Thank you for your extensive feedback! The story always can be better, but it's not a book, it's an erotic visual novelIf I wanted to read a book or if it was a text-based game then I think I would like this. But only reading this with eventual sexual content is quite boring while you expect to play porn or at least ecchi game.
Usually I find the most interesting approach to the story is to say only what is relevant at the situation and if you need to know background or some other info there could be a library or "event" of some sorts to let player know more about what is happening and why. However, that information isn't forced upon the player and player should understand the situation from simply dialogue or visuals if needed. If you want to show what character thinks, feels, whatever, it is more interesting to see that character's expressions and the thoughts kept short and simple letting the player decide how that character fully feels. Maybe it is a humiliating situation but character for some reason deviantly smiles and lets player decide what is happening or it just shows character smiling, showing some gesture to let you know how exactly that character feels. Also it feels like narrator isn't needed... Maybe I just ignored it too much but after skipping ocasional narrator line I didn't felt like I missed anything at all which is odd if everything narrator is saying is needed.
Overall, I like the art (even if some is questionable like that centaur mentioned by other users but whatever works I guess) and characters seem interesting. Whole story aspect I think could be done better but it's not bad. And well I'm looking forward to what this game gonna become even if at the moment it isn't my cup of tea because of all the reading.
(altough I admit I almost abuse the narrator). I am happy with chapter 2, but it feels as if chapter 1 isn't as polished as it could be, but chapter 2 is a huge step in the right direction. And that's what counts, making the game better in every update
So, you did it on purpose right ? As post trapIt is so funny to see people discussing Centaur pp more than the game itself
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Well, Centaurs are half man, half horse. Torso of a man, lower body of a horse. Thus, the dick would still be under the horse, since the lower part is of a horse.. Unless the horses in this universe have dicks under their chins I guess xDIt is so funny to see people discussing Centaur pp more than the game itself
If you want to go the route of having the dick in the front, then switch it around. Have a human lower body and a horse upper body. Would definitely be new, though not sure if its a fetish.
Damn. I should have used the model in your gif.Well, Centaurs are half man, half horse. Torso of a man, lower body of a horse. Thus, the dick would still be under the horse, since the lower part is of a horse.. Unless the horses in this universe have dicks under their chins I guess xD
If you want to go the route of having the dick in the front, then switch it around. Have a human lower body and a horse upper body. Would definitely be new, though not sure if its a fetish.
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rule 34 : if you can think of it , there is a porn of it
your GIF is a proof that it exist
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If you do decide to add it, do not insult the horse man by not adding in his happy bounce.
Little known fact. Centaurs actually do have a secondary erogenous zone between their front legs. It's a small bump of nerve endings formally called a coltorus. Stimulating it with your mouth is called fillylatio.
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I downloaded it just to see what all the talk about the centaur is, I was not disappointed. Seriously though, how could you have thought that was a good idea? It ruins the whole point of adding a centaur in the first place.
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Centaur is half man, half horse. I put the PP on the front, instead of underneath, people get confused