VN Ren'Py Powers That Be [Ch. 24 - Styling] [Burst Out Games]

[MarinBladewing]

Good game, I legit liked it!
The dialogue is not as bad as I thought from reading the comments, it wasn't a problem for me.

Some good looking girls, Tilly is nice but I hope we see more of Gloria, Nika and Tilly's mom as well, I think they look really good.

I like the story, it's very unique, that the LI has the powers and not the MC is a nice change. I'm very interested to see more of it, great job so far!

 

[Agent Abide]

So this update has the overuse of high key, low key, and finna. A good update but the dialogue still needs to be worked on.

 

[thatguyfoot007]

It has good potential, but the GenZ slang is overused (totes legit! stop). Its parts like that where an editor comes in hand. And while the occasional pop culture reference is fine, doing them one after the other isn't funny or endearing, its, well, annoying.

 

[mentore]

I think in the same way: this game has a lot of potential!

 

[Naxos]

Actually, we are working on a slider setting that will allow you to set the legit level just right for you.

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When 80% of the post's are complaining about something, it might be worth actually listening and taking it into consideration than snarky comments, but hey it's your game to make ruin as you see fit.

Some Russian to engrish translation would improve this game.

Edit: That is still very true after the supposed revamp, if it's this bad now, I don't know how anyone managed to get through before.

 

[Naxos]

ok, so i was having problems opening the codes but thanks to Wolf Plays i was able to fix that .
i made a "boomer", "Legit Remover", "old guy", or what ever u want to call it, patch and ur old saves should work
if u have any problems let me kno

This patch will do the fallowing....
#1. Change/remove a lot of the slang words
#2. Have incest added


Mega download

instructions:
#1. download
#2. extract at the PowersThatBe root file
#3. click "yes" to override

Awesome dude, I did my own removing every trace of that mother-trucking "l" word.

 

[bosp]

Not that I am legit complaining about it but duuuude... you really need to cut on the legit stuff. It's kinda legit annoying.
Loved the Monty Python and Airplane references so far btw.

 

[juan palote]

MEGA isnt working for me today

 

[tazlucky09]

tazlucky09 might need to update your mod. lol

alrighty im downloading now and after i beat the game ill work on the patch

 

[Qoo-Rilla]

Did anyone say legit? God. Should one word be cultivated in every other sentence. What if the name of the game were Legit.

 

[Josh Spicer]

Meanwhile, in reality, a lot of people say "like" in the same sentence.

Like...a lot.

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

alrighty im downloading now and after i beat the game ill work on the patch

I guess it now has 'highkey' a lot.

 

[WuzzyFuzzy]

"...Do you want to resist?"

Yes, but it matters not because all I'm given is the illusion of choice, not the freedom of choice. Plus, when the script states that the girl is beautiful, she should be beautiful. But in this case, she's far from it. Sorry, but I like the ability to adapt and play my way in these games and this game boxes the MC in from the get-go.

 

[Watcher X]

Yeah this update was very brief, which is a little disappointing. I'd prefer content drops about three times that amount, and if I have to wait three times as long so be it. Less than 10 mins of game play seems pointless. At this rate I'm going to have to wait 6 months just to get an hours play. (yes I'm a patron so I'm entitled to bitch).

Also, as parent of gen z kids, I can attest that neither they or their friends talk like they do in this game. I recognise a lot of the phrases, so I had little issue understanding the dialogue, but it really needs to be toned down a lot. Every sentence doesn't need to be a meme.

I like the concept of this story so I'll stick with it for now.

 

[tazlucky09]

I made a dialogue patch for PC v0.3.4 (Chapters 1-7 ) and ur old saves should work
if u have any problems let me kno

This patch will do the fallowing....

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[Deleted member 1571716]

I made a dialogue patch for PC v0.3.2 (Chapters 1-6 ) and ur old saves should work
if u have any problems let me kno

This patch will do the fallowing....

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MEGA <==Patch Download Link

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Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
Sat Oct 17 20:13:18 2020

 

[Number 4]

Can you please guys give me a android port with a incest patch on it please help

 

[tazlucky09]

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  File "game/scripts/story/chapter05.rpy", line 22 and
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Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
Sat Oct 17 20:13:18 2020

oh my bad i mad a test file and forgot to delete it go to game/scripts/story/ and delete "chapter051.rpy" & "chapter051.rpyc"

Link has been updated as well

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

oh my bad i mad a test file and forgot to delete it go to game/scripts/story/ and delete "chapter051.rpy" & "chapter051.rpyc"

Link has been updated as well

Thanks. I also thank you for making the patch. But, I'm now done with this game. It's just a KN at this point and the story isn't good enough to continue. Tilly is manipulating and borderline femdoming the MC and there are zero choices to deal with it. I had hoped to be able to enjoy the game, but, I can't. There's nothing redeeming in this game for me to continue.

To the dev, I do wish you well with the game.

 

[Burst Out Games]

"...Do you want to resist?"

Yes, but it matters not because all I'm given is the illusion of choice, not the freedom of choice.

We can't say much without spoilers, but we are still in Act 1 where we introduce the characters and set up the game world. The next chapter will be the final one in Act 1 and after that you may get an answer to the question why things seem this way.