Or can just ask that is there any chance of idea to happen?
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If there is anyone who can talk directly to the Pegasus Smith then please do tell about our idea of "Brandi and Kelly should have freewill to have sex with anyone" which will increase the interest in Au Naturel again.
So anyone who can talk directly to him, please tell him about this.
So anyone who can talk directly to him, please tell him about this.
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You need mid tier subs (silver/gold) to talk to PS,not just anyone. For PS gold tier sub (26$ tier) opinion is 26x more important than brass (1$ tier),and there is also extra opinion weight of long time subs. Gold and up tiers mostly arent big fans of story change(at least that is my feeling about situation).
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Was doomed from the start because of how PS did chapter 10 using unwanted unnecessary NTR just to create a rivalry (PS words on discord not mine) instead of a mutual agreement that was the problem and Rory being a piece of shit makes everything worse.
Brandi failed cock blocking Dylan , she gave up and let him do whatever so why the fuck Dylan can't do the same , just look at his body count lmao while Brandi is just there doing nothing when she's not fucking him , that's pathetic.
Brandi wants to awake for example when she saw The Monster destroying Gina , the urge is right there but chapter 10 ruined her character to the core that's why she's a boring hollow head with no personality unlike how she was in the first chapters.
"PS fell in incest trap" yes , Brandi should be like Gina at this point with a unhinged personality and Kelly too even more, PS just destroyed the meaning of the lifestyle of the island creating that stupid drama between them that could have been avoided easily from the beginning that's why this comic feels flat currently with no goals for Brandi, Dylan on the other hand basically did everything on the island that's lame rhetoric from PS.
"Madness together works because MC is Sarah,not nephew,uncle or son. " David is also a main character, him being absent in the most recent chapters doesn't change that , so you are against him fucking Alice but is ok for Sarah to fuck her uncle and son , why is ok for women to do it but not for men that's pure hypocrisy and bullshit tbh.
"In incest story male MC love interest fucking around doesn't work because is feels like NTR" dude I can't believe you think Brandi is not a main character in this comic ,so you are telling us Dylan fucking around is ok but not Brandi the other main character that's another very hypocritical statement from you.
This comic was supposed to be about free will to do whatever without any concern but PS turned it into a mom son drama/Dylan harem including Kelly while the rest have fun without boundaries, her introduction was refreshing to see but PS is dragging her too much.
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Exactly , on discord he said he did this scenario not thinking about the NTR in the process just to create a rivalry between Dylan and Rory , he was surprised about the backlash that chapter created and he said it was unintentionally lmao I can't believe it
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I already asked PS on discord to find out if he had plans for Brandi to have sex with other men and he replied that he wouldn't talk about those plans because he would be giving spoilers...
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Thanks for asking him and sharing this pic we appreciate it
, is time indeed.The quote "I think of it as spoilers" makes it a possibility.
I think spoilers are reserved for top tier patreons
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PS on discord:
Thank you, and everyone else for sharing thoughts about the direction of the story. I've been away for a few days, as we just had a big holiday here in Sweden, so forgive me for being a little late to the party. I've always had a plan and I have done my best to try and tell a story that progresses in a realistic manner. But the characters have only been on the island for less than 2 weeks, so I don't think it's fair to say that Brandi has been sitting around waiting for Dylan. Sure, she has had to take a step back into more of a secondary character role, while the story has focused Kelly's adaption to the island and Dylan's personal journey. I see the comic as having an ensemble cast, with Dylan as the main character, characters like Brandi, Kelly and Victoria as other key characters whose storylines and perspectives we get to follow. As such, I can only focus on a few characters at once, and because of that some characters will have periods, when it feels like they have been left behind. I know it's not perfect. But it's the best that I can do. The three main characters are now in the middle of their first threesome, and Kelly has just started to accept having sex with Dylan and her sister. So it would be a massive break from the pacing and the way that I've written my story so far, if the next chapter turns into a massive gangbang.
That being said, I want to be clear that this comic is not a love story between Dylan and Brandi. Although Dylan did always have a thing for Brandi (and honestly who wouldn't), it doesn't mean that he was dreaming of marriage and babies. The comic was never written that way, but I can understand where that idea came from. Equally though, I want to reiterate that this is not a comic about cuckolding or NTR, and it never will be! I admit that I could have handled the chapter where Brandi, Dylan, Gina and Rory had a couple swap, in a better way. But it was genuinely the first time that I had ever written something like that, and I got caught up trying to make hot images, rather than tell the story in the best way that I possible could. If there's anything that I've learned from that whole experience, it's that I shouldn't try to people please, but just tell my own story, in the best way that I can, and hope that you guys like it. Because I write adult comics, with adult themes, aimed at an adult audiences, I have tried to explore sex and relationships in a mature way that you might not normally get to see in a TV show, as I expect a certain level of maturity from the people reading it. This is a comic about sexual adventures, exploration and fun, it's not meant to reinforce stereotypes or restrictive possessive points of view. The whole philosophy of the island I literally the opposite of that.
Freedom, and fun has always been the island mantra. So why can't Brandi, Dylan and Kelly love each other and at the same time explore their sexual kinks? why does it have to be one or the other? At the end of the day, this is fiction, a fantasy. So, ultimately Brandi as a character that can be whatever you want her to be. As a reader, the most powerful tool you have is your own imagination and if you like Brandi or any of my other characters, the best thing that you can do is to imagine them exactly how you want to. There is no right or wrong, just don't tell me that you know what I'm writing better than I do, because that's just not fair. If I can ask anything for you, as readers, then I urge you to break from from the binary thinking of Brandi becoming either an obedient wife, or an island cum-dumpster. Try to think of her as a human being, with kinks and curiosities just like the rest of us. If you can do that, then I am sure that you will have a lot of fun reading her adventures of years to come.
Thank you, and everyone else for sharing thoughts about the direction of the story. I've been away for a few days, as we just had a big holiday here in Sweden, so forgive me for being a little late to the party. I've always had a plan and I have done my best to try and tell a story that progresses in a realistic manner. But the characters have only been on the island for less than 2 weeks, so I don't think it's fair to say that Brandi has been sitting around waiting for Dylan. Sure, she has had to take a step back into more of a secondary character role, while the story has focused Kelly's adaption to the island and Dylan's personal journey. I see the comic as having an ensemble cast, with Dylan as the main character, characters like Brandi, Kelly and Victoria as other key characters whose storylines and perspectives we get to follow. As such, I can only focus on a few characters at once, and because of that some characters will have periods, when it feels like they have been left behind. I know it's not perfect. But it's the best that I can do. The three main characters are now in the middle of their first threesome, and Kelly has just started to accept having sex with Dylan and her sister. So it would be a massive break from the pacing and the way that I've written my story so far, if the next chapter turns into a massive gangbang.
That being said, I want to be clear that this comic is not a love story between Dylan and Brandi. Although Dylan did always have a thing for Brandi (and honestly who wouldn't), it doesn't mean that he was dreaming of marriage and babies. The comic was never written that way, but I can understand where that idea came from. Equally though, I want to reiterate that this is not a comic about cuckolding or NTR, and it never will be! I admit that I could have handled the chapter where Brandi, Dylan, Gina and Rory had a couple swap, in a better way. But it was genuinely the first time that I had ever written something like that, and I got caught up trying to make hot images, rather than tell the story in the best way that I possible could. If there's anything that I've learned from that whole experience, it's that I shouldn't try to people please, but just tell my own story, in the best way that I can, and hope that you guys like it. Because I write adult comics, with adult themes, aimed at an adult audiences, I have tried to explore sex and relationships in a mature way that you might not normally get to see in a TV show, as I expect a certain level of maturity from the people reading it. This is a comic about sexual adventures, exploration and fun, it's not meant to reinforce stereotypes or restrictive possessive points of view. The whole philosophy of the island I literally the opposite of that.
Freedom, and fun has always been the island mantra. So why can't Brandi, Dylan and Kelly love each other and at the same time explore their sexual kinks? why does it have to be one or the other? At the end of the day, this is fiction, a fantasy. So, ultimately Brandi as a character that can be whatever you want her to be. As a reader, the most powerful tool you have is your own imagination and if you like Brandi or any of my other characters, the best thing that you can do is to imagine them exactly how you want to. There is no right or wrong, just don't tell me that you know what I'm writing better than I do, because that's just not fair. If I can ask anything for you, as readers, then I urge you to break from from the binary thinking of Brandi becoming either an obedient wife, or an island cum-dumpster. Try to think of her as a human being, with kinks and curiosities just like the rest of us. If you can do that, then I am sure that you will have a lot of fun reading her adventures of years to come.
Can't wait for the possessive people screaming their lungs out at Brandi only being for Dylan, probably because they use Dylan as a proxy in the story! If that's your thing then fine! But don't bitch about it when the creator obviously aim for Brandi to become more free in the future of the comic.
What PS has been doing with Brandi¡s character is just the opposite what his intentions he is decsribing in this post. At this point the Comic It is a love story between Dylan and Brandi, and Dylan as the main character showing his sexual adventures.
And only two weeks haha must be the Fantasy Island with its own parallel dimension.
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PS is being a total hypocrite all this time but at least he confirmed he fucked up big time in chapter 10 and Im an advocate for that hell I think I'm the first one to point that out on forums.
I admit that I could have handled the chapter where Brandi, Dylan, Gina and Rory had a couple swap, in a better way. But it was genuinely the first time that I had ever written something like that, and I got caught up trying to make hot images, rather than tell the story in the best way that I possible could. Chapter 10 dude don't be embarrassed to say it , he admitted the HUGE mistake he created that changed this comic forever but didn't apologized that's interesting (lack of humility) we are in chapter twenty fucking five at this point 15 chapters after that fiasco and he's still refuse to do a 180 on Brandi.
That should have been a fair couple swap with all parts involved agreed but because Brandi was mad with stupid ass Rory at that moment he forced it and turned it into a stupid NTR scenario that changed the plot for the worst even if that was his first time is unforgivable af.
I don't think it's fair to say that Brandi has been sitting around waiting for Dylan. That's basically what she's doing after chapter 10 while Dylan fucks every girl he meets basically, is this guy for real
"I want to be clear that this comic is not a love story between Dylan and Brandi" well he's showing the opposite of that on Brandi perspective but not for Dylan that's for sure so what the fuck he's waiting for , he's just straight lying in this aspect.
I want to reiterate that this is not a comic about cuckolding or NTR, and it never will be! LMFAO chapter 10 says hello , are you fucking kidding me really , I can't believe he's so naive to NOT think he created a NTR scenario on that chapter and realized his huge mistake because fans pointed that out (I did it since day 1 none stop and some called me hater imagine) bunch of yes men clowns I was right from the beginning.
This is a comic about sexual adventures, exploration and fun, it's not meant to reinforce stereotypes or restrictive possessive points of view well not on Brandi's side that's for sure , whos he's trying to fool she's a very restrictive point of view.
The whole philosophy of the island I literally the opposite of that, Freedom, and fun has always been the island mantra. So why can't Brandi, Dylan and Kelly love each other and at the same time explore their sexual kinks? why does it have to be one or the other? OMFG are you fucking kidding us , what's Brandi body count currently just 2 and how much is Dylan's in comparison, Kelly has just 1 you can't make this shit up , what he's waiting for to use Pete Tom The Monster The Master Diego Andre etc this dude sounds like a politician at this point , explore their sexual kinks my ass when just Dylan is the only one who is doing that without restrictions, what a liar smfh.
Try to think of her as a human being, with kinks and curiosities just like the rest of us. If you can do that, then I am sure that you will have a lot of fun reading her adventures of years to come. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA yeah for sure kinks and curiosities she cant fucking do while being in the background when Dylan's fulfills every single one without any concern.
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Maybe he intends to let this story get to say 100 parts and around 60-70 she might start finally exploring lol
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Keep us updated of what he says on discord or any site, nice shit.
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