theres just a split second view of the gas prices i thought was funny, also maybe im just weird but the mannequin scene had me more horni than scared
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Thank mate!It's updated right now.Just a reminder in case someone missed it
Gonna check it right now
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This started out pretty dang cool and interesting for me, and I was actually starting to get invested. The edgy brooding was tame enough, and I liked the idea of a young, intelligent, and hardened Sherlock Holmes type of character in tune with his surroundings with combat training. Sounded like a badass template to go wild with.
...Then the bizarre out of theme pop music started playing and it began to go downhill from there. The MC got all up in his feels. Then he didn't. Then he did again. Then we got a chance to peek in the shower. Except it was the illusion of choice and both choices end up in failure. Why? Who the fuck knows. Yet... super secret agent man who previously used his spider senses and fucking grapple thrown Val onto concrete gets peeked on by Wintress (what a twist!) and even given the slip. How? Who the fuck knows. Then he gets his dick groped by some rando at a bar. And doesn't do shit about it. Dude with combat training btw. Then the rando becomes his hacker sidekick, destroys him in a battle of tongues, and oh man, just another Monday I guess hee hee. Then he forgets how to talk to girls again. Then my eyes are brutally assaulted by all of Michael Bays special effects (with some mannequins twerking in the background because sure I guess) and the game is over.
I'm just gonna get straight to the point. Is MC going to keep his balls in the forseeable future? Or does bro just have schrodingers nutsack here? Sometimes in his pants, and sometimes dude just can't seem to locate them? Does he freeze up on g-g-girls groping his dick and talking to them in general, or is he someone that had no problem judo throwing one a moment before? Is he "craawwwlliiing innn my skiiiin~", or is he this brooding, careful stoic that held his own when talking to Moriarty? Is he this intellectual word wizard, or does he get outdone by a computer nerd? Really hope you figure out what type of MC you're going for. Stylistically, as well. It's a bunch of mixed messaging and it's kinda rough to trudge through to be honest.
I do like the framework with which you're trying to build your story. Or at least what it seemed like it was trying to be. But there's so much inconsistency and weird, seemingly contradictory character personality decisions being made such that everytime I start to come around to some aspect of the story, something happens to follow it that kills the vibe for me entirely.
...Then the bizarre out of theme pop music started playing and it began to go downhill from there. The MC got all up in his feels. Then he didn't. Then he did again. Then we got a chance to peek in the shower. Except it was the illusion of choice and both choices end up in failure. Why? Who the fuck knows. Yet... super secret agent man who previously used his spider senses and fucking grapple thrown Val onto concrete gets peeked on by Wintress (what a twist!) and even given the slip. How? Who the fuck knows. Then he gets his dick groped by some rando at a bar. And doesn't do shit about it. Dude with combat training btw. Then the rando becomes his hacker sidekick, destroys him in a battle of tongues, and oh man, just another Monday I guess hee hee. Then he forgets how to talk to girls again. Then my eyes are brutally assaulted by all of Michael Bays special effects (with some mannequins twerking in the background because sure I guess) and the game is over.
I'm just gonna get straight to the point. Is MC going to keep his balls in the forseeable future? Or does bro just have schrodingers nutsack here? Sometimes in his pants, and sometimes dude just can't seem to locate them? Does he freeze up on g-g-girls groping his dick and talking to them in general, or is he someone that had no problem judo throwing one a moment before? Is he "craawwwlliiing innn my skiiiin~", or is he this brooding, careful stoic that held his own when talking to Moriarty? Is he this intellectual word wizard, or does he get outdone by a computer nerd? Really hope you figure out what type of MC you're going for. Stylistically, as well. It's a bunch of mixed messaging and it's kinda rough to trudge through to be honest.
I do like the framework with which you're trying to build your story. Or at least what it seemed like it was trying to be. But there's so much inconsistency and weird, seemingly contradictory character personality decisions being made such that everytime I start to come around to some aspect of the story, something happens to follow it that kills the vibe for me entirely.
Honestly, the whole "horror" effects on the text were annoying. Having basically the same scene over and over again, honestly, that didn't do much for me. Wasn't that scary.
What bugs me the most, adding a command into the script to read the users personal pc data without the knowledge or agreement of the player. That's a red flag and puts this piece directly together with the dev on the black list to never ever bother again.
What bugs me the most, adding a command into the script to read the users personal pc data without the knowledge or agreement of the player. That's a red flag and puts this piece directly together with the dev on the black list to never ever bother again.
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You're absolutely right. That's exactly the goal I want to achieve: a self-contradictory protagonist. The current version has already progressed to the point where he starts to lose his grip on reality. However, if you pay attention to the background text or some subtle hints, there are clues that explain everything.
It's natural to have a lot of unanswered questions when you're only halfway through a story, and that's the case with Profiler in version 0.3. I'm not surprised that some players might not like this kind of development. Either way, thank you for your feedback.
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I did like this chapter specially the first part, the latter part I wouldn't say I disliked it but kinda wish it ended differently I have many questions that I know will be answered in future episodes and I felt like it gives too many questions and barely any answer.
Still, overall I think in this last update the general game and direction has improved a lot.
Still, overall I think in this last update the general game and direction has improved a lot.
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the text effects would be fine if they had a black outline, if you added that i think it would greatly improve the readability. there is also a ton of errors in the first nightmare scene at the very beginning of the game. also disabling rollback is horrible.
edit: there is actually way more errors than i initially thought and that combined with no rollback and the effects makes it a headache to play. i think i will just wait for the next version until that gets fixed.
edit: there is actually way more errors than i initially thought and that combined with no rollback and the effects makes it a headache to play. i think i will just wait for the next version until that gets fixed.
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If u r usin my official android verion, it has been uppdate to 0.3.1 already
Good update overall, but I gotta deduct marks for the lack of sex. For me avns need to balance story and sex and not choose one over the other. I must admit though that the characters and the story have me hooked like a fish on a line.
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More sex scene XDA badass MC and good looking lis and cherry on top Harem!
What's more can I ask?
And don't worry
There will be some awesome animations in next ver
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