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Ren'Py Power Vacuum [Ch. 12 Official] [What? Why? Games]

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panzermaster said:
I am pretty sure you already read it before, but if you want it again :

Hunter sucesfully frames Sterling and manage to convince the girls that their sibling/son was trying to corrupt them all along. Sterling is exiled out of the house. Sterling now tries to make sure that hunter does not corrupt the girl and take away their future.

He remains in Contact with Lucia that assure him that she will counter Hunter's tactics from inside of the house. Sterling manages to keep Hunter away from his loved ones with her help.

Months later, Ophelia will offer an olive branch and invite him inside the house again where she will agree to listen to what Sterling has to say about Hunter. Sterling will enter the house and the girl will be polite and nice when they receive him.

Sterling will present new proof that Hunter was really the one drugging everyone and they will all be shocked by such revelation. They will all apologise for how they treated him and exiled him from the house when he was only trying to protect them. They will offer him to supper with them since now he can safely return to the house. Sterling will be relieved that he has his family back, he will eat, drink and then will feel sleepy in the middle of the supper and will go on the couch.

When Sterling wakes up, he realise he is being chained, unable to move and the girl all look at him with ominous eyes. Sterling is unerved and ask what is happening... Then Hunter enters the room and ask the girl to greet him with kisses and grope his crotch to which they immediatly obey.

It will be revealed that Lucia as long been corrupted by Hunter soon after Sterling left and she was lying when she said that Hunter was kept under control. All of those tactics were only an illusion to keep Sterling quiet.

And now the girls have been corrupted to an inimaginable degree. They still very much believe that Sterling try to corrupt them from the beginning and now they are trying to enact vengeance on him. Now they are as bad as Hunter, they are willing to twist the knife into Sterling hearts by their own will.

They are looking at him in the eyes and tell him straight up that they no longer care about him, that hunter is NOW their master and that Sterling will never be intimate with them ever again even after Hunter's death. Of course they use subtlety in their words (would be preferable) but the intention from their communication needs to be clear.

And for the rest of his life, Sterling will have to watch his women be fucked and impregnated by hunter with the full understanding that it's not simply their body who are addicted to pleasure, their mind as been twisted in order to make Sterling suffer by Teasing him endlessly but NEVER giving him the satisfaction of orgasm. They will make sure he will remain prisonner for the reminder of his life even after Hunter's death and will always deny him any sexual satisfaction...
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This doesn't really make sense. The only reason Sterling was saved at the end was because Drew let Lucia confirm Sterling's story to the family.

Change Lucia to Ophelia who promised to keep an eye out and investigate to Sterling
 
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pinkie96 said:
This doesn't really make sense. The only reason Sterling was saved at the end was because Drew let Lucia confirm Sterling's story to the family.

Change Lucia to Ophelia who promised to keep an eye out and investigate to Sterling
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I admit that this scenario was written before chapter 12 release, I would need to rewrite it thinking about the new elements that came in recently.
 
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panzermaster said:
I am pretty sure you already read it before, but if you want it again :

Hunter sucesfully frames Sterling and manage to convince the girls that their sibling/son was trying to corrupt them all along. Sterling is exiled out of the house. Sterling now tries to make sure that hunter does not corrupt the girl and take away their future.

He remains in Contact with Lucia that assure him that she will counter Hunter's tactics from inside of the house. Sterling manages to keep Hunter away from his loved ones with her help.

Months later, Ophelia will offer an olive branch and invite him inside the house again where she will agree to listen to what Sterling has to say about Hunter. Sterling will enter the house and the girl will be polite and nice when they receive him.

Sterling will present new proof that Hunter was really the one drugging everyone and they will all be shocked by such revelation. They will all apologise for how they treated him and exiled him from the house when he was only trying to protect them. They will offer him to supper with them since now he can safely return to the house. Sterling will be relieved that he has his family back, he will eat, drink and then will feel sleepy in the middle of the supper and will go on the couch.

When Sterling wakes up, he realise he is being chained, unable to move and the girl all look at him with ominous eyes. Sterling is unerved and ask what is happening... Then Hunter enters the room and ask the girl to greet him with kisses and grope his crotch to which they immediatly obey.

It will be revealed that Lucia as long been corrupted by Hunter soon after Sterling left and she was lying when she said that Hunter was kept under control. All of those tactics were only an illusion to keep Sterling quiet.

And now the girls have been corrupted to an inimaginable degree. They still very much believe that Sterling try to corrupt them from the beginning and now they are trying to enact vengeance on him. Now they are as bad as Hunter, they are willing to twist the knife into Sterling hearts by their own will.

They are looking at him in the eyes and tell him straight up that they no longer care about him, that hunter is NOW their master and that Sterling will never be intimate with them ever again even after Hunter's death. Of course they use subtlety in their words (would be preferable) but the intention from their communication needs to be clear.

And for the rest of his life, Sterling will have to watch his women be fucked and impregnated by hunter with the full understanding that it's not simply their body who are addicted to pleasure, their mind as been twisted in order to make Sterling suffer by Teasing him endlessly but NEVER giving him the satisfaction of orgasm. They will make sure he will remain prisonner for the reminder of his life even after Hunter's death and will always deny him any sexual satisfaction...
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...It never ceases to amaze me how puerile, and unimaginative ntr stories are. Dude, really? If you want some good examples of ntr stories look them up on literotica. I still hate them, but at least the writers make a fucking effort to be somewhat original. Although given ntr it always ends the same idiotic way.
 
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Snugglepuff said:
You can feel empathy for anyone... Up to a point.
How people are regarding that guy, commenting about him/his condition etc, that's him reaping the whirwind, and it's nothing compared to what he's done.




It's equally plausible as what's already been discussed with the guy who was doxxed and purportedly being under investigation. Ultimately pro-NTR/Anti-NTR has bugger-all to do with what they did. Them being fucking scum did.
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Agreed. Regardless of the fanbase if one feels the inclination to start intervening maliciously in another's life over an AVN they should consider taking a pause. Touch grass and then go seek therapy, because clearly they have some unresolved issues to work out.
 
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Gambit588 said:
...It never ceases to amaze me how puerile, and unimaginative ntr stories are. Dude, really? If you want some good examples of ntr stories look them up on literotica. I still hate them, but at least the writers make a fucking effort to be somewhat original. Although given ntr it always ends the same idiotic way.
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Oh and what was so bad with my suggestion? plz tell me, I am curious. Because it's too easy to say, you justl ook like you are upset at my NTR suggestions and then use another NTR stories that is "much better" in order to justify yourself. So what is puerile and unimaginative? go ahead!
 
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panzermaster said:
Oh and what was so bad with my suggestion? plz tell me, I am curious. Because it's too easy to say, you justl ook like you are upset at my NTR suggestions and then use another NTR stories that is "much better" in order to justify yourself. So what is puerile and unimaginative? go ahead!
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Because it is simplistic, Cookie cutter bullshit.

Here, go to literotica and look up "Another Love", "February Sucks"(Both the original and the better version by Cockatto),"The Bridge", "A Joke" by agena and the follow up stories based on it, etc.

They are all NTR, thankfully on Literotica people (who hate NTR) can write better endings for them, but they are so popular because the stories are original, and stay away from some of the more obvious cliches of ntr stories.

Here is an idea, if your ntr story would not be put of place in the thousands of trashy, vomit inducing ntr hentai released every year, then the story and idea behind it are trash.
 
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Gambit588 said:
Because it is simplistic, Cookie cutter bullshit.

Here, go to literotica and look up "Another Love", "February Sucks"(Both the original and the better version by Cockatto),"The Bridge", "A Joke" by agena and the follow up stories based on it, etc.

They are all NTR, thankfully on Literotica people (who hate NTR) can write better endings for them, but they are so popular because the stories are original, and stay away from some of the more obvious cliches of ntr stories.

Here is an idea, if your ntr story would not be put of place in the thousands of trashy, vomit inducing ntr hentai released every year, then the story and idea behind it are trash.
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You're not answering their question or presenting any criticism of substance. Saying "this is bad because it's like this other thing I don't like" is a nothing statement.
 
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Gambit588 said:
Because it is simplistic, Cookie cutter bullshit.

Here, go to literotica and look up "Another Love", "February Sucks"(Both the original and the better version by Cockatto),"The Bridge", "A Joke" by agena and the follow up stories based on it, etc.

They are all NTR, thankfully on Literotica people (who hate NTR) can write better endings for them, but they are so popular because the stories are original, and stay away from some of the more obvious cliches of ntr stories.

Here is an idea, if your ntr story would not be put of place in the thousands of trashy, vomit inducing ntr hentai released every year, then the story and idea behind it are trash.
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But how is it cookie cutter simplistic bullshit? That's too easy to say. Anyone can say that about anything. Oh and tell me how does my NTR ending is THAT different than any of the other NTR of Power Vaccuum's ending chapter? Go ahead I am waiting, how does my version apparently differ so much from the great quality of the previous one.

And no I am not going to read your "better NTR" that apparently you cannot give me a direct link to and cannot explain to me how apparently this one is better than mine, I am not doing your work for you.

The reason why my version has not been made is simply that the creator has his own version that he intends to go for, it is very rare for people to have the exact same vision about the continuation of a story. It does not mean my version is bad, just that it's not the same as the creator. There is nothing special about that, it's very common.
 
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