Heya,
I played the rewritten version.
About the characters:
The sister is a bitch,
Naomi is a a slut,
Heather is a manipulative bitch, AND a slut (special combo),
The mother is a fragile idiot,
The aunt is a slut.
I won't be surpised if, next time, we see the cousin being a camgirl or something like that.
The mom is like: "if there is side effect, I'm not hurting anyone but myself, right?"
Right, but you have two children, maybe it's not a good idea to test that thing on yourself, fucking idiot.
Well, I said that, but the MC took that thing too, and he didn't even know what it is, it's far worse!!
Naomi slept with MC's dad, so we fall again in that kind of story where you'll fuck your father's affair sluts.
Of course, the legendary "What am I thinking, she is my sister" thing. I really wonder if devs win extra money when they are writting that kind of sentence you see in every incest game.
When the MC is going totally naked at Naomi-slut's house, why he still can wear clothes when the mom caught them ?
You can't skip the new animations, you have to see them until they finished (or you need to activate the option "unseen text" in preferences, and it works, fortunately)
When the aunt is spying on Catherine who's giving breast milk to the MC, she's like: "Maybe we can have a threesome". Woooaw, slow down, babe! That was fast, even for me. You didn't even had sex with the MC yet, nor the mom.
But the most unbearable thing was obviously the MC.
Being able to see other characters' thought is not always a good thing, because when they make plans, and when you see the MC falls in them, you can't help but thinking he's an idiot.
Other characters know, you know, but the MC doesn't know, and as the MC is only thinking about fucking girls and nothing else, all you can do is watching him being traped.
Also, I'm not saying the MC needs to be a badass, but seriously, when his sister is trashing him, he's just like "Yeah, okay sis, I won't get in your way".
Grow some balls, dude! Even your face is like a puppy who's screaming: "Don't hurt me, pleeeaaaaase!"
And speaking of the sister, why, in games, the big sis is always a bitch who is going to party with guys and all and consider her brother and mother like shits? I don't remember a game where the big sis is a gentle one who cares about her brother.
I thought that rewritten version was about the plot and the characters build, but as far as I remember the old version, it's totally the same.
What was the rewrite about?
And now I'm thinking about it, what is the plot? The mom who takes a dangerous pill and the MC takes it too for no reason and that's all?
For what purpose these pills are made for, again?