Prologue only has to be a few pages. Just take an hour to sit down and start writing. You might not finish, but you can take an hour tomorrow to do some more. You guys have the idea here, at least in its skeleton, now you just need to add flesh.
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Will do that.. Though might not be any good at first...
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Don't worry, first tries are always bad. Things will get better with more experience, just don't give up before that.
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Will be in a narrative prospective, since otherwise it would be one of the girls which might take away a little of the story imo..
Since I'm not sure exactly how you mean this I'm gonna do you a solid and PM you my prologues on discord.
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Narrative being third person
One of the girls being first person
Since it cannot be of the MC's at the start since it will be the girls arriving at the university and the dorm room
One of the girls being first person
Since it cannot be of the MC's at the start since it will be the girls arriving at the university and the dorm room
Sent you some links to my prologues, hopefully they'll help you to structure your own. What I try to do is write as much narrative detail as I can in the first draft, something you'll see in one or both of them. That narrative detail will eventually be turned into art direction. You'll see an example of what I mean by art direction in the new prologue for Seraphim. The numbered image slots correspond to the art direction I've left for Funfiction.
But really, just write. That's the best advice I can give you. You don't have to be happy with it the first time. I wrote the prologue that I sent your from The Things We Do For Family over 2 months ago now, but it's still not perfect in my eyes. Needs some trimming to get rid of exposition that I can tell in another way.
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While working on a prologue decided to post Sadie/Aella's character sheet and add her to the OP
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Cool! Will be watching this thread. Good luck!Will of course give credit and links
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@Vincidon and I will be disconnecting for a couple days.. Hope to have something worthwhile when we get back!
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K.. So, 4/7 (could change) scenes done (needs some editing) for our prologue.. Still a bit to go, but @Kane 'Vincidon' Salvatore and I feel it's going well
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Hey I remember stumbling into this thread a little while back. Didnt know how to offer any help but saw yall of you working together here.
and now yall are getting to work on it. Good luck guys. The game sounds like it has a lot of promise and youve got a trove of help here
and now yall are getting to work on it. Good luck guys. The game sounds like it has a lot of promise and youve got a trove of help here
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Combo into one post
Advice, tips and reasonable requests are always welcome. Read through what you've missed before hand though.
Was too many posts in a row imo
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Adding to OP since it's sort of related
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Don't think we'll add ancient Greek religious stuff though penedeyewink:
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Got an idea for scene 5, hope to have the last three done sometime this weekend.
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k.. so going off of
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'Technical'
3dcg, animated (if we can), kinetic novel (for the prologue), male protagonist, multiple endings
'Sexual Content'
anal sex, ahegao (possible), bdsm (sadie), bestiality (sadie), ?big ass/tits? (not sure atm), blackmail (antagonists), bukkake (sadie), corruption, creampie, ?dilf? (protag is 39), domination (sadie), drugs (sadie), exhibitionism (hitomi), footjob, group sex, groping, handjob, harem, humiliation (sadie), incest (main theme), interracial, ?lactation? (want to, but not sure), lesbian, masturbation, milf (sadie's mom, other possible antagonist), multiple penetration (sadie), ntr ('if the hero can sleep around, so can the heroines'), oral sex, ?pregnancy? (want to, but not sure), prostitution (sadie), rape (sadie), sex toys, sexual harassment, ?slave? (possible sadie angle), somnophilia (sleep sex, sadie), spanking, stripping, ?swinging? (thinking of something for this), teasing, titfuck, vaginal sex, virgin, voyeurism
'Non-Sexual Content'
cosplay (sadie), humor (why not?), romance, school setting (university), simulator (want to make it seem 'real'), twins (so much want)
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thoughts and opinions?
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Kinetic novel and multiple ends are mutually exclusive IMO, use Visual Novel if one can choose an ending or KN if it's a self contained no-choice game.
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the prologue will be kinetic.. though will be a part of the main game the prologue will be released first
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