Envoye

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I just started the game and agree with the other comments about the "better copy". ;-)
The biggest issue for me is the dark textbox, that covers the more important parts, and it is boring to press every second picture "H". I have no idea about the used Software, but why is it not possible, to place the textbox on top instead of the bottom? There it would less disturbing, in my opinion. :)
 
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Valanathar

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Love the concept, and love the first touch of their personalities, i'm sure that those girls gotta go to visit the Principal again. One thing you must correct, are the little misspelling in the text, nothing too excesive, but necessary, good work for now, i must follow you in your journey DoctorPervic
 
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DoctorPervic

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The idea was to have a dress code. Short plaid skirts with a white top and white stockings with black shoes. I thought about doing a school where all the girls wore whatever they wanted and I thought that would end up being even more revealing, than a dress code. Plus I know that a lot of the more expensive schools do have dress codes.

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bamachine

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DoctorPervic possible great game here but a bit fast on the fingering of the lasses. Would like to get to know them a bit before I insert my fingers all up in them. Not too slow but at least wait for the second punishment and also spend a little more time with them, getting to know why they act up, during their first punishment. Also, needs quite a bit of proofreading. Not many contextual errors but several spelling errors or using the wrong version of a homophone(i.e; there, their, they're). Lot of using principle(a fundamental truth or system of belief) instead of principal(leader of a school or the most important of something). One funny one was this one below...
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...she is recovering from winter. That should have been "I need relief".
 

DoctorPervic

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Love the concept, and love the first touch of their personalities, i'm sure that those girls gotta go to visit the Principal again. One thing you must correct, are the little misspelling in the text, nothing too excesive, but necessary, good work for now, i must follow you in your journey DoctorPervic
Will do. Spelling is not my strong suit. :p But will correct as much spelling as I can. If you could PM me with the spots that need better spelling that would be helpful.
 
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DoctorPervic

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DoctorPervic possible great game here but a bit fast on the fingering of the lasses. Would like to get to know them a bit before I insert my fingers all up in them. Not too slow but at least wait for the second punishment and also spend a little more time with them, getting to know why they act up, during their first punishment. Also, needs quite a bit of proofreading. Not many contextual errors but several spelling errors or using the wrong version of a homophone(i.e; there, their, they're). Lot of using principle(a fundamental truth or system of belief) instead of principal(leader of a school or the most important of something). One funny one was this one below...
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...she is recovering from winter. That should have been "I need relief".
Thank you. Will fix it. :D
 

DoctorPervic

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OK, so I have a question for everyone who has played it so far. Should I take out the fingering of the first girls and have that for later releases? Or not? Would like to know what you all think. I know it is a bit on the fast side. :p
 

DanLong

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OK, so I have a question for everyone who has played it so far. Should I take out the fingering of the first girls and have that for later releases? Or not? Would like to know what you all think. I know it is a bit on the fast side. :p
Fingering is good! maybe she needs a creampie in later releases ;) If someone does not want to finger her, they do not have to choose that option ;)
 

Valanathar

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OK, so I have a question for everyone who has played it so far. Should I take out the fingering of the first girls and have that for later releases? Or not? Would like to know what you all think. I know it is a bit on the fast side. :p
It's fine how is it for now, but for the first time with other girls maybe a little bit of teasing (not necessary with fingers, you can use the border of the table or the cushions of the couch can serve too) before go further with them, not for the girl, also for the enjoyment of the Principal
 
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Spoum3

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OK, so I have a question for everyone who has played it so far. Should I take out the fingering of the first girls and have that for later releases? Or not? Would like to know what you all think. I know it is a bit on the fast side. :p
As long as there is an option to not do it for the people who do not want it, I think you should keep it.
There are way too many slow stories already and developement and renders already takes so much time, so if there's nothing happening for a while it makes the game really boring and uninteresting.
Of course, that's just my personal opinion.


Btw, how can I support this project? Where (on which platform) would you post the most updates?
 

robert ash

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OK, so I have a question for everyone who has played it so far. Should I take out the fingering of the first girls and have that for later releases? Or not? Would like to know what you all think. I know it is a bit on the fast side. :p
I vote for a slower progression. So much of sexual tension and its enjoyment is in anticipation, the slow reveal. Plus in a setting like this, the whole 'corruption of the innocent' should play a large role.
 
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