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Kalu12345

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But first Brandi must convince Dylan to let her do whatever she wants with whoever she wants just to avoid another unnecessary NTR scenario like chapter 10, with that being said yes your scenario can work easily.
Brandi doesn't have to consult Dylan. Instead PS can make it look like Dylan is not jealous and is supportive of Brandi. Remember in chapter 10 PS could have avoided all this by simply not making Dylan not jealous.
 
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Guys you HAVE to take this discourse to pegasus. I am in his discord and its just a quiet wasteland of complacency. He collects his monthly check from the people that are unimaginative and keeps making repetitive slop. Sub for $1 and go talk to pegasus I beg of you all. Otherwise we're getting 50 more chapters of Dylans harem.
 

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Guys you HAVE to take this discourse to pegasus. I am in his discord and its just a quiet wasteland of complacency. He collects his monthly check from the people that are unimaginative and keeps making repetitive slop. Sub for $1 and go talk to pegasus I beg of you all. Otherwise we're getting 50 more chapters of Dylans harem.
Just copy paste my comments if you want and send it as feedback , I was going to ask you to to tell PS about our discussions here.
 

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Brandi doesn't have to consult Dylan. Instead PS can make it look like Dylan is not jealous and is supportive of Brandi. Remember in chapter 10 PS could have avoided all this by simply not making Dylan not jealous.
After chapter 10 fiasco now she has to convince him first to avoid a second unwanted NTR don't you think, PS ruined her character in that chapter making Dylan angry and jealous af that was his choice and now look at the repercussions, I agree he should have done a different scenario instead of what he did.
 
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After chapter 10 fiasco now she has to convince him first to avoid a second unwanted NTR don't you think, PS ruined her character in that chapter making Dylan angry and jealous af that was his choice and now look at the repercussions, I agree he should have done a different scenario instead of what he did.
Brandi fucking arround was doomed from start.PS fell in incest trap.When Brandi started cockblocking Dylan to protect him and develop romantic feeling for him,premise of sexual freedom and Brandi awakening fell apart.Dylan became MC and introduction of Kelly as second Brandi romantic interest cemented story as is. Original premise would work better if Brandi came on island with Kelly.In incest story male MC love interest fucking arround doesnt work,because is feels like NTR.Madnes together works because MC is Sarah,not nephew,uncle or son.
 

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Brandi fucking arround was doomed from start.PS fell in incest trap.When Brandi started cockblocking Dylan to protect him and develop romantic feeling for him,premise of sexual freedom and Brandi awakening fell apart.Dylan became MC and introduction of Kelly as second Brandi romantic interest cemented story as is. Original premise would work better if Brandi came on island with Kelly.In incest story male MC love interest fucking arround doesnt work,because is feels like NTR.Madnes together works because MC is Sarah,not nephew,uncle or son.
It depends on the author. The author can make it look like it's not NTR.
 

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If there is anyone who can talk directly to the Pegasus Smith then please do tell about our idea of "Brandi and Kelly should have freewill to have sex with anyone" which will increase the interest in Au Naturel again.
So anyone who can talk directly to him, please tell him about this.
You need mid tier subs (silver/gold) to talk to PS,not just anyone. For PS gold tier sub (26$ tier) opinion is 26x more important than brass (1$ tier),and there is also extra opinion weight of long time subs. Gold and up tiers mostly arent big fans of story change(at least that is my feeling about situation).
 

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Brandi fucking arround was doomed from start.PS fell in incest trap.When Brandi started cockblocking Dylan to protect him and develop romantic feeling for him,premise of sexual freedom and Brandi awakening fell apart.Dylan became MC and introduction of Kelly as second Brandi romantic interest cemented story as is. Original premise would work better if Brandi came on island with Kelly.In incest story male MC love interest fucking arround doesnt work,because is feels like NTR.Madnes together works because MC is Sarah,not nephew,uncle or son.
Was doomed from the start because of how PS did chapter 10 using unwanted unnecessary NTR just to create a rivalry (PS words on discord not mine) instead of a mutual agreement that was the problem and Rory being a piece of shit makes everything worse.

Brandi failed cock blocking Dylan , she gave up and let him do whatever so why the fuck Dylan can't do the same , just look at his body count lmao while Brandi is just there doing nothing when she's not fucking him , that's pathetic.

Brandi wants to awake for example when she saw The Monster destroying Gina , the urge is right there but chapter 10 ruined her character to the core that's why she's a boring hollow head with no personality unlike how she was in the first chapters.

"PS fell in incest trap" yes , Brandi should be like Gina at this point with a unhinged personality and Kelly too even more, PS just destroyed the meaning of the lifestyle of the island creating that stupid drama between them that could have been avoided easily from the beginning that's why this comic feels flat currently with no goals for Brandi, Dylan on the other hand basically did everything on the island that's lame rhetoric from PS.

"Madness together works because MC is Sarah,not nephew,uncle or son. " David is also a main character, him being absent in the most recent chapters doesn't change that , so you are against him fucking Alice but is ok for Sarah to fuck her uncle and son , why is ok for women to do it but not for men that's pure hypocrisy and bullshit tbh.

"In incest story male MC love interest fucking around doesn't work because is feels like NTR" dude I can't believe you think Brandi is not a main character in this comic ,so you are telling us Dylan fucking around is ok but not Brandi the other main character that's another very hypocritical statement from you.

This comic was supposed to be about free will to do whatever without any concern but PS turned it into a mom son drama/Dylan harem including Kelly while the rest have fun without boundaries, her introduction was refreshing to see but PS is dragging her too much.
 
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It depends on the author. The author can make it look like it's not NTR.
Exactly , on discord he said he did this scenario not thinking about the NTR in the process just to create a rivalry between Dylan and Rory , he was surprised about the backlash that chapter created and he said it was unintentionally lmao I can't believe it :FacePalm: .
 
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I already asked PS on discord to find out if he had plans for Brandi to have sex with other men and he replied that he wouldn't talk about those plans because he would be giving spoilers...
 

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I already asked PS on discord to find out if he had plans for Brandi to have sex with other men and he replied that he wouldn't talk about those plans because he would be giving spoilers...
Can you share a pic of the conversation if you dont mind.
 
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