VN Ren'Py Price of Desires [Ep.2] [DogWalker]

[Wilwock]

I dont know why these minor details which are actually completely useless for the overall story is soo important for people here? Criticism for the sake of criticism is never good. The overall story indicates it would be about a couple who are going to go on a wild ride together. Discussing these irrelevant details about how they agreed or why they flip flopped in a porn game is actually insane
Enjoy the hot stuff man.

Don't get defensive over it then act like you don't think it matters when you can't think of a reply. It does matter, if story was irrelevant, you could just watch porn videos. Games like this make no sense if the story doesn't matter.

 

[Wilwock]

Right?
Especially when they don’t think this type of “bipolar” crazy back and forth/flip flopping doesn’t happen, isn’t “real”…lol
Obviously, the pace is a bit accelerated and a bit ridiculous/fantastical, it’s a porn story after all, they don’t need to be perfect reflections of reality…in fact, it’s better they’re not…lol

However, the flip flopping and giving in to something that you’d typically say no to and walk away from, that shit happens ALL THE TIME, irl… And sometimes, it happens in a matter of days…

This story provides the “backstory” from the beginning conversation…
It just doesn’t waste time giving/exploring the minutia…
This couple is already at the tipping point…

Repeating the same thing 5 times in a row for no reason is the definition of wasting time. It seems a like a bigger deal over this is being than it is due to people insisting on arguing about it, I mentioned it and didn't expect people would actually try to argue an obvious issue is actually fine. Listen to these people if you'd like less success dev.

 

[Radnos Salazar]

Don't get defensive over it then act like you don't think it matters when you can't think of a reply. It does matter, if story was irrelevant, you could just watch porn videos. Games like this make no sense if the story doesn't matter.

Why people on this site get soo aggressive in every conversation? I did not get defensive at all, it was a simple message. I tried explaining it once, you did not get it, so there's no point in talking about it again and again, does not mean i dont have a reply, i just dont want to argue on a useless point. Lmao

 

[redoubt27]

This is my first game, so I’ve surely made plenty of mistakes, forgive me for that! I’ll fix these issues in the next one.

About the stats screen: I will build one. I was planning how to design it so it doesn’t look like a cluttered mess, but I’m still brainstorming ideas.

I know many have complained about the MC (main character), but hey, that guy’s good-looking and I gave him a solid looking dick too! He won't be a loser, if you choose the "right" path for him, he gets to have fun too!

The confusion around his behavior is intentional. You could say my girlfriend and I act this way too; emotional stability isn’t always consistent because not everyone reacts the same.

No worries. Create the story as you see it. Not meant as negative criticism from me, just talking, spitballing, offering feedback for consideration.
I have a handful of stories jotted down, difficult to cover every possibility, variation of paths, personalities, etc.
I haven’t created a VN (yet), trying to learn so I can, just helping out on things I notice in the code…lol

Thanks for the heads up about the story.
Yes, there is the “right” path where the husband isn’t a clown.
Apologies for not being clearer, my comments were directed more toward the wife -loyalty path…
With a loyalty stat, seems logical there needs to be a reason to justify being disloyal.
It‘s not wrong, just not required.
Still very early, story needs time to develop.
And even if a story were done the way I’m suggesting, there’d be those that complain, she didn’t have a reason to cheat…riiighttt, as if she needed a reason…

Keep “cooking”; look forward to the next update.

 

[Wilwock]

Why people on this site get soo aggressive in every conversation? I did not get defensive at all, it was a simple message. I tried explaining it once, you did not get it, so there's no point in talking about it again and again, does not mean i dont have a reply, i just dont want to argue on a useless point. Lmao

I understood everything you said, you defended what the dev was trying to get across rather than how exactly he tried to convey that message, which is what I was criticizing. I think you're the one who doesn't 'get' that.

 

[Radnos Salazar]

I understood everything you said, you defended what the dev was trying to get across rather than how exactly he tried to convey that message, which is what I was criticizing. I think you're the one who doesn't 'get' that.

Good you won an online debate, Congratulations.

 

[Wilwock]

Good you won an online debate, Congratulations.

You're the one who started arguing about this. You really shouldn't start arguments you're not interested in.

 

[Radnos Salazar]

You're the one who started arguing about this. You really shouldn't start arguments you're not interested in.

I never argued just gave my opinion in a single text, just like you did yours and i had no interest in debating with you or convincing you about anything. you are dragging this out trying to get the last word in lol. I literally said you won, case closed.

 

[Joshy92]

I wasn't going to play it yet because it's a first release, but I decided to give it a go, and I'm glad I did.

The story is quite sexy so far and there are a good amount of options.

 

[redoubt27]

I never argued just gave my opinion in a single text, just like you did yours and i had no interest in debating with you or convincing you about anything. you are dragging this out trying to get the last word in lol. I literally said you won, case closed.

You’re banging your head against a wall…
Don’t know anything about them, but most who’ve been married know the couple’s back and forth, flip flop conversation actually happens irl… Talking in circles, duck season-rabbit season, etc…

The MCs obviously aren’t completely rational.
“Rational” doesn’t stop people in crushing debt irl from going on vacations they can’t afford…or having cell phones, cable, internet, eating at restaurants, etc…
Most born after 1994 wouldn’t survive if they were magically transplanted back to the 60s, 70s, or 80s…

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When animals are slaughtered, they’re generally “comforted”, not put in distress…

 

[Radnos Salazar]

You’re banging your head against a wall…
Don’t know anything about them, but most who’ve been married know the couple’s back and forth, flip flop conversation actually happens irl… Talking in circles, duck season-rabbit season, etc…

The MCs obviously aren’t completely rational.
“Rational” doesn’t stop people in crushing debt irl from going on vacations they can’t afford…or having cell phones, cable, internet, eating at restaurants, etc…
Most born after 1994 wouldn’t survive if they were magically transplanted back to the 60s, 70s, or 80s…

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When animals are slaughtered, they’re generally “comforted”, not put in distress…

Its really rare to find a multiple protagonist relationship dynamic game with such a great quality, and considering this is developer's first game, i actually dont give a shit for small things like these. Could it be better? Ofcourse, everything can be better, but i'm more interested in the fun the couple would be having, so its also a plus that the developer did not waste too much time on the backstories and stuff and we are already inside the house, backstories can always be included in bits throughout the game, so next episode will only bring more lewds, which i cant wait to see.

 

[Enlight432]

Why people on this site get soo aggressive in every conversation? I did not get defensive at all, it was a simple message. I tried explaining it once, you did not get it, so there's no point in talking about it again and again, does not mean i dont have a reply, i just dont want to argue on a useless point. Lmao

Maybe what I’m saying isn’t directly related to what you said, but the answer lies within it:
Half of NTS and NTR fans gradually turn into more sensitive people (the other half become stronger)
That’s why in threads for vanilla games (which 99.9% of the time are boring and tension-free), you don’t see this sensitivity. They mostly talk about which girl or which scene is hotter

I played a bit of this game (I’ll play the rest later), and it seems to place good importance on choices. It looks like the MC can cheat without the FMC cheating, and vice versa. This freedom of choice is really appealing and, in my opinion, will attract more people to this project

 

[Enlight432]

I know many have complained about the MC (main character), but hey, that guy’s good-looking and I gave him a solid looking dick too! He won't be a loser, if you choose the "right" path for him, he gets to have fun too!

Great
I’m happy that the MC isn’t on the right path to being a loser; this way, you can enjoy it from both the FMC’s perspective and the MC’s perspective

And I believe you don’t need the MC to be a loser to create super intense, shocking scenes! Just raise the level of trust and love between the MC and FMC—then, even if 10 people fuck her in front of the MC, the MC, the FMC, and the player will all still enjoy it

 

[Freedom9555]

seem to me the 1st are more correct

I feel like this is kind of boring at some point, when you control everything and there is no surprise or shock moment.
Price of desire, sounds like something that should have something like this.

 

[redoubt27]

Its really rare to find a multiple protagonist relationship dynamic game with such a great quality, and considering this is developer's first game, i actually dont give a shit for small things like these. Could it be better? Ofcourse, everything can be better, but i'm more interested in the fun the couple would be having, so its also a plus that the developer did not waste too much time on the backstories and stuff and we are already inside the house, backstories can always be included in bits throughout the game, so next episode will only bring more lewds, which i cant wait to see.

I agree.
The dev did a great job providing a condensed, easily understood motivation for them being “desperate“. The back and forth waffling was on point. Now we can get to the fun stuff…lol

However, even when people are being overly critical, some of their points can be valid.
The abandoned house scene is…iffy, even for a porn story.
Agree with you, to me not that big of deal, but it’s a valid critique that could improve the story some.

 

[The Wicked One]

This is my first game, so I’ve surely made plenty of mistakes, forgive me for that! I’ll fix these issues in the next one.

About the stats screen: I will build one. I was planning how to design it so it doesn’t look like a cluttered mess, but I’m still brainstorming ideas.

I know many have complained about the MC (main character), but hey, that guy’s good-looking and I gave him a solid looking dick too! He won't be a loser, if you choose the "right" path for him, he gets to have fun too!

The confusion around his behavior is intentional. You could say my girlfriend and I act this way too; emotional stability isn’t always consistent because not everyone reacts the same.

I gave you 3 out of 5 stars in my review, Dawg. Not at bad start at all. I know there are minor complaints from F95zone (shocking!), but you've got some solid character models, and a good narrative brewing and I forsee this game only getting better and better. Can't wait to see what you got planned in the future. Being honest, I cannot wait to see Clair (the female MC) getting absolutely railed by someone who is not Derek in a future update. Unleash them big ol' blond girl titties!

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Story was fine, nice intro. Only thing I don't get is why MC is made out to be a sad sack when he watches them dance. Seems like an odd followup to literally offering her hand.

 

[redoubt27]

Story was fine, nice intro. Only thing I don't get is why MC is made out to be a sad sack when he watches them dance. Seems like an odd followup to literally offering her hand.

Thank you for being more clear in the point I was laboring to make...lol
The story is young.
The husband may have just had an initial lapse at seeing his wife dance so closely with another dude...
Needs time and booze to sort out how he feels about it...lol

 

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[DawgWalker]

Story was fine, nice intro. Only thing I don't get is why MC is made out to be a sad sack when he watches them dance. Seems like an odd followup to literally offering her hand.

He thinks he made a mistake. Of course, there will be a follow-up to this. Right now, he's just thinking about the cash.