There is something that doesn't fit together. When Ed (when you choose to don't look and just go to lunch) doesn't look having your college have sex, so why would you tell Jenny that you have looked (Voyeur -2)?
Ok, there are a lot of people to want to see all the lewd stuff and it's not necessary for them but some people may not want to see this. You want to tell a story here and when things don't fit together it's bad for the flow and (I'm sorry) lazy story writing, or a bug.
I have to admit that cheating/sharing are not my cups of tea but the models are hot and the story is intriguing and I may be overcritical but please don't make such mistakes. Or change it so, that you have to look. Thank you.