This is such a great game and I already feel very invested in the story. I'm really looking forward to seeing how the various mysteries get resolved.
Benign Narrative Entity is a brilliantly unique presence, especially in a VN. He is witty, cynical and misanthropic - all excellent qualities for an omnipotent fourth-wall-breaking narrator
The quality of your writing really shines through his interruptions. For example:
is simply excellent. Hell, you could forgo porn entirely and I'd still keep reading for the narrative.
Anyway, I just subscribed on Patreon. Please keep it coming!