TL;DR: Could be a great game, but it's not for me. Good graphics. Story is a basic "MC will get to bone his family" version with the addition of a main antagonist who is badly written and dampens my mood so much that I will not return to new updates. No more second chances. Could be 5/5, for me it's 2.5/5
Played [0.5], deleted after end of [0.5], will not return to play [0.6].
PRO
- Good graphics, good animations
- Good humor, good references
- MC actually has a conscience.
The game explicitly addresses the issue that all this "let's finger bang a sleeping relative" is nothing less than rape. When MC thinks about doing something like that and has three options which all decline I was literally saying "THANK YOU" out loudly. All this molesting of non-consenting (sometimes sleeping) people in so many other games is a turn-off for me.
NEUTRAL
- Grinding. It's there, but it's a) not too much and b) the event in question changes and there is story progress
- Pseudo sandbox. Like in many other games there's a routine which every character follows at a certain time of day in a certain room. When something cannot be advanced, you'll get infinite repetitions of the same situation. That's lazy writing, but not too annoying.
- NTR doesn't bother me. Leave it on if you want graphic bad endings, turn it off if you don't. Easy-peasy.
CON
- The antagonist. I'm putting this first, because the other CONS derive from this.
I don't mind obstacles to overcome in an adult game, but a real main antagonist is not what I like. He's written as a "I have the money, so I have the power, and I'll fuck everyone you love, because unlike you I have no conscience" character who - like every badly written Bond villain does - of course tells this MC right in the beginning. That is like a mood killing sword of Damocles hanging over the entire game, which brings me to the next point:
- "Common sense glands removed"
Using an old Eddie Izzard quote here, but it's painfully true. Despite MC (and later Lucia) knowing what Hunter (the antagonist) is up to AND what he's willing and capable to do, they generally don't care. MC gives him back control over a spy cam... and forgets about it? Yes, a likely story.
- "Deus ex machina"
How do people overcome their inhibitions? I know, let's have a magic drug that makes people horny over time and the antagonist puts into everything he can get his hand on. Seeing how MC dealt with Hunter in chapter 1 you'd think he'd shadow every move of his once he learns about this drink/food spiking, but no. He learns and knows and casually mentions it once or twice afterwards. The game goes such lengths to try a realistic approach on MC's and family's development that this deus ex machina is just an insult.
This is bad writing. And if it wasn't for the really good writing of the dialogues between MC and his family members, I'd brush it off as poorly written game, rate it 1 star, and move on, but the author gives us a glimpse of great writing in the details, but the broad strokes and the entire premise are just so badly written, that I want to cry. It's such wasted potential! I want to give that game 5/5, but I can't. The bad (sadly) outweighs the good.
I've been playing [0.5] of this game for about a week, off and on. Every time I could get into a good mood it was constantly put down by the premise and the antagonist. Now that [0.6] is out I thought for about second or two, but decided not to give it another chance, sorry.
Dear DEV, I've been spending money on Patreon, so if you should ever up your writing skills and make a game that doesn't include extortion/blackmail in the same way that it doesn't include rape/molestation by the MC right now, I'll happily send some money your way. Good luck!