VN Ren'Py Abandoned Private Cases - Case#2 [v0.2.01] [c_n]

[c_n]

Till the renders for the last day of the prologue or still not ready... I didn't want you to wait for the new translation. It take few more days for the last renders.

Prologue v0.03
- Change some renders that bug
- Add some renders tranlate in english
- Rework totaly the english (not me but I found help for it)
- Add a second font, find it in the option (cause it can be difficult to read it with the one I choosed)
- Try to make it begin in english (not sure it's work)

 

[Gary Bertrand]

in my youth..i was fluent in french..but after decades of not using it i can only discern some parts clearly..BUT..one thing i know about french..is alot of what is said..comes out sort of reverse/backwards when directly translated to english(meaning total lack of "the feeling") and can see this is machine translated..i'm having no issues understanding..but i notice alot of the text seems out of order which i expected...otherwise..i'm quite enjoying this..and if you can ever get a proper translator it would go a long way in vaulting the interest in this high.

You are correct im french from montreal when a friend asks me what i said in french I have to think again before i tell him in english alot of sayings are reversed in english but loose the meening

 

[ThunderRob]

popped the V0-03 update on..restarted..decided Ellie is going to be a maid..hehehe...and will pursue Mirabelle in hopes she is one of those "hookers with a heart of gold who just needs the right man to set her on a happy path"(ya know..like Carli)
oh..and thanks for the font option..previous one was annoying AF..heh

 

[CoffeeDrinker]

The .03 version was very well done, keep up the good work!

 

[Boobman4424]

booo endings

 

[BeastMaster59]

Oh man,love this Game already,haven't even really started yet and I see my Favorite fat buddy again,can only get better now.

 

[Deleted member 167032]

One of a few first time devs to actually make and effort to place the characters in natural positions and not floating and their hands/arms are in natural stance. The game premise looks good.

 

[Papy.ion6984]

TY for this update

 

[Deleted member 1023239]

its not like you have choice lol...


also NTR mean someone else trying to have sexual relation with one of MC love interrest (a girl MC try to seduce because he love her or else). if MC is ok with this to happen, then its not NTR, but its NTR if MC didnt know about it or catch it on the fact (like if MC find his girlfriend getting banged in bathroom or else and he didnt knew she do that)
on simple, NTR is when someone else than the MC have sex with any MC love interest without the MC know it. (also if MC know it but hate/dislike it).
if MC is watching his love interest getting banged by his best friend in front of him and enjoy it, then its not NTR.
NTR is everything else than "she's mine, and i decide who touch her, when and how."

hope i m clear enougth XD

thanks, your post widen my knowledge i only know that NTR is when mc catch other people having sex

 

[bluedrakken]

can't really judge the game since it's basically a demo/prologue with no real content beside 2pic. gonna wait on ch1.

 

[macadam]

thanks, your post widen my knowledge i only know that NTR is when mc catch other people having sex

not necessary...
if MC catch a friend having sex with another friend, its not NTR as long MC doesnt have relation with any of them.
same as if MC catch his mother getting bang by his father in an non incest game. (extremly rare, but that an exempl of non NTR)

but as long one of the involved person is MC love interrest, its NTR

 

[botc76]

I agree, that was a bit excessive. Not only that but she get's raped by a co-worker, then immediately blames the MC for her problems?


EDIT: After thinking about it for a while, this game isn't for me due to that opening scene with the News Anchors. Just not my thing and if that's the opening, what else is planned that I won't like. I do wish the DEV luck in his endeavors.

You know, there's a difference between rape being presented as a fetish or as a crime, while telling a story.
The rape here is shown as a man expressing his dominance over a female competitor, it's shown as traumatic and definitely not as positive.

I can absolutely understand not being into the first, but passing on a game, book, film or comic due to the second one is some weak sauce.
This shit happens in real live, if you want to tell a story that is not complete fantasy, in a bleak setting like in this game, stuff like that will happen.

 

[botc76]

Anyway, that is the second game I found here today that is really off to a good start, after Bad Memories.

It's a bit too verbose at times, and the premise is definitely inspired by Sin City, which is of course nothing bad, when writing a VN with a crime/PI setting, but it's solid and it's clearly aiming at telling a story and not just throwing brainless sex-scenes at you.

 

[Spiderfox]

Anyway, that is the second game I found here today that is really off to a good start, after Bad Memories.

It's a bit too verbose at times, and the premise is definitely inspired by Sin City, which is of course nothing bad, when writing a VN with a crime/PI setting, but it's solid and it's clearly aiming at telling a story and not just throwing brainless sex-scenes at you.

Yeah, I'm gonna blame the alcohol. I'm still playing the game. I still don't like the way that scene was presented, but eh ...

 

[Blind's Man Bluff]

Hey ! Really cool to see a french dev here. Hope you'll continue and make this game bigger. Looks very promising.

Bon courage J'espère que les donateurs suivront aussi.

 

[c_n]

@Blind's Man Bluff
Thanks
Well for this novel there's no limits as long as I have the imagination for individual client's case (for now I have already written six).

@botc76
Someone already told me that's it's look like Sin City... I didn't mean to make it like that but, well Sin City is in my comic's reference...

 

[WaveOfPig]

@c_n any chance of a walkthrough?

 

[c_n]

@WaveOfPig
I didn't think to make one but I can.

 

[WaveOfPig]

@WaveOfPig
I didn't think to make one but I can.

after playing through I realize that one is probably not necessary yet, but very soon it will be useful.

 

[poideryui]

Pas mal pour un début.
Par contre la police d'écriture, je sais que c'est pour l'ambiance mais elle est difficilement lisible, surtout quand l'anglais est pas totalement compréhensible.