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What I don't understand is that AN was an incest comic from the rip. It hasn't deviated from that. Folks insist on complaining "he's keeping Brandi all to Dylan" etc and so forth. A bunch of non-donors complaining in a forum isn't going to make him change that. Apparently that's what folks want in their incest comics, at least the folks supporting him, anyways. He's added Dylan having sex with others and Brandi as well as build up and drama for the story, but their focus was always each other. Always. Having said that, now that Kelly is there and the 3 of them are having their big build up moment, I can't imagine he'd keep the story going for much longer. Other than current events, it has gotten a little stale. He could have condensed or omitted some of the previous parts and have this all wrapped up, but you know, money. He needs to wrap it up, whether they stay on the island, whether Kelly stays with them, etc. Personally I hope they leave the island that way their story(Dylan, Brandi, and Kelly) can continue maybe in 1-off stories here and there. That's just my 2 cents.
Brandi motivations chapter 1 page 16
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Chapter 17 Pages 128 and 129 dialogues dont lie and I quote "Im sure Dylan would understand that" 128.png 129.png

And how can we forget about broaden her horizons quote from Chapter 17 page 132
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PS created those scenarios for a reason, her desire is right there so why do you think we want to see her 180.

Chapter 10 changed this comic for the worst , now shes a hollow restricted shell of herself with a lot of sexual desires she wants to do not involving Dylan.
 
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Rhabeeb

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Brandi motivations chapter 1 page 16
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Chapter 17 Pages 128 and 129 dialogues dont lie View attachment 4950133 View attachment 4950135




And how can we forget about broaden her horizons quote
Chapter 17 page 132

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PS created those scenarios for a reason, her desire is right there so why do you think we want to see her 180.

Chapter 10 changed this comic for the worst , now shes a hollow restricted shell of herself.
Honestly, I'd say it's more than likely the donors that influenced the current path the story is taking. Personally I don't put much stock into what she said in chapter 1, it's literally the introduction to the story and in about 99% of the incest stories I've read(admittedly not a lot as it ain't really my thing), the mother doesn't know she wants her sons dick up in her until it's damn near there. As for what happened in part 17, I don't know what happened there. I remember that part, but I wouldn't say it was because of part 10 as that was almost 10 parts previous. Even in the dialogue it seemed he was ready to let her spread her wings/cheeks and do some investigating of her own, but then just dropped it. Again, I'd probably chock it up to donors. Probably had some kinda poll and the majority voted against it would be my guess. Personally I think that polling the audience/donor shit is for the birds. At least with main-line stories. Yeah, it makes them feel part of the process and they're getting their money's worth, but honestly it kills stories.
 

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Honestly, I'd say it's more than likely the donors that influenced the current path the story is taking. Personally I don't put much stock into what she said in chapter 1, it's literally the introduction to the story and in about 99% of the incest stories I've read(admittedly not a lot as it ain't really my thing), the mother doesn't know she wants her sons dick up in her until it's damn near there. As for what happened in part 17, I don't know what happened there. I remember that part, but I wouldn't say it was because of part 10 as that was almost 10 parts previous. Even in the dialogue it seemed he was ready to let her spread her wings/cheeks and do some investigating of her own, but then just dropped it. Again, I'd probably chock it up to donors. Probably had some kinda poll and the majority voted against it would be my guess. Personally I think that polling the audience/donor shit is for the birds. At least with main-line stories. Yeah, it makes them feel part of the process and they're getting their money's worth, but honestly it kills stories.
Her quote in chapter 1 was before all the incest yes but doesn't change what she said , her desire to have fun with the locals sexually and chapter 17 solidified that statement , PS fucked up the story including a unwanted out of nowhere NTR scenario just to create a rivalry between Dylan and Rory (not my words PS words on discord).

Brandi got interested in Pete's dick when she was looking for Dylan on the island in the beginning, also on Toms schlong when she met him she even touch it and she was blown away (both scenes before the incest I know ,even after fucking Dylan I'm pretty sure she thinks the same thing about those 2 ) and the awful scene with Rory in chapter 10.

I agree that if the creators let the subs to dictate how the story must go on that will eventually destroy their creativity and the story and thats what precisely happened here and in Daval Immoral Desires comic just to name another example.

The intention of her 180 is there , I didn't make that shit up or anyone else either thats what a lot of fans here don't understand.
 
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Dami28

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Brandi motivations chapter 1 page 16
View attachment 4950032

Chapter 17 Pages 128 and 129 dialogues dont lie and I quote "Im sure Dylan would understand that" View attachment 4950133 View attachment 4950135

And how can we forget about broaden her horizons quote from Chapter 17 page 132
View attachment 4950051

PS created those scenarios for a reason, her desire is right there so why do you think we want to see her 180.

Chapter 10 changed this comic for the worst , now shes a hollow restricted shell of herself with a lot of sexual desires she wants to do not involving Dylan.
I agree the comic began with the idea of a mother and a son involves in a new world with another codes, that incest is just part of the style of life of the locals. Now is just another incest comic where the Son (the man) can have sex with another local women but his mother not because she is fulfilled with his cock. At least if you compare to the other famous comic of Daval's there the relationship is exclusive for each other.
 
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Long ago it was the most interesting comic, now is the most boring one
I hate to see Brandi getting gate keeped by a fucked up from the author (chapter 10) but at least we see other characters getting love like Kelly or Victoria but at the same time a lot of secondary characters are just gone so I understand your point of view, at least we have different scenarios not just involving the main characters unlike others like Inmoral Desires by Daval3D , thats the most basic flat boring repetitive comic I ever seen in my life :HideThePain: .
 
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