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That ended very quickly.
It is entertaining but the excessive worship of Dylan's cock and cum, by the sisters, instead of using him like a tool to their own bonding is a kind of letting down
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As soon as the big threesome that everyone's been waiting for is over, the story will pick back up with Victoria as I am sure many of you are eager to see what will happen with her, Carl and Lukas.
Yeah is good to finally see this scene but cmon if they are so excited with Dylan just imagine if that was Tom or The Monster both of them would need a wheelchair , they need to explore way more and not just gate keep themselves with Dylan.It is entertaining but the excessive worship of Dylan's cock and cum, by the sisters, instead of using him like a tool to their own bonding is a kind of letting down
Dude I can imagine a scenario where Victoria tells Brandi how good it was having 2 Ds at the same time with full details and Brandi gets horny af just listening to her , Vic notice it and thinks well she helped me to embrace the lifestyle of the island when I needed it and Dylan was so nice to me previously (chapter 17) she brings the idea of swapping sons so she can experience how it is to have 2 Ds at that same time , Brandi gets flustered and even hornier just thinking about that idea she goes to talk to Dylan and finally embrace the lust at full extend, Kelly can do it too of course but after Brandi does, the script rights himself...Looking forward to seeing the twins rail Victoria.
I can think of another scenario. Dylan spots Victoria alone. He seduces her and starts having sex with her.Then Brandi spies on Dylan fucking Victoria and gets horny. In the meantime Carl and Lukas also see Victoria with Dylan. The twins get confused with the situation and don't know what to do. Brandi takes the lead this time and she decides to help the twins.Dude I can imagine a scenario where Victoria tells Brandi how good it was having 2 Ds at the same time with full details and Brandi gets horny af just listening to her , Vic notice it and thinks well she helped me to embrace the lifestyle of the island when I needed it and Dylan was so nice to me previously (chapter 17) she brings the idea of swapping sons so she can experience how it is to have 2 Ds at that same time , Brandi gets flustered and even hornier just thinking about that idea she goes to talk to Dylan and finally embrace the lust at full extend, Kelly can do it too of course but after Brandi does, the script rights himself...
But first Brandi must convince Dylan to let her do whatever she wants with whoever she wants just to avoid another unnecessary NTR scenario like chapter 10, with that being said yes your scenario can work easily.I can think of another scenario. Dylan spots Victoria alone. He seduces her and starts having sex with her.Then Brandi spies on Dylan fucking Victoria and gets horny. In the meantime Carl and Lukas also see Victoria with Dylan. The twins get confused with the situation and don't know what to do. Brandi takes the lead this time and she decides to help the twins.
Brandi doesn't have to consult Dylan. Instead PS can make it look like Dylan is not jealous and is supportive of Brandi. Remember in chapter 10 PS could have avoided all this by simply not making Dylan not jealous.But first Brandi must convince Dylan to let her do whatever she wants with whoever she wants just to avoid another unnecessary NTR scenario like chapter 10, with that being said yes your scenario can work easily.
Just copy paste my comments if you want and send it as feedback , I was going to ask you to to tell PS about our discussions here.Guys you HAVE to take this discourse to pegasus. I am in his discord and its just a quiet wasteland of complacency. He collects his monthly check from the people that are unimaginative and keeps making repetitive slop. Sub for $1 and go talk to pegasus I beg of you all. Otherwise we're getting 50 more chapters of Dylans harem.
After chapter 10 fiasco now she has to convince him first to avoid a second unwanted NTR don't you think, PS ruined her character in that chapter making Dylan angry and jealous af that was his choice and now look at the repercussions, I agree he should have done a different scenario instead of what he did.Brandi doesn't have to consult Dylan. Instead PS can make it look like Dylan is not jealous and is supportive of Brandi. Remember in chapter 10 PS could have avoided all this by simply not making Dylan not jealous.
Brandi fucking arround was doomed from start.PS fell in incest trap.When Brandi started cockblocking Dylan to protect him and develop romantic feeling for him,premise of sexual freedom and Brandi awakening fell apart.Dylan became MC and introduction of Kelly as second Brandi romantic interest cemented story as is. Original premise would work better if Brandi came on island with Kelly.In incest story male MC love interest fucking arround doesnt work,because is feels like NTR.Madnes together works because MC is Sarah,not nephew,uncle or son.After chapter 10 fiasco now she has to convince him first to avoid a second unwanted NTR don't you think, PS ruined her character in that chapter making Dylan angry and jealous af that was his choice and now look at the repercussions, I agree he should have done a different scenario instead of what he did.
It depends on the author. The author can make it look like it's not NTR.Brandi fucking arround was doomed from start.PS fell in incest trap.When Brandi started cockblocking Dylan to protect him and develop romantic feeling for him,premise of sexual freedom and Brandi awakening fell apart.Dylan became MC and introduction of Kelly as second Brandi romantic interest cemented story as is. Original premise would work better if Brandi came on island with Kelly.In incest story male MC love interest fucking arround doesnt work,because is feels like NTR.Madnes together works because MC is Sarah,not nephew,uncle or son.