VN Ren'Py Abandoned Project Hot Wife [v0.0.22] [PHWAMM]

[jaws4567]

The English reads as if it was dictated to old voice recognition software. The game is worth better. I will proof read and correct if you would like me to. Message me

 

[umwelt]

Loving this! keep it up

 

[raulz0r]

The english is so broken in this game, but I fortunately have an easier time reading it since I am not a native speaker.

 

[freedom.call]

Not my cup of tea, but keep up the good work.

And yeah, have someone help you with the English and dialogue.

 

[Darth Sidious]

Extremely hastily written, there are at least two grammar or spelling errors in almost each sentence. But the concept is nice, the way this game plays around corruption is great. I'm gonna follow this, but please proof-read your releases

EDIT: Also, choices didn't seem to matter at all, getting the same scenes, just a few different lines.

 

[Hermit76]

Incest Patch? I don't get it. It would not make any sense at this point, they are a married couple.

Maybe at the moment "patch" isn't the right word for it. But they have a son, don't they? That means there is still hope - so "incest tag" might have been more appropriate...

 

[shinmix]

May I know which daz model you are using for merry. I like her face.

 

[andjor0]

There is a new post on his patreon, does anyone have access?

 

[Apk_Khan]

Any news for another version ???

 

[freeze]

be waiting for more

 

[Fruble]

Great game so far! but like everyone else already said the translation needs a lot of work lol. cant wait for more

 

[DarkWolf2055]

Any news for another version ???

coming soon we need to wait

 

[Thanos247]

This is one of those games where I want to just fast foward time to see what it can become. I look forward to MUCH more content. Also, please continue to work on it and I'll become a patron of yours. I generally don't pledge to people within the first few updates because 90% of people just quit.

 

[dj khaleid]

What does the Patreon post about the update say?

 

[crisbr]

What does the Patreon post about the update say?

Helô man help hin o patreon dud

 

[andjor0]

What does the Patreon post about the update say?

just posted my pledge

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Progress update version 0.0.2

Hi there

As planned i want to inform you of the progress for the next installment of the "Project Hot Wife".
So far everything progresses according to my plans, so i see no problem keeping up my previous deadline of the 11.1.19

the next version will give you the option of 2 different paths(cheat or share, for some scenes).
So from here on your choices will make a bigger impact on what path you are on.

Just wanted to inform that i reworked on the first chapter(mostly language)
and hopefully, chapter 2 will be better in the language department.

I will add some preview pictures (probably tomorrow)

Thank you very much for your support, PHWAMM

 

[penmaster]

This game has a long way to go. Meaning there is definitely chances of it getting popular.

 

[nxmxnh]

gid gud, future content with the father - son duo would be interesting

 

[Jodifarmer45]

Very good concept! My only critique is all the female renders seem to be very top heavy like breast size M. The MC is a big girl and I get that, but she might kill someone with them tits. I have enjoyed what has been completed so far. Keep up the good work.

 

[DarkWolf2055]

Updated OP