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