VN Ren'Py Phone Story [v0.5] [Taptus]

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ItsNotUs said:
Description behind the scene? I played the Love Path and the NTR, i didn’t see such a description there, only the fact that Kira mentioned to MC that she knows Karl - i think it was necessary to add at least some text, personally i didn’t understand, i thought there was some kind of bug, because Kira sent only photos without any greetings.
I mean it's hard to understand Kira photo scene.
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Maybe I didn't put it right. Behind the scenes, I meant that this is not in the game, but it is implied that Lisa and Kira discussed it live.
As for the photos, Adam himself does not understand what kind of photo Kira sends Lisa, and only in the next dialogue between Kira and Adam, she explains to him that they are familiar with Karl. Well the player can make an inductive inference that in the photos of Cyrus + Carla.
 
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redoubt27 said:
A couple more small errors...
F173 - the chat image is for the "one or two drink" choice, but shows up in the "let her drink" convo with Karl.
F174 - is vice versa, the image is for the "let her drink" choice, but shows up in the "one or two drink" convo with Karl.

Not a big deal, but seemed inconsistent in context of the Karl & Lisa conversation.
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Thank you very much for your attention. I swapped these hints around!
 
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viper217 said:
Needs some different situational music to emphasize the saucy bits and give us a break from the one tune.
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To be honest, I always turn off music and even sounds in games from this site. I'm afraid that I won't be able to do this efficiently because I don't know much about it and it doesn't add to my own enjoyment
 
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Taptus said:
Maybe I didn't put it right. Behind the scenes, I meant that this is not in the game, but it is implied that Lisa and Kira discussed it live.
As for the photos, Adam himself does not understand what kind of photo Kira sends Lisa, and only in the next dialogue between Kira and Adam, she explains to him that they are familiar with Karl. Well the player can make an inductive inference that in the photos of Cyrus + Carla.
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It's still a little confusing, i understand what you're saying, but i only understood this scene after your explanation.
On the Love Path we see just a photo and we don’t even understand what this means, in NTR Path we find out that Kira knows Karl.
I understand that maybe i’m asking a lot, but this is just my opinion, that somehow this scene could have been played differently, a couple of phrases between photos like
Kira:
- Take a look
Lisa:
- Oh my god, that’s he for sure?
etc.
Just if they are nearby, why would Kira send a photo to Lisa’s phone if she could just show it to her, it would be great if we could use a surveillance camera and through it we would see what Kira shows Lisa on her phone and their conversation.

But it’s just my imagination, don’t pay attention! :coffee:
 
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ItsNotUs said:
It's still a little confusing, i understand what you're saying, but i only understood this scene after your explanation.
On the Love Path we see just a photo and we don’t even understand what this means, in NTR Path we find out that Kira knows Karl.
I understand that maybe i’m asking a lot, but this is just my opinion, that somehow this scene could have been played differently, a couple of phrases between photos like
Kira:
- Take a look
Lisa:
- Oh my god, that’s he for sure?
etc.
Just if they are nearby, why would Kira send a photo to Lisa’s phone if she could just show it to her, it would be great if we could use a surveillance camera and through it we would see what Kira shows Lisa on her phone and their conversation.

But it’s just my imagination, don’t pay attention! :coffee:
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I've taken your thoughts into consideration. Indeed, if you reject Kira, but leave Bob, then this scene looks inexplicable, I'll think about what can be done here for players on the path of love, thank you for your feedback!
 
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so we're waiting for the hero from [V0.6] :love:
because [V0.5] ends at the most interesting moment and now there's at least another month of waiting with the blue balls.. :HideThePain::WutFace:
 
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Cervixpunch said:
I mean this is a pirate site where people download stolen ethically copied work en masse for no cost. It'd be a little hard to get on one's high horse about the wrongs of using AI art in our pirated porn novels.

So if the pics look good, the plot interests them and the writing is doing the job people don't care much if a human or tool created an aspect of it so long as it's worth playing.
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I mean this is a forum of a "pirate" (this is not a pirate site, there are some unofficial port of course) site, where people talk about stuff and shit. It'b be a little hard to get on one's high horse about different taste, and what make you like or don't like something just because youre curious.

So you like the pics, and the texte from these game, thats all i want to know, yo can elaborate if you want, i can too, for me i don't really like the picture and writitng and gameplay and other mechanic from ai stuff, you lilke purple i prefere blue
 
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hmmm yeah i was kinda expecting this from human behavior, anyway, thanks for the only answer i got malha_vacas69
, sorry for people who get triggered, i know i don't use the best words for writting, but i was thinking that i was cleary exprime that i'm not here to shit on ppl or their mind, i tell explicitly (imo) that i don't like these game, but i would like to know why people like them.

i suppose that if you like the drawing of game it's because you like the drawing of game, same with text i guess, i'm totally aware that ai are not self working and need people to use them, once again i write here but i could go on any other ai game, sorry if you get that personnaly
 
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