We have different tastes, my friend.
Personally, I enjoy NTR (Netorare) stories that meet three key criteria:
- The main character (MC) is not stupid – He’s aware of what’s happening, even if he’s emotionally conflicted.
- The MC’s girlfriend is a likable character for the player – She should be sweet and loving when alone with the MC, but secretly "bad" or unfaithful when she's with her "bull."
- The bull is a charismatic and superior man – He should be likable, clever, and clearly a better man (in some aspects) than the MC.
The game
Pineapple Express does a pretty good job of fulfilling all three of these points. I find the girlfriend character to be quite charming—she's actually very loyal
if you set clear boundaries.
However, your concept seems to clash with my second point. A woman who gives in
that quickly and is that promiscuous loses the reader’s respect—and, if the MC isn’t stupid (point 1), he should also lose his affection for her.
In other words, from my
masochistic perspective, any new characters added to the story should be other women—also likable and endearing to the reader. They could be the MC's sister, mother, adult daughter, or even a secret love interest. The MC could start to fall for this other woman, believing she’s different, only to have
her betray him in the same way as his girlfriend—perhaps even
with the girlfriend—right in front of him, in various humiliating ways... and the MC doesn’t get to touch anything.
For me, NTR without that sense of
helplessness just doesn’t hit the same.
Muahaha!
All in all, I think Cornell alone is enough. Simon just gets in the way.
