VN Ren'Py Phone Story [v0.2] [Taptus]

[TheRetroAiden]

Why not

 

[johnconner117]

I just love phone game

 

[negeb18]

is NTR avoidable?

 

[ScoutV345]

Hello! Thank you for such a detailed comment, yes, I agree with you, these are really the costs of this method that I have to go to now. But this greatly simplifies the programming process.

However, if the public finds my project interesting, then I will devote much more time to it and transfer it to a more elegant solution, from the software part.

I liked the game, it's far better than the half dozen other phone games, the MC is not a complete beta idiot, and you're not pigeon holed and forced into sharing, or being cheated on, it's nice to have a say whether you want it or not, the wifes friend finding the browser history was a bit much, it's almost a direct rip off from stay online

 

[HisokaGin]

i think it's time for a new category... "sexting"

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Taptus]

Congrats on making an android version. I have only tried the PC variant, but I assume you're using the same Save screen in both. Don't worry, this is not me trying to change everything you do again, but see if you can't customize the Save/Load screen a little bit.

You see the standard Ren'Py Save/Load screen is made for normal monitors in landscape mode. You could say it's three columns with two rows each. For your game's window dimensions, especially on a small phone screen, this becomes very tiny in portrait mode. Maybe it should be just a single column with four to five slots downward?

Hello! Thank you for your interest in my game! Version 0.2 that came out now is a pen test, of course, if the game is supported by the audience, then the game will improve symmetrically, including the issue of the save menu

 

[Taptus]

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Hello! I see you are very experienced and have shown interest in my game. Very grateful for this! Yes, I know that some photos have a number of "artifacts". AI works wonders, but at the same time gives out utter nonsense... I decided not to polish version 0.2 to the ideal and get people's ratings on the very direction of my thought, and if the audience finds my game interesting,I will already try my best.

Thank you very much for your advice, I will definitely take your comments into account in future versions!

 

[Taptus]

Worth a download or wait for more content?

Hello! Depends on what you're looking for. I myself, as a player, really did not like games for 5 minutes of the game, where there is really nothing. Therefore, I tried to take this into account in my game and release the game immediately in version 0.2, and with such content that it could intrigue people interested in the NTR and NTS topic

 

[Taptus]

This has been done to death already!! Try coming up with something original.

Hello! Thank you for your rating, it's a pity that this game is probably not for you. The game is made in this genre, because I like it first of all, that's how I see it. Perhaps not without the influence of other games of this genre.

 

[Taptus]

I was interested enough in the summary of this one to try it but I've ditched it. I'm a netorase fan. I like the mutuality and co-operativeness of netorase but this is starting to smack of 'A Wife's Phone'. The fella has no real choice in where it goes. The wife's BFF and the 'intruder' are putting him in a position where, in practice, he has no choice but to play along otherwise his missus will end up playing away in any event.

Started well but no thanks. I wish you luck with it. There is obviously an audience for this stuff but it's not me.

Hello! Yes, the first two chapters you played are more focused on the NTR branch, but I assure you, this is the cost of the initial stage. My plans are to develop the game fully in 3 areas of NTR / NTS / Love . The main character will have the choice to "talk to his wife" and offer her new forms of relationships, through which they will move to the NTS. At the moment, the game, in fact, does not have any development at all in any of the branches, but it has reason to do so. Kira herself, a friend of his wife, actively pushes Adam to the NTS.

 

[Taptus]

Do a mother/son bully one next

Hello! No, this game will only be about the wife. At least until the audience on patreon asks for other options

 

[Taptus]

Exist a cheating route? I love the netorare hehehe

Hello! This update doesn't have an active TNR branch yet, but there are hints of an NTR branch and a little prank in the enmity with Kira branch.

 

[Taptus]

Looks pretty decent and one to watch if it get regular updates. Looking forward to a cheating path first but I enjoy the other paths too you usually find in this sort of game. The Patreon seems to not be a creator profile atm so no one can sub. I usually wait to see consistant updates first anyway.

Hello! Yes, Patreon was disabled, but it is already working.

This year, the update will be closer to the New Year, then if I see interest in the game - every 15 days: 5th and 20th

 

[Taptus]

I'll wait another 4 versions or so, but it looks nice.

...sooo, someone found the "Buttsmithy" AI model, I see.

Hello! This is a regular SDXL with a PonyXL and LoRa "Incase Style"mod

 

[Taptus]

is NTR avoidable?

Hello! Yes, I plan to make a purely long-distance love line, NTR and NTS may be rejected. But in order to go along this branch, you will need to constantly make the right decisions, since the game itself will constantly challenge you for loyalty.

 

[Taptus]

I liked the game, it's far better than the half dozen other phone games, the MC is not a complete beta idiot, and you're not pigeon holed and forced into sharing, or being cheated on, it's nice to have a say whether you want it or not, the wifes friend finding the browser history was a bit much, it's almost a direct rip off from stay online

Hello, Yes, you noticed correctly, I took this plot move from this game. It seemed to me that this is a fairly simple way to show the interest of the main character as quickly as possible, without stretching the game for nothing. Otherwise, it would have stretched into several add-ons, which would not have been pleasant for most players, and most importantly, for myself. Now, I'm free to develop the game immediately from the active point and already having all the levers on the characters that allow me to come up with a really interesting and unique story.

 

[SSKY777]

honestly Kira is a rage inducing character I srsly wanted to punch her through the screen, I wish there was a branch completely removing her from the contacts and only talking to his friend Karl for the NTS

 

[russelld]

Hello! Thank you for your rating, it's a pity that this game is probably not for you. The game is made in this genre, because I like it first of all, that's how I see it. Perhaps not without the influence of other games of this genre.

I love this genre. However, please see the following and let me know what you will be adding in your game that's not alreeady there:

A Wife's Life
A Wife's Phone
Husband's Phone
A Phone Affair
Stay Online

In your prologue, the wife immediately is influenced by the friend and desires an open relationship. At least in these other games there is a slow buildup. My point is your story has been retold hundreds of times in multiple VN's and text based games and there is no originality.

 

[gamer2012boy]