VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Picture Perfect [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

As a whole this game is pretty good, decent story telling, not in the category of 'rushed' but also not in the category of 'fleshed out'. It's somewhere in the middle. The girls had character and the MC is alright.

The models are also pretty great.

Though if I had to isolate the harem direction away from the game, I would probably really enjoy this game for a good romance progressive story between each character. I understand that you can go that route - and I did see the harem + one other ending, though for me this would be a 5 star review if it were a game focused on building a relationship between one or two of the girls. If the dev fleshed out a girls story, this would be a gem.

The Paris route was interesting, satisfying and believable. The ending to that route was sweet and worthwhile. At times it reminded me of the relationship in other masterpieces such as Dreaming of Dana and the good half of My sister my roomate. The taboo, the progression and impact could have been fleshed out to be a real game changer in the category.

Though, solid attempt and good to see the dev complete his game. Cheers.

Solid story telling and great renders. Each of the girls has a distinct personality beyond "I need sex 24/7" which again sets this game apart from a lot of VNs.

There isn't much to say against this game besides to some people including myself Sabrina looks like an anorexic crack whore with her sunken eyes and just odd proportions.

Besides that and the Harem ending suddenly including quick time events and only really having one very brief sex scene with all the girls this is a 4 star game through and through.

Props to the author for finishing the game as that is probably the highest complement anyone on F95 can give.

[Completed] version, My thoughts :

• The game is lacking on writing department, so i hope the writing could be better for future game. Other than choosing which girl you wanted to be with, the player had no freedom to do anything at all in the game. I hope the dev could take this in consideration for future releases because it could make the game even better
• The scenes are not that good, could put more effort on creating the scenes because there are not a lot of scenes in this game and still... the quality of each scenes is bad.
• Not a buggy mess, thats a plus. No need to start over and all that
• The girls are great, like the model

Not the best experience i have ever had but not the worst either, i hope their next game could be better.

I've been playing all the games SuperWriter has put out so far, and I have to say that the name says it all. The stories are on point with character development and follow a good logical path, all the while letting the player still have agency in what path to follow without destroying the story in mind.

Wow, just. Wow. Some games leave me relatively close to a loss for words and this is one of them. Amazing writing, great story, UNBELIEVABLE character personalities. The whole thing is stunningly captivating. To the point that I literally crushed this VN in one day... And it's not short by any means. Great, great, great work. You're a beauty.

Picture Perfect [v0.13] [SuperWriter]

I recently played "Picture Perfect", and I have to say, it's a game that manages to strike a balance between simplicity and depth. The storyline is refreshingly straightforward, sparing players from unnecessary details and instead employing time skips to keep the narrative concise. Initially, it felt like the game was laying the groundwork for something grander, but as I delved deeper, it became evident that the developer intended to deliver a more contained and focused experience.

The characters in "Picture Perfect" are a mixed bag. While I found myself genuinely fond of most of them, there were a few quirks that struck me as somewhat perplexing. Paris, for instance, emerged as my favorite character, boasting a well-rounded persona and an engaging character arc. However, her inexplicable blue hair left me scratching my head – black hair would have been a more fitting choice in my opinion.

Sasha, on the other hand, initially gave off an odd impression with something peculiar about her facial features. As the game progressed, I either got used to it, or her character design improved – perhaps a bit of both. She also had one of the game's more compelling character arcs.

Miracle, with her exaggerated social anxiety, often came across as mentally underdeveloped, and it seemed like she needed to be handled with kid gloves by the other characters. Sabrina's transformation into an adoptive daughter felt rushed and inadequately explained. It left me re-reading the relevant dialogue several times, still unable to grasp how this transition occurred. It almost felt like a narrative convenience rather than a well-constructed plot point. It also seemed that Sabrina was introduced later to serve as an English caricature character, considering her close friendship with Miracle.

The characters' names, such as Miracle and Sabrina, raised questions for me. I wondered if there was a deeper thematic connection or perhaps a subtle joke in their names relating to magic, but this was left unexplored in the game.

Finally, the character of the Mother intrigued me due to her appealing appearance, which I found to be the best among all the characters. However, her backstory, which was portrayed as unnecessarily dark to justify her departure from the narrative, gave me a sense of tonal inconsistency, leaving me feeling somber.

In conclusion, "Picture Perfect" is a game that offers a streamlined and enjoyable gaming experience. It successfully avoids the pitfalls of excessive exposition and filler dialogue that can plague other titles. While there are some intriguing characters and storylines, there are also elements that could benefit from further development and clarification. Despite these shortcomings, the game manages to deliver an engaging and concise narrative that sets it apart from those that tend to overindulge in complexity.

I've been following the game for quite a while now....

I cannot believe...that I didn't rated it yet......first things first....

The amazing parts:

• - Sasha
• - I really like the story
• - The characters are really interesting and different, with depth and personal struggles
• - Sasha
• - The renders are really really good
• - A lot of choices and paths to follow and try

The weird part:

• For some reason I like the old renders better....they were somehow more.....serious

I always avoid giving my unnecessary opinion what should be done in a game, because it's the dev's story to tell.... especially if I didn't support the game with subscribes.....but if I had a one wish.... I would want more SASHA <3.

Thanks for the amazing game !!!

The start is really good, writing is good, renders are good.

Right from the start there is some tension and things going on, which makes your time reading worth since you are seeing things progressing.
There are 3 events, one with each girl.
After this there is a ONE WEEK LATER, and the moment i saw it i knew it was a tool to brush what happened under the rag, and thats what happened.

The progression got sort of reset, and the things going on at the beggining dissapeared. So, the text took over, and with nothing happening, that amount of text is just too much, its like 15 minutes of reading for some subquest to get Miracle into the dorms, and some peck in the lips.

The first 90 minutes, excuding the first 20, are empty, is not porn, is not even erotic.

This is it as of 0.3.

There is a sudden change after that, but it doesnt improve. Sex scenes are lacking, there is even a scene of a handjob that you may think it hasnt started until you see the guy coming. The girls hands never move one inch.
inner monologue is too much and at some point it seems the girls are reading it and offering reasoned explanations to dismiss his inner monologue hesitation.

Fomr experience the only things that come to you imagination in that situations are simulations of how your life can be atfer you proceed, like, how are you gonna dismiss, what may happen if you end up in jail and such.

This MC has 3 daughters but most of the time the vibe he gives is the one of a virgin. Stuttering, bein nervous about everything.

I would totally give it 2 stars but renderes are good, all the writing deserves something cause its decent, and Sasha looks really good.

But overall IMHO the game is a dissapointment.

Review of v0.12...

I really like the character models. I appreciate the dev choosing realistic bodies instead of giving everybody large cow tits. Sasha and Miracle were my favorite models. They were gorgeous.

There is pregnancy which I was happy to see, though it's only with Paris.

Miracle (I’m not a fan of that name) is 18 and extremely timid to an unrealistic degree. The MC tries to rationalize it as her reaction to their mother abandoning them. I’m not sure I buy someone having this kind of extreme reaction to something like that, but at least there was an attempt to explain why an extremely timid character is the way she is. Also, I do like how she does a complete 180 during sex and acts like a complete slut for you. I found that a bit humorous.

Paris (Not a real fan of this name either) would have looked better without her blue hair. I didn’t really care for her at first, but her attitude drastically improved after she confessed her love for the MC. I didn’t have any real issue with her otherwise.

I liked Sasha. She was passionate about what she wanted to do and didn’t give a fuck what anybody though about her. She’s the kind of girl I would want to date.

I like Sabrina for the most part, but she talks way too formally for somebody who is supposed to have been a friend for so long she’s considered family.

The writing could be better. Some grammar issues here and there. Such as putting the number “2” in the place of the word “two” in a character’s dialogue. There are also a couple of fourth wall breaks which I’m not a fan of. They kind of took me out of the game.

There is a lot of story and drama with the abandonment of the mother. Story seemed to be the dev's focus since there is a lot of talk of all the sex you all have, yet there are only maybe two penetration scenes for each girl. At the end, with each of the girl's solo routes at least, they decide to meet up with their mother to vent their feelings and find out why she left them.

The sex scenes could be better. They only consist of a couple of static images with no animation.

When I got to the end it said the solo paths for Miracle, Sasha, and Paris were complete, but the solo path for Sabrina and the harem route weren't. I'm guessing that means the game is nearly complete.

I like the game for the most part. A little rough in some places, but glad I played it. I look forward to returning to it in it's completed state.

2.5 Stars, really. But I'll give three on F95 because the dev did put in a lot of effort into this project. The game simply isn't one that really fits my tastes.

If you're looking for something to fap to for the sake of fapping, keep looking. But if you like a little bit of sex with some weird drama story, then this game might for you. The game spends more time on dialogue and feelings than it does on sex. If my memory is serving me correctly, you could probably count the number of penetration sex scenes with each girl throughout the game all on one hand. After your first encounters with them, it's just written in that sex between these characters has become a regular thing. A bummer, but I realize it's not necessarily laziness, it's probably more the case the dev is prioritizing story over fapping material. It's a simple fact that sex scenes themselves never ever actually contribute to the story.

Speaking of the story, basically, you're a "not-father" (you get the option to pen in your relationship) and a bunch of girls and one of their friends has a huge crush on you, but they're too afraid to just ask you out. Stuff happens, you get laid, happy endings for everyone. Honestly, I got fucking bored with it.

Paris and Sasha are hot. I like them both, 'nuff said.
But Miracle, I do not like. She is absolutely unbelievable in all the bad ways. She's supposed to be a daddy's girl, but she's actually just an idiotic dependent written with an unrealistically low level of common sense and zero understanding of how the real world works. I feel like if the MC told her it was normal to chew on condoms like bubblegum, she would believe it.
I am willing to admit that I got lazy with the game later on, and began to just skip things. It is perfectly possible she gets better later, but I don't know, and I doubt it.

If one thing did get better about this game over the course of its development, it's the 3d cg. This game's high point is its graphics. The renders are fabulous. Some of the characters, notably Miracle, looked absolutely terrible in earlier builds of the game. IMO, Miracle in particular still looks a bit derpy, but it's leagues above how she used to look. She does get a scene with her hair down, and I wish that was the default style. Good on the dev for putting in a lot of effort here.

This game is nice and easy going. Quality of renders is fine, animations do their job, music is calming and relaxing. This game is over all relaxing. That's go to the plot and story as well. Story has no particular gradation. It's scheme is common but not boring. Sum up, this game is above average and relaxing. Well done. 6.5/10. [v0.11]

A classic story but well written, interesting characters (wink to Sasha) and well done, the choices are there and really allow you to do what you want.

I wouldn't describe the characters to you, go for it and discover them yourself, overall, Picture Perfect is a bit classic and short, but it shows that we can very well make short games while being very well done and well written, that's what SuperWriter did, thanks to him. 5/5

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So, I finished the game at its current status, and I have mixed feelings about it. I took the Paris solo route, and I didn't even bother with the other girls. I'm a sucker for MILFs and, in their absence, I usually go with the most mature girl.

And I liked it. I liked her. Both physically and psychologically. Her face looked... How should I say it... Real? Another thing I also liked (though I'm not 100% sure if it's a good point or just simply a point) is that, IMO, you get to know the girls better when they interact with each other, instead of just with the MC.

So... Anyways. I think the renders are good. Maybe a bit scarce, especially during the hot scenes, but they're fine. Music is ok. I found the dialogues captivating, and the story for each character was decent.

However... I get the feeling that the content is overall scarce. Maybe part of the problem was that I wasn't working to get a harem, but still... With Paris as an example: I got the love confession scene (which I think was great), the MC cheating confession scene (which was good), followed by a long while without anything, and pretty much only that's left is the dinner and the yoga training scenes, before the ending that's yet to come.

And those scenes are all good, don't get me wrong. But it feels as if there's been a lack of content, as if there hasn't been time or scenes enough to see how the relationship keeps developing. I don't know, I'd like to see the first steps of their relationship, for example. I like seeing them committed to each other, but I'd like it even more if I actually saw how they reached that point, if you get what I mean. I'd also like having a few more hot scenes. Not all of them need to be that way, but a bit more content in that regard would be appreciated.

Overall, I wouldn't say the game feels rushed. That's not the feeling I get. Scarce or short would fit better.

I had high hopes for this game, judging from description, high ratings etc. But the girls are not so beautiful, and it starts with long, tedious quarrels. "Why the hell would I play this?", I thought, and deleted it.

It was a boring experience & zero entertainment for me.

If there's more interesting content ahead, maybe the developer should remove starting scenes, as Chekhov did with his stories, and it might become playable for guys like me.

Somethings..... different. The renders are nice and orginally when i played it, it was interesting and the girls seemed harder to get. Then it had a revamp and i don't know it just doesn't seem... the same. Its hard to describe becuase all the elements are still there, the girls now just want to jump me as soon as possible. Maybe i'm playing it differently but i'm not enjoying it as much as before. And i don't think i've taken one picture.

Redesigned models look better for the most part with a few exceptions. For some reason Paris has a butt that looks like a sad sack of potatoes now and her dress looks like loose moleskin at times (especially from behind). Sasha and Brit girl have less eye makeup so it makes them look like they have tiny eyes in some scenes, (it's a lot more noticeable with Sasha). Miracle's head seems somewhat larger somehow, not sure how this happened. The MC looks better though, before it was kinda hilarious how he was rocking a slight beer gut.

Hi SuperWriter
I truly enjoy this story, as well as your other works, you bring your characters to life. I am not personally a fan of the graphics changes, in general. There are a few things better (brighter lighting helps the characters pop more), but overall they seem more cartoony to me. There are also some strange artifacts around the eyes (yellowish eyeballs and bad mascara). I know others love the changes, and the important thing is that you love your work and are inspired to write more.

And that's where I have to get a bit critical. There are a lot of really easy grammar mistakes to fix in the first part of the story. The images are enchanting, before AND after, but the story is what matters most, and so it seems to me that by adding an extra 1/10 of the time and effort needed to re-do images, you could polish up the writing and story. Many VNs that I read end up getting some text improvements throughout, after each release. That is a great way to make sure the final product is amazing, but also gets people to re-read the story on each release, and to provide new feedback

Again, though - great story and artwork, you are one of the best out there right now

This is an excellent game, i love all the things in it. Good story and very well written, i was reading it all and did not wanted to skip or miss anything. I like the MC and the cast of girls are very very hot and well done. Every girl with their uniqui style an personallity. Im eager to see where the story is going to and of course the sex scenes! GG well played by dev best of luck and see you in future updates!

This game is really awesome.
The pictures and story are perfect. If you like this kind of visual novel, I totally suggest giving it a shot. Try it out and help the developer, they're doing great work. And by the way, Sasha is the best character. It's definitely not a waste of time.
Thank you SuperWriter