VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Picture Perfect [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

I played it during development, so I was disappointed — from version 0.7 or 0.8 there was a revamp and the character design changed (especially Sasha became worse), so I couldn't play anymore. After a while I gathered my strength and finished it, but it wasn't worth it, I don't even remember the ending. Although the beginning was good...

Since this game has been completed for several years it seemed a little silly to me to bother leaving a rating but I felt it was still necessary.

Pros: First, overall, I enjoyed the game very much. I thought that the plot started out very well and the pacing was perfect. The models were very well done and the story, although a little generic, kept me hooked. I liked the background that the dev established for each of the LIs including the friend.

Cons: The reason I cannot rate it a 5 star, is there was no serious threat or challenge presented in the story. As a player, there were not really any decisions to be made that could seriously impact the main plot.

At the very beginning of the story, the lack of money for the mortgage payment loomed but it didn't really have any effect on the MC treating and dating any of the LIs at any point of the story which was a bit of a let down.

There was no way to permanently ruin or threaten any of the MC's relationships either. It was just smooth sailing to the finish line and that caused the ending to be a little boring to me. There was no outside jealous males (or females) competing for the LI's attention, no ex GF for the MC to contend with, no nosey neighbors questioning the antics of siblings.... nothing. This caused the story to be quite Kinetic IMHO. I think even a small amount of adversity mixed in could have easily made this VN a five star game.

I give it 4 stars for the Incest kink, 4 stars for the Models and 3 stars for the story. Well done.

A good game with a nice story. The girls are all likeable and dont come off as annoying/irritating. Each have different personalities and are well written.

It is your typical incest story where the girls fall for the dad but can give it a try

It was a good and short game, the girls look nice and all of them are different. The Story itself was not much to remember. Multiple Ending were by choice, even the harem route. its more 3,7 of 5 stars than 4.

I just finished playing this game for the second time and enjoyed it. The story is and graphics are good. No animations make this game dated as the newer games are full of them. But no knock on this game for that as it ended more than 3 years ago. I love reading so I do focus on the novel part of VN as well so enjoyed clicking and reading here. Till the next game then.

Excellent plot with characters I actually cared about. I wouldn't go quite so far as to say I would still play the game if the sex was removed, but I can say several times I continued playing after "taking care of things" because I wanted to see what happened next.

Graphics are about what I'd expect for VN (not great, but not anywhere near bad enough to detract from anything), and animations are minimal (rather no animations than bad ones, so possibly a point there.)

Overall, 8/10.

Edit: typo.

The ending was kind of anti-climactic, but overall, the story, the models, artwork, characters, script was very good, I would give this higher than 4 stars, at least 4.5, because the time and work that is dedicated into this game is well worth.

This is the first harem game in which I preferred playing solo path instead of harem. A lot of lesbian stuff, which was a huge turn off for me. Everybody with everybody, like rabbits even though during the game i made choices which were supposed to reduce this lesbo shit, at least according to guide.

Some characters are very bad written, i don't believe them, I don't fall for them. For example Miracle, from my perspective as a player, she in just few renders made a path from pure, innocent and shy girl into an anal quinn, nympho and lesbian, when? why? Maybe in some background scenes which weren't released or in Dev's imagination. Well, she became lesbian because idiot MC were encouraging it, he was literally teaching girls lesbo stuff (this shit ruined atmosphere in a game entirely for me). But what about other?
Sasha and her scene with mother, game makes you to believe that Sasha with her temper, Sasha who has been hating Paris for years because her Ex kissed her, that she just forgave mother for leaving them, really now? whatever reasons she had, that was stupid.
Seriously, all those details and holes in story make you realise that Girls, except Paris, are just empty soulless NPCs.

Ok, little conclusion:
The main story was fine with few priceless moments, but when Routes-Story started, it started to suck.


Miracle/Sabrina Path - lesbian stuff and abrupt Miracle's transformation, very poor path.

Sasha Path - would have been great if it wasn't for this stupid mother reunion scene.

Harem Path - a lot of lesbian stuff, like a lot, be aware, just like i wrote earlier - like rabbits. Also there were a lot of corny and pointless dialogue on this rout, pointless scenes, so, in addition to annoyance harem path was boring.

Paris Path - the best one, if you ask me, very touching, cute.

3 start out of 5 and not 1 only because of Paris solo path and at the start of a game there were few great moments with humor, i literally was laughing my ass off, like rehearsal with Sasha or the 4th wall scene.

A must play if you are into incest. From an incestpoint of view I give this game 5 stars, if not for that I would have to lower the rating because the story gets a bit boring towards the end and there is not that much going on.

Everything feels Just average here.
Nice looking girls, with nice different personalities at first... but no.

- Personalities are underdeveloped, so different at start but almost same in the end
- not much of build up here, characters are too flat, everything feels somewhat rushed and unbeliveable
- too much time skips, feels like not a game but some disconnected scenes
- very few side characters, empy world
- story consists of nothing original or interesting
- Ending are boring and not satisfying
- points system suggests playing only with walkthrough

The game is not bad overall but characters are flat without normal build up, actions are rushed and unbeliveable, scene - time skip few weeks - "they were fucking every night" is not nice and wholesome storytelling.
I can recommend playing this game if nothing else to play. 3/5

Side-story of each girl and how to get close to them is pretty good and different. But other than that there isn't a plot that I can call 'a main story'.
Time jumps are not often but takes away a lot from the game. Characters are finally getting together, they have sex and in the blink of an eye, days passes. You don't get to see how they handled the start of the relationship and keeeping it as a secret etc. At some point girls find out about MC's relationship with other daughters and they are weirdly ok with. (For a girl like Paris, it's pretty way out of character thing to do.)
Art is pretty good. Models are quite good looking.
Cute, sexy, different characters, except for one. Sabrina is down right failure. Her dialogues are cringe as hell. Writing generally is something between 'meh' and 'ok'.
Lack of animation and number of sex scenes.
Lack of side characters is also a negative.
I was gonna vote 2 stars but I know SuperWriter's other works. The Dev pretty good.
It's worth playing if you have nothing better to play.

This game was decent. I enjoyed the story, it was pretty light but each woman in the story (except the friend) had a pretty unique personality and good storyline.

There were a few topics (money issues, harem route) that didn't totally make sense or get fleshed out, but gorgeous models get you a lot of forgiveness.

Wow, talk about a slow pace!

+ Excellent models.
+ Pretty good story
+ Decent jokes.

- It's a pretty slow burner, my god, nothing happens in this so-called sex game! I've been playing for 4 hours and haven't even seen one nude! the first day was alright but after the week jump, it's just talking and talking and talking!
- They sometimes push some things a little too much, like trying too hard to make some interactions look natural and dynamic and they end up feeling weird and forced. not often though.
- Dynamic back and forth between characters. at least until it becomes too much and too often(like literally every single conversation) it's like the characters are always on a talk show, they're always on! talk like a normal person once in a while and don't drag every single frivolous conversation into a long-winded back and forth!
- There's some misandry from the female characters, but that's to be expected. the dev is trying to make them look like strong women and these days being a strong woman means misandry!

overall, I'm gonna keep playing it for now, but since there's no sex or anything sexual after hours of dialogue after dialogue, I'm losing interest fast! I'm at the point of skipping some conversations since I know they're just pointless and a waste of time.

I give this a 5.5/10. just too much talking and no progression.

I couldn't even bother finishing it. Story is kind of meh, dialogues are super boring, no animation so sex scene is also lackluster, the incest/harem elements are very mediocre in hindsight. Overall not my couple of tea.

I recently had the urge to replay this game, and you know what? It holds up really well! It obviously has its' shortcomings, the renders are dated, there are no animations, it ends. But the writing is really solid, and my favourite part is how distinct and rounded the characters of the daughters are, and how MC has to go about wooing them or being wooed by them in different ways. Its also just kind of a touching story. Also MC can knock up his blue haired firstborn and that's objectively a win!

“I believe that I am going to climax, father.” — A British person, allegedly.

This is just too cringe for me. I can't do it. All the girls are supposed to be over 18, but they are written like they are slutty teenagers, constantly ask for it.

The games where you play an amoral MC who's trying to corrupt everyone feel less bad because those games are not constantly trying to absolve the MC of any responsibility. This one does everything in its power to establish that it was girls that wanted it, the MC is just enduring this hot incest sex.

PROs:

• Sex scenes are sometimes well paced and written.
• If you shut off your critical thinking, it can be sweet for a brief second.

CONs:

• The daughter that thinks that reading books as an adult makes you a nerd… What is going on in the USA?
• The daughter who is infantilized to the point of seeming a little neurodivergent. She legit is written like she is special needs, and it feels so wrong.
• The daughter whose personality is wearing headphones and being one of the boys.
• The girl whose personality is being British and therefore that somehow makes her mature for her age and in turn that makes everything you do with her okay, “Somebody is telephoning me on my mobile telephone”… wtf. Her dialogue is beyond cringe.
• Tone-deaf jokes about the “political climate”: “If you walk around with an erection, you'll get me too-ed, XD”.
• The writing will literally make your eyes roll back into your head, permanently.
• Having money troubles? Think you might not be able to pay the rent? Introducing, taking your mentally-challenged daughter to an expensive hotel in order to take her virginity away from the prying eyes of her sisters!
• Weak-ass harem: “Sure daddy, it's fine if you sleep with all my sisters after you started a committed relationship with me.“

TL;DR: ONLY play this game if you like imagining that your underage niece who isn't all there in the head is trying to seduce you.

I can't believe this game has such a high average rating.

It's a nice and interesting story about the MC and his 3 daughters plus 1 extra girl who spiritually is like a fourth daughter. Each one of them has a different personality and you can decide if you pursuit them or not. There are several choices which can affect somewhat the story and the scenes that take place and in the end you can choose which route to take.

If you want to have a good time with a plot that is not so dense then this VN is for you, also there are no animations, but personally it didn't affect the experience for me.

I really love f/d games but here I'm kinda on the fence.
I find the characters inconsistent with the way they are presented. One of the girls is very shy but in a same time has no problem to finger herself in a room full of people.
The oldest daughter suppose to be a party girl, but in her twenties she is still a virgin. That's just weird and I know the dev also finds it weird, otherwise he would not gave her bs story about mental issues in order to justify it.

This brings me to my second point.

The game leans heavy on virgin fetish, but there really isn't much else to find here.
The game feels bland and empty there is no exciting plot, no interesting side characters, no nothing. It's just, here are four girls, pop their cherries and we are done.
That by itself might be enough if we got some exciting seduction games or corruption, but nope, all the girls are really in to you day one.

Since graphics and sex scenes won't save this war either, I'm giving rating of 3/5, average score for average game.

Look, this game is not trying to be a unique force which will change the incest games forever. It sticks to the tropes of typical slice of life nonsense a family - a mother faces. But you know what? It does so WELL. It doesn't pretend to be anything more than it is, as if the game understands it has a role to play and just takes us along for the trials and tribulation of a family on the mend.

With the father trying to be the glue that holds it all together, he is relatively boring, the jokes sometimes fly but often they're just ok. The dialogues range from interesting to cringy but it doesn't visit that cringy part particularly often. The sex scenes are mediocre, no animations and relatively few pictures, it relies more on creating kink and taboo than raw sexual appeal.

So, this game is not a three course meal of the finest french cuisine, it is a hamburger - but sometimes you just want a good burger, and that's what you get here.

if you like the tags, feel more than welcome to try it and you will get:
- nice story with fine pacing,
- great characters,
- awesome models,
- satisfying ending

so, overall a wonderfull package