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Pegasus essentially fucked that whole story up by adding an NTR element. If he had kept it to real sharing, I would guess the pushback wouldn't have been as bad, and we might have ended up with a comic where Brandi is freer to express her sexuality.
Finally common sense, this is what I'm talking about since forever PS ruined Brandi in that chapter the moment he decided to cuck Dylan for no reason , it was so forced and retarded, from that chapter the comic took a completely different path and turned her in the most boring main character just coping in the corner while the rest have fun between each other, if Brandi was free to do whatever imagine the possibilities with Tom Pete The Monster Lukas and Carl etc.

Fans were mad of how Rory fucked Brandi , she was disgusted for his previous behavior towards her in the past chapters and all of the sudden that changed lol like wtf it was stupid lame lazy writing out of nowhere.

This is what happens when the author use unnecessary ntr in a fucking free will island, that makes it worst...
 
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If i remember correctly, in Ep 10 starting the sharing course but ppl go high and has no more Brandy involving others guy, so.. ppl have what they want, and because after all this is a business who pay have the content they want. In short, they have what they pay.
That chapter was the breaking point for Brandy to fully embrace the lifestyle of the island, Gina was there she could have manipulate her into succumb to her sexual desires and also Dylan to support her but no PS drink way too much Kool aid that day and created that forced Brandi Rory scene with ntr involved everyone hated and now she's still confused lmao...

PS should have created a mutual agreement scenario instead of ntr on chapter 10 and for sure we would have a complete different path way more interesting with a lot of possibilities .
 
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That chapter was the breaking point for Brandy to fully embrace the lifestyle of the island, Gina was there she could have manipulate her into succumb to her sexual desires and also Dylan to support her but no PS drink way too much Kool aid that day and created that forced Brandi Rory scene with ntr involved everyone hated and now she's still confused lmao...

PS should have created a mutual agreement scenario instead of ntr on chapter 10 and for sure we would have a complete different path way more interesting with a lot of possibilities .
I agree with you in that mater, but for me and probably only me i see that scene not NTR but sharing, but that me , probably wrong.
 
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I agree

I agree with you in that mater, but for me and probably only me i see that scene not NTR but sharing, but that me , probably wrong.
Dude that wasnt sharing at all, Brandi and Rory fucked behind Dylans back (ntr), why do you think he got mad after the foursome ended, you should watch chapter 10 and pay attention.

The NTR in the title stands for netorare, which translates to "cheating" in Japanese.

Sharing was Dylan fucking Gina while Rory was there.
 
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Dude that wasnt sharing at all, Brandi and Rory fucked behind Dylans back (ntr), why do you think he got mad after the foursome ended, you should watch chapter 10 and pay attention.

The NTR in the title stands for netorare, which translates to "cheating" in Japanese.

Sharing was Dylan fucking Gina while Rory was there.
Only Brandy herself can break the psychology of the own son's slave. Nothing would have changed even if Rory had taken her in the same room where Dylan fucked Gina. And not secretly on the veranda. There would have simply been a conflict between the teenagers and possibly a fight. The result would have been the same. The problem is not the deception but the impudent, conceited puppy and the stupid adult woman. There will be no changes in Brandy's behavior, while the same lovers of mommy's pussy dictate the development of the plot. They see themselves in Dylan and are ready to pay to implement this concept,perverts. And the craftsman follows the lead.
 
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Only Brandy herself can break the psychology of the own son's slave. Nothing would have changed even if Rory had taken her in the same room where Dylan fucked Gina. And not secretly on the veranda. There would have simply been a conflict between the teenagers and possibly a fight. The result would have been the same. The problem is not the deception but the impudent, conceited puppy and the stupid adult woman. There will be no changes in Brandy's behavior, while the same lovers of mommy's pussy dictate the development of the plot. They see themselves in Dylan and are ready to pay to implement this concept,perverts. And the craftsman follows the lead.
I don't think so. You can see AN3 and AN18. A lots of changes in Brandy's behavior. She became open gradually. It is correct that her character is not developed as Dylan's character. But, yes, you can see a lot of changes into her. Now PS must focus on her. In TSB, incest between Timmy and Tina happened (which was most demanded) in 13 parts. But, Here PS does late.
 
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Only Brandy herself can break the psychology of the own son's slave. Nothing would have changed even if Rory had taken her in the same room where Dylan fucked Gina. And not secretly on the veranda. There would have simply been a conflict between the teenagers and possibly a fight. The result would have been the same. The problem is not the deception but the impudent, conceited puppy and the stupid adult woman. There will be no changes in Brandy's behavior, while the same lovers of mommy's pussy dictate the development of the plot. They see themselves in Dylan and are ready to pay to implement this concept,perverts. And the craftsman follows the lead.
Brandi definitely needs guidance in order to break that psychology you said and Gina was perfect in that moment, Rory was always ok that Dylan fuck her mom because he's used to the lifestyle of the island but most important because that was the perfect excuse to get close to Brandi and by proxy fuck her, if Gina would have convinced both of them to have a open relationship before the foursome the outcome of chapter 10 would have been completely different for both of them now that they crossed the line completely, Brandi would have a open mind that's for sure and Dylan would have a similar attitude like Rory has towards Gina but no PS just ruined it with the unnecessary ntr so I don't think the result would have been the same not even close.
 
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I don't think so. You can see AN3 and AN18. A lots of changes in Brandy's behavior. She became open gradually. It is correct that her character is not developed as Dylan's character. But, yes, you can see a lot of changes into her. Now PS must focus on her. In TSB, incest between Timmy and Tina happened (which was most demanded) in 13 parts. But, Here PS does late.
Yeah she opened her mind in those chapters but in chapter 17 she really wants to broaden her horizons even more while she was masturbating watching The Monster destroying Gina, there anyone can see her true restrained feelings but she doesn't have the courage to talk about it to Dylan because she fucked up cheating on Dylan in chapter 10 so in order to do so she needs a push .

I agree that PS needs to focus on her because she's really bland right now.

I can't wait for TSB return...
 
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Brandi definitely needs guidance in order to break that psychology you said and Gina was perfect in that moment, Rory was always ok that Dylan fuck her mom because he's used to the lifestyle of the island but most important because that was the perfect excuse to get close to Brandi and by proxy fuck her, if Gina would have convinced both of them to have a open relationship before the foursome the outcome of chapter 10 would have been completely different for both of them now that they crossed the line completely, Brandi would have a open mind that's for sure and Dylan would have a similar attitude like Rory has towards Gina but no PS just ruined it with the unnecessary ntr so I don't think the result would have been the same not even close.
What betrayal are we talking about? She is his mother,not his wife.She needs to send the puppy and fuck, fuck, fuck with men! Dylan can't have any other attitude , he's a selfish idiot.
 
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What betrayal are we talking about? She is his mother?not his wife.She needs to send the puppy and fuck, fuck, fuck with men!
Are you serious of course it was betrayal if not why do you think she's reluctant to fuck others after chapter 10, I agree that she needs to talk to him first about her desires and fuck other men.
 
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AN 23 first 7 pages with low tier translation and garbage resolution

- Kelly better stop this retard smfh.
- After seeing the cover and those pages I think Kelly is going to try to convince Dylan that Emily's idea is very dangerous and shes going to offer him her body anytime to change his mind.
-Bet Kelly is going to follow them.
 
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AN 23 first 7 pages with low tier translation and garbage resolution

- Kelly better stop this retard smfh.
- After seeing the cover and those pages I think Kelly is going to try to convince Dylan that Emily's idea is very dangerous and shes going to offer him her body anytime to change her mind.
Emily's idea of having a baby with Dylan struck me as very odd at first, given the one rule they have on the island. Then, knowing that Emily's mother has seen her daughter trying to get pregnant and hasn't called her out on it, I came to the conclusion that maybe Emily has permission from Gina and the people who run the place to get pregnant. But for Brandi and Kelly that's going too far (having a child isn't a game, it's a responsibility). And I think this is where Dylan will probably get Kelly pregnant before Brandi.
 

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Emily's idea of having a baby with Dylan struck me as very odd at first, given the one rule they have on the island. Then, knowing that Emily's mother has seen her daughter trying to get pregnant and hasn't called her out on it, I came to the conclusion that maybe Emily has permission from Gina and the people who run the place to get pregnant. But for Brandi and Kelly that's going too far (having a child isn't a game, it's a responsibility). And I think this is where Dylan will probably get Kelly pregnant before Brandi.
Tbh I dont want to see any pregnancy at all thats unnecessary drama imo, I just want sex scenes between the characters without boundaries or concerns.
 

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It doesn't matter whether he changes his attitude or not. The island is fulll of objects for his penis. And it's time for Brandy to experience diversity,she's worthy. Without him.
Well clearly matters to Brandi because after Rory scene she didn't do it again like when she met The Monster she has her chance there and Gina tried to convince her but she declined.

Again I agree about Brandi fucking other dudes is time to happen, Dylan is the problem and Brandi already cuck him in chapter 10 and look what that chapter gave us 12 chapters after poor monotony from Brandi, tbh I don't want another ntr scene I rather her grow a pair and tell him what she truly wants since chapter 1
 
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