Depends on the novel, and the focus. We could discuss if its still a novel by this length. But everything else is a thing for the focus of the writer. Also if we would remove the talking here, it would then just be random things happen at random and we would could not even guess why anyone does anything here.
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Damn! Very nice chapter! And Pandaman Games , please!! Give me a chance to punch High Ecclesiarch's face, please!!!
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This is one of the stupidest takes I've ever seen on this site. Congratulations!
To be totally (in fact, probably unjustly) fair to the guy: I don't think he means that "in novels, people don't speak", but rather: "people don't speak in novel-length conversations". But I think the only times any character is "speaking" for any long period of time, it's internal monologue... or Legacy... and Legacy 100% speaks in novels.
To be clear, still think that guy is wrong... just make sure you're calling people out for being wrong in the right way.
Also, what he said is definitely readable the way everyone else seems to be reading it... So it's kinda his fault.
To be clear, still think that guy is wrong... just make sure you're calling people out for being wrong in the right way.
Also, what he said is definitely readable the way everyone else seems to be reading it... So it's kinda his fault.
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There are hot takes and there are not takes. What message is this even conveying? Do you even know what you are saying? Advocating for brevity in dialogue is one thing, but practicing it to the point that what you propose is unclear tastes of a wicked irony.
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You were expecting a long manifesto on his (bad IMO) take that people talk too much?
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Well, if the proposition is to be taken at face value, in novels, no one speaks at all.You were expecting a long manifesto on his (bad IMO) take that people talk too much?
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Do you get any real choices? The haha pick the option you have to each time is getting old fast, is this actually a kinetic novel?
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you get stats choices which are flavoring if you allow me and you get relation choice that are more relevant to the content you will get with the ladies. You won't get to shape every nook and cranny of the adventure though.
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There are meaningful choices, but many of them are for flavor as well. You just have to take them as they come.
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game is mostly kinetic, other than the important choice(s) regarding to relationships the rest are mostly for flavor as other said. Can't say it's a fully kinetic novel since the players have a choice if they want to get involved with girls other than Maria.
Really good characters, Maria is beautiful - the only complaint about her would be her aerola's keep changing in size, from real small to somewhat large and almost back again. I trust this story is about keeping her and the others safe from the bull of the church and we won;t be shocked to have some stupid surprise at the end that de-rails it
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"In a hole in the ground lived the Daltons."
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I unzipped the game again, copied in my save files, though not walkthrough (I'd rather use it) but it still just sends me back to beginning. Anyone got a save after choosing all the babes, or what other choices were there?