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Ren'Py Pink House Rework [v0.36] [Shutulu]

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shutulu

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It is, I don't think it's a bad thing if you know how to do it.

shutulu

Feedback:

The good so far:
-Ideally this is presented as a corruption/revenge game with an MC who is not afraid of women nor is he a child... I mean "18" year old boy obsessed with his mother. (y)
- It's not a romance game where the MC has to "save" his girls from something for the fifth time.;)
-The MC is the villain.:love:
- The girls are sexy and the renders are not bad (but they can be improved).(y)

The bad:

-The story focuses on corrupting girls, this is a double-edged sword, it can be very good or become repetitive, be careful.
-Sandbox, for many this kills the game, for me this can work if you make a guide or sell objectives, remember that not everyone likes to spend 5 hours earning points or exploring where to go.
-The mechanics, the characters don't look bad but they look somewhat robotic, maybe investing in creating some more renders would create a little more atmosphere.
-Animations/sounds, there are none, for me it is not really a problem but surely several will cry.
-Maybe give the MC a stronger reason to hate his brother, and make the player empathize with him. (maybe less dick)

Conclusion: It is an excellent idea, which can be a success (everyone likes a corrupt MC who steals girls), but it will require several improvements, take your time and follow your own ideas.

Good luck.
thanks for the comments and ideas, I agree that you should not spend 5 hours before you can do something, that's why I added the neighbor of the original idea so you have a woman to access quickly, I think I'll put one more girl that is easy to corrupt while working with the women of the family.
 

shutulu

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like someone else said, really the mc sounds like a major dick. I mean unless it is shown that his step bro ruined his life and got him to stay with him, just to rub his succes on mc's face, I dont see how destroying his bro.. ehem, step brother's life, is the way to go.

you might wanna raise the MC's Translucency Weight, slider a bit, cause he and the Sun are obviously not getting along well.
as I put the intro it was more of a quicker idea, now that the game is published I can increase the story behind the MC's hatred for his stepbrother, like in his youth he stole the girl he loved, sounds like a good idea.
 
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shutulu

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Why is this called rework if it's the first release?
some years ago I published a game with the same name, although I used honey select at that time, I didn't feel so comfortable to make the idea and I abandoned it, but now I use Daz and I like the way it looks better.
 

Ryuke

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Two issues with the build thus far.

Daughter's room after shower (manga) 1702937962178.png

Kitchen at 11:00pm

(see attached traceback.txt.)

Would be nice to rollback these errors, instead of quitting out of the game.
 

Spyderwraith

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So you only get one week? Monday comes around for me and its game over? I did not get high suspicion either
 

Papy.ion6984

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console not on
Download the file attached
unzip and copy/paste this file in your game folder (Like the picture in spoiler)
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Launch your game, load a save, then , type shift + o (o like oscar)(right click to exit console)
more info about this file : https://f95zone.to/threads/enabling-developer-command-consoles-in-renpy.113/post-241369

I hope that help you.

Sorry if my english is not very good !
View attachment dirtyConsole.zip
 
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kdy18

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For some reason, progress with Vanessa and I just won’t get off the ground:
at 7 am in the kitchen she refuses help and that’s it - no more dialogues.
 
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