VN Ren'Py Abandoned Private Cases - Case#2 [v0.2.01] [c_n]

[Lycan Huntz4Oppai]

its not like you have choice lol...


also NTR mean someone else trying to have sexual relation with one of MC love interrest (a girl MC try to seduce because he love her or else). if MC is ok with this to happen, then its not NTR, but its NTR if MC didnt know about it or catch it on the fact (like if MC find his girlfriend getting banged in bathroom or else and he didnt knew she do that)
on simple, NTR is when someone else than the MC have sex with any MC love interest without the MC know it. (also if MC know it but hate/dislike it).
if MC is watching his love interest getting banged by his best friend in front of him and enjoy it, then its not NTR.
NTR is everything else than "she's mine, and i decide who touch her, when and how."

hope i m clear enougth XD

( si tu a besoin de traducteur, n'hesite pas a demander içi. certaines personnes seront ravis d'aider, surtout si elles aiment le jeu )

That basically means a more hardcore form of cheating.

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[Papy.ion6984]

Ah, un jeu en français !
Je ne vais pas rater çà !

Ah, a game in French!
I will not miss it!

 

[obibobi]

its not like you have choice lol...


also NTR mean someone else trying to have sexual relation with one of MC love interrest (a girl MC try to seduce because he love her or else). if MC is ok with this to happen, then its not NTR, but its NTR if MC didnt know about it or catch it on the fact (like if MC find his girlfriend getting banged in bathroom or else and he didnt knew she do that)
on simple, NTR is when someone else than the MC have sex with any MC love interest without the MC know it. (also if MC know it but hate/dislike it).
if MC is watching his love interest getting banged by his best friend in front of him and enjoy it, then its not NTR.
NTR is everything else than "she's mine, and i decide who touch her, when and how."

hope i m clear enougth XD

( si tu a besoin de traducteur, n'hesite pas a demander içi. certaines personnes seront ravis d'aider, surtout si elles aiment le jeu )

This is overly broad and confusing when it's a lot more simple. Does the game intend to make the player feel sexual jealousy, whether the MC is ok with it or not is irrelevant.

It does get over used, just because a sex scene doesn't involve the MC doesn't automatically make it NTR but then these are sex games and IMO it always feels like one without the self insert is a waste.

Anyway it looks really good visually but the description of the story is a mess,

 

[PeggyBlackett]

This first nouvel is the prequel to a more importante story, it take place in a contemporan world, you'll follow the life of an ancient inspector who just went out from jail. His story begin when, one evening, a young woman knock at his door. It's up to you to choose what will be their relation, while you continue her formation to become an inspector. After a prologue, that shows you Hawk's origin and the principals characters, each episode lead Hawk and his protege to a new case. Each case have multiple ending and your choices will influence the episode and/or the general story and the relation between Hawk and all other characters.

Wow. reminds me of Mark Twain's thing where he took a French translation of his "Jumping Frog" story and ...well ...

"The Jumping Frog: in English, then in French, and then Clawed Back into a Civilized Language Once More by Patient, Unremunerated Toil."

 

[ironlancer]

c'est agréable d'avoir un jeu en français ^^ et l'histoire elle me plais bien ... j'attend la suite

it's nice to have a game in french ^ ^ and history I like it well ... I wait for more

 

[WaltS]

@crust @a1fox3 could you guys please delete the following tags:

• Multiple Endings
• Cheating
• Corruption
• Creampie
• Exhibitionism
• Lesbian
• Voyeurism

Currently this only has:

• 3DGC
• Animated
• Male Protagonist
• Multiple Endings
• Graphic violence
• Humiliation
• Oral Sex
• Rape
• Vaginal sex

And the 'oral sex' and 'vaginal sex' tags are only there because of the rape scene so I'm not sure if they're correct.

 

[WaltS]

As has been written already the English text needs some serious editing but: this game has very nice models, most of which I haven't seen that often. I think only the Ellie model is quite popular (is that 'Elena' by any chance?) .

 

[mortel]

Français de quel pays?

French from wich country?

And don't forget to translate when you write in french, this is an english community. They'll appreciate.

 

[a1fox3]

@crust @a1fox3 could you guys please delete the following tags:

• Multiple Endings
• Cheating
• Corruption
• Creampie
• Exhibitionism
• Lesbian
• Voyeurism

Currently this only has:

• 3DGC
• Animated
• Male Protagonist
• Multiple Endings
• Graphic violence
• Humiliation
• Oral Sex
• Rape
• Vaginal sex

And the 'oral sex' and 'vaginal sex' tags are only there because of the rape scene so I'm not sure if they're correct.

You have 3 choice for who the girl is so that is "Multiple Endings".

If you chose "Girlfriend" and kiss the hooker that is "cheating".

As for "Corruption" those 2 kids are in some type of a gang, in my books that is a form of corruption.

"Exhibitionism" is in the game did you not see him walk out nude after his shower and the girl seen him.

So no, the tags stay.

There is more than 1 vaginal sex scene in this game not only the rape. there is more than this and the rape so you may need to go replay it and try different options.

 

[macadam]

@Chriss67210

si tu peut, ajoute une traduction anglaise a ton éval'. ou elle risque de ne pas passer (car beaucoup ne la comprendront pas. ce qui est important dans une éval')


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meh.. i just told chriss67210 to put a small translation into english of his review. because if nobody understand the review, it have chance to be deleted .

PS: my english is shit, you all know that, i aint gonna translate the whole message XD

 

[faceface2]

Overview:
This first nouvel is the prequel to a more importante story, it take place in a contemporan world, you'll follow the life of an ancient inspector who just went out from jail. His story begin when, one evening, a young woman knock at his door. It's up to you to choose what will be their relation, while you continue her formation to become an inspector. After a prologue, that shows you Hawk's origin and the principals characters, each episode lead Hawk and his protege to a new case. Each case have multiple ending and your choices will influence the episode and/or the general story and the relation between Hawk and all other characters.​

Its usually a bad idea to try to add "big words" into your writing when you don't understand the language fully. it sounds like an interesting concept though.

 

[bas]

@crust @a1fox3 could you guys please delete the following tags:

• Multiple Endings
• Cheating
• Corruption
• Creampie
• Exhibitionism
• Lesbian
• Voyeurism

Currently this only has:

• 3DGC
• Animated
• Male Protagonist
• Multiple Endings
• Graphic violence
• Humiliation
• Oral Sex
• Rape
• Vaginal sex

And the 'oral sex' and 'vaginal sex' tags are only there because of the rape scene so I'm not sure if they're correct.

You have 3 choice for who the girl is so that is "Multiple Endings".

If you chose "Girlfriend" and kiss the hooker that is "cheating".

As for "Corruption" those 2 kids are in some type of a gang, in my books that is a form of corruption.

"Exhibitionism" is in the game did you not see him walk out nude after his shower and the girl seen him.

So no, the tags stay.

There is more than 1 vaginal sex scene in this game not only the rape. View attachment 265670 there is more than this and the rape so you may need to go replay it and try different options.

I removed several of the tags as they have specific meanings as defined here https://f95zone.to/threads/tags-rules-and-list-updated-2019-03-13.10394/ that are not included in the game at this time.

Please remember that we use that list to judge if a tag is appropriate, and it must be contained in the version of the game available in the OP here on the forum.

Thanks to both of you for your input & help

 

[c_n]

@WaltS
This is only the beginning of the story. There will be all of the tags I put, in time. I can delete them now and put them back later if it's better.
The only one that's not right is Corruption. Sorry and thanks a1fox3, I didn't think about the children like this. I made a mistake when I put this tag, I'm going to delete it.

@mortel
French from France

@All
I'm really sorry that my English is so bad, I tried my best on my own. But I found help for the translation, I hope it will be better (it seems that it can't be worse) and I will send it as soon as possible.

 

[macadam]

oh trust me.. it can be worse XD , if its done by me. everybody here will confirm that my english is way worse than your


btw, good luck for your game (i forget, sorry )

 

[AGoodDay2Die]

Hey, your English is far better than my French - pretty much all I can remember in French is how to get my face slapped...

 

[redwind21]

It's a good game overall. The story is very solid, and more believable than some of the stuff you see on TV. I look forward to the next version.

 

[redwind21]

Hey, your English is far better than my French - pretty much all I can remember in French is how to get my face slapped...

LOL!!! That could be a big plus, especially if there's a troublesome bug that keeps landing on your face.

 

[Avaron1974]

I don't mind rape in games when it's done to progress a narrative or set the scene for something but this was there just to add shock value.

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I don't see why that was important to the game.

 

[ThunderRob]

in my youth..i was fluent in french..but after decades of not using it i can only discern some parts clearly..BUT..one thing i know about french..is alot of what is said..comes out sort of reverse/backwards when directly translated to english(meaning total lack of "the feeling") and can see this is machine translated..i'm having no issues understanding..but i notice alot of the text seems out of order which i expected...otherwise..i'm quite enjoying this..and if you can ever get a proper translator it would go a long way in vaulting the interest in this high.

 

[ThunderRob]

I don't mind rape in games when it's done to progress a narrative or set the scene for something but this was there just to add shock value.

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I don't see why that was important to the game.

you can turn the stuff off at the beginning..but that kind of defeats the purpose of a porn game if you turn off the porn..i do appreciate though..that you can skip scenes individually if something is out of your comfort zone.