jamiehmcw91

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Story Time.

A twisted Family: Part 1(Maybe)
Sterling returns home after Ophelia tells him that Hunter has had heart surgery. He also has had a double hip replacement surgery. Ophelia has told Sterling that she has become engaged (Eric), that she is a grandmother via Brenna who doesn't confirm who the father is, Aliza who has become homeless after losing her job, Catherine is having a relationship problems, Drew returning to the home. Nora,Keira and Lucia surprise the family by moving in.

Sterling walks into the house and sees Ophelia and gives her a hug. Sterling sees his niece and nephew via Brenna while they are playing with toys.

Sterling: I missed you mum. How are you? Where is Eric? I would like too meet him.
Ophelia: I am good just stressing about everything going on. Eric is away to work he works for an estate company.
Sterling: How did Hunter break his hips? When did he take a heart attack?
Ophelia: He broke his hips when he was in the gym, he slipped on the floor and landed on some weights. He took a heart attack a few months ago when we all went on holiday. He was found in the showers by Eric and went to the hospital.
Sterling:Good job that Eric was there. So we just need to watch out for Hunter. Make sure he's ok.
Ophelia:Yes. He's on medications and has regular hospital appointments that we take him to.
Sterling:When did Brenna fall pregnant?Who is the father?
Ophelia: She got pregnant last year. The twins are 4 months old. She didn't say who their father was.When I asked she looked guilty and shocked. We argued about her getting pregnant and we haven't spoke since.
Sterling:If she looked guitly and shocked then she knows who the father is and is embarrested.
Ophelia: I know I should be happy that she gave me grand children but Brenna should be thinking of her future looking for work instead of having children.Stupid girl.
Sterling: What is up with Catherine? Your saying she's having relationship problems?
Ophelia: Yes I think she is in a lesbian relationship.
Sterling:Why do you think she is in a lesbian relationship?
Ophelia:Because she has some girls round and stays in her room. I was cleaning her room and found some sex toys.
Sterling:She might just be with friends that shes made from college or the street.
Ophelia:She has been fighting and arguing with her girlfriend saying she thinks that she's cheating on her.
Sterling: Do you know who her girlfriend is? Have you spoken too her about it?
Ophelia:Yes her girlfriend is a girl called Amber. And yes Amber said she hasn't been cheating she has been busy with work as a physiotherapist.
Sterling:What happened to Aliza? Why is she homeless?
Ophelia:She lost her job about 6 months ago due to an injury at work which she took them to court. After she won her court case the work took the house off her as it was owed by the company. Aliza told Hunter and he offered to let her stay.
Sterling:That was nice of Hunter to let Aliza stay with you all. Has she got a new job now?
Ophelia:Yes she works in real estate now.
Sterling:Why did Keira,Nora and Lucia return home?
Ophelia:They wanted too see us and be a family. Also when Nora,Keira and David(dad) had no where to stay Hunter invited them to move into his house.Mostly Keira wanted to see Hunter.And it has been ages since Lucia has seen her cousins.
Sterling:That was nice of Hunter too do that. Why did Drew return?
Ophelia:She was missing us and sold her house too move back. Its nice having her,Aliza and me under one roof with Hunter.
Sterling: That's good. I am feeling tired now after this journey, so I am going to go to bed and get a couple hours sleep. I will see everyone tomorrow. Night mum.
Ophelia:Goodnight.

First part done. Can do more tomorrow.
 

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A Twisted Family Part 2:


Sterling wakes up and starts his day with a shower Then gets dressed and goes to the kitchen.
When Sterling enters the kitchen he see's Eric at the island making some coffee.

Sterling:Good morning Eric. I'm Sterling very happy too meet you.
Eric:Very pleased to meet you too Sterling. You have a wonderful family.
This guy ust be thick i'm literally having my dick sucked balls deep by his slutty big sister. Brenna has her big tits out and is deepthroating me. I am going to make her swallow my load.

Brenna:Why did I agree too do this?I knew it was wrong to steal and was caught. I don't want Eric to continue this but if I make a noise Sterling will know. Is he going to cum in my mouth?I have to swallow as he will not let me release his cock from my mouth. I am such a slut.
Sterling:Have you seen Ophelia? How long have you been engaged with Ophelia?
Eric:She is in the shower. I will make breakfast for her. Been engaged for 2years.
Sterling: Congratulations. You are a lucky guy having a fiance and eventually a wife like Ophelia. And will be part of this family.
Eric:Thanks means alot.
Sterling:I'm going to see Hunter. See you later Eric.
Eric:Bye.

Sterling walks away too the first floor. As Sterling walks away Eric cums in Brenna's mouth forcing her too swallow his cum.

Brenna:Gulp.Gulp. Can I go now?
Eric:No you have another hole I want to try.
Brenna:What, not my pussy please.
Eric:Nope not your pussy this time. I want that pink starfish. Think its times for some naughty anal action.
Brenna:My ass why?
Eric: Well I have fucked that tight pussy before and I did knock you up.After the last time we fucked you promised me anal if I didn't get you pregnant again. And I always wanted to fuck that big tight round ass.
Brenna:Fuck I forgot about that promise I made to you. Ok lets do it then.What position do you want me in?
Eric:Lets start of with doggy on the floor.
Brenna:Ok I love doggystyle.Lets do it
Eric:Ok after you sucking me off and swallowing my cum my cock is all lubed up.
Eric goes behind Brenna and starts fucking her ass in doggy. As he pound her asshole he starts spanking her ass checks hile pulling her hair with his other hand. The only sounds your hear are Brenna moaning like crazy, Erics balls rattling of her ass and the wetness of her clit squishing.
Eric:You love it rough bitch, oh yes.You love getting it deep in the ass.
Brenna:Oh that good yes yes awwh keep going. Please keep pounding my ass.
After a few more spanks to Brenna's ass they have turned a dark red colour.
Eric:Time for another position.Lets try missionary.This is the best ass I've fucked ohh ohh .
Brenna:Never done tha position for anal before. MMMMMMnn
Eric is pounding Brenna missionary style in her ass. He is sucking and biting her nipples while choking her. He then goes from sucking and biting one nipple to the other then starts licking them. Eric moves to her mouth and starts kissing her. After a good 15minutes they change position again.The position the are in is reverse cow girl. Brenna rides Eric her big tits swinging from side to side while Eric holds her waist tight.
Eric:Im close to cumming.
Brenna:Cum in my ass I need it.
Eric pulls out and places Brenna in a piledriver position and unleashes splurt after splurt of cum inside Brenna's asshole.
After Eric finishes he pulls out.

Eric:Time for some ATM. You need to clean this up.
Brenna:ATM?
Eric:Ass To Mouth get sucking.
Brenna:Ok.
Brenna starts sucking Eric off and he cums inside her mouth again making her swallow.
They both start getting dressed, Eric pulls out a pen and writes anal lover and cum in her on Brenna's ass.


Notes:
Bold-is for what the characters are thinking.
Colour-Different colours for the characters. White/Sterling,Blue/Brenna,Green/Eric and Red/Ophelia.
Underline-For extra details of the story.

Part 2.
Might do a part 3
 

DIO-DA

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No, I got it. I'm suggesting that if he waits until 2026 for the final chapter, or it feels rushed as a result of releasing it completed in 2025, it'll hurt more than help. I don't care about another week to break it into two updates - at least there would be 2025 content, which I believe the PV fans sorely want and need.

He's going to do what he wants, either way. Which as has been stated: I'll release it when I want to, no warning. I think that's another mistake, but it is what it is.

I'm harboring doubts about how complete the final chapter will be as well, after being gone so long. A lot of devs would simply want to be "done with it", and track records in those instances show that things are typically rushed and not fully fleshed out. Time will tell.
Yeah, you're making a lot of sense, generally agreed across the board.
 

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Story Time.

A twisted Family: Part 1(Maybe)
Sterling returns home after Ophelia tells him that...
If there's one 'adult' game that does NOT need a rewrite in any way - it's this one. Far and away the very best dialogue among the genre and nothing else is even comparable at all. It's in a category of only one, where that's concerned. And there ain't no doubt about that.
 

Rune H

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Where the is the update of the game????????????????
Abandoned this game tooooooooooooo.
Why is alle the good games abandoned????????????
 
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