VN Others Abandoned Princess of Femdom [v0.1] [tvrvc2000]

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Overview:
The main character is a male slave who has to fight his way through the dominant world of women​

Thread Updated: 2021-11-17
Release Date: 2021-11-17
Developer: tvrvc2000 F95zone -
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Version: v0.1
OS: Windows
Language: English
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Well, it's a femdom game with a lot of kinks and a setting inspired - as the dev admits himself - by Darktoz's Femdom City, so it sounds great. But the only thing I like here is a variety of fetishes and femdom setting itself. Apart from that I'm afraid I can't say that I liked anything else. I wouldn't want for the dev to feel bad about the game, but at the same time I don't really have anything positive to say. Instead of criticizing the game though, here's what I'd suggest to make it better: work more on poses and character designs, fix typos, add more player agency, don't make MC an old guy, chill with piercings, delete the abysmal map clicking "minigame", add sound effects, try to make more interesting, varied dialogues (Darktoz is quite good with them, so maybe emulate some of his style more? Looking at the game's setting I'd also suggest taking some inspirations from Karlsson's Gambit), work more on lighting and make pacing slower, jumps from scene to scene more interconnected. I really wish good luck to the dev and I hope he can make a great femdom game for us all to play and support.
 
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A new femdom developper and a new femdom game? Awesome! Hope you are not discouraged by the criticisms. This was clearly a lot of work and I am sure you can eventually improve some of the renders and/or add more kinks.
 
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dk900

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Thre is something wrong with the model you use, their faces are to... peculiar.
You are using Daz studio? If is too hard to make good expressio then it might be better to use other engines like Koikatsu or Honey Select, which are easier to use.
But if you want to continue with this engine i wish you luck to improve with the time. We need more good femdom games.
 
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KinkBaron

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Well I guess this is fine for a start. But....

1. There's no build up of personality of characters.
2. No story.
3. No attempt to give any new spin on this cliche post apocalyptic enviroment.
4. There are a lot of slides for what are in essence a (toooo)simple dialogues.
5. Map is confusing. I was clicking 5min until I got it right.
6. Art is understandably bad, for a beginning. But it wouldn't hurt to use more than a two different faces for character. They all look the same.
7. I've said there's no story, but I don't even get it who's the main protagonist. (To be frank I've exited the game after the map)
8. Game is rather a showcase of different fetishes and kinks. And that is the reason its bland and superficial (also point 1. & 2.).
9. I'm not sure what is the game engine. But I get the feel that its implementation causes game to move slow with slide progression. I mean its speed is ok, but at the same time it feels really slow. Weird.
10. I've scrolled over dev patreon. Prices are 3€-9€-20€. Which is ok if you're a creator which has experience and makes quality content. But lets be honest with ourself, prices should be 1€-2€-4€.

Although it sounds really harsh, I thought that game dev could use it as references for improvement.
There's no need to linger on it. Just recognize it, git gud and move on with something new and better in the next iteration.

But I guess it took a lot of time & courage to put this forward. Keep improving further anyway!
And I strongly advise adjusting patreon prices a way lower for a start.

I predict that this will be just a game in which this dev learns the ropes of the tech & art composition...and will probably get abandoned or started completely anew at some point in the future.

Cheers! Best wishes and good luck man!
 
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Didnt you say you're uploading this stuff from a list, If this is what you're uploading now I cant wait till you get to the "good" stuff.
 
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