VN Ren'Py Project Myriam - Life and Explorations [Ch. 5.08a+p] [Zorlun]

[ouch2020]

the three of them, or it will eventually expand. Something to discover in the future, I suppose, but personally.. I think it wouldn't make sense if it got expanded to say, Marc's basketball mates.. I believe it could be a bit more interesting if it's something between the three of them.

Actually, it makes sense from a certain perspective, but a lot of people went on the opposite direction, it would make perfect sense if instead went the way of having something with the team, though Zorlun may "kill" that to save time.
You have a "dom" perspective, but in the "sub", there is more than one way in which Myriam can end up doing it, without need for Marc to go "Anthony" level (e.g. she knows how important is basket for Marc, and wants to guarantee him a place, or they get a good victory and she helps having a celebration for the team at the old home with the pool before selling it, even if not doing staff in the pool to avoid "external witnesses", and things get out of control).
In reality, at least some that suggested going that way, were also with a "Myriam dom" perspective like you.
They were the one suggesting Myriam to be, if you allow the expression, "bitchingly blue balling netoraring" Marc, i.e. as in, Marc cannot touch her, while she has him see how she "does" the entire team - somebody even indicating explicitly that would be a kind of transversal vengeance towards Anthony (Anthony being Marc's father, both in the incest and no incest version).
Personally, I think that would be going too far for Myriam, in the sense that I would not even see it as "dom", but rather as a form of sadism by Myriam.
Instead a discriminating between whether something can (not guaranteed even there) happen with the team or not, could be exactly whether Myriam keep the control acting "dom" and thus refusing, or let herself being pushed by the boys ("sub") and let the stuff happening, knowing that in that case, it could even happen at school (extra risk, extra kinky), and if it happens once, could happen more times ;-), or that could happen at home, and then the boys at school propose it again in the shower.

 

[ouch2020]

Actually I think it might have been more fun to not let people know how old Aiden is, leave it up to the player's imagination to determine age, you could probably do the same for all the other 'younger' characters as well. If you remember, Myrian actually allows him to jerk off on her thinking he was just a 'kid'. Not every Country has a legal age requirement of 18. You can get around a lot of the restrictions imposed by not specifying age.

Well, it acts as a safeguard for Zorlun towards Patreon.
In reality, the vast majority of the countries (and States in USA) do not have 18 has legal age of consent, it is below (even way below, in some cases and situations).
But even some countries where the age of consent is below 18, take exception to sexual images of people under 18 or who seem to be under 18, with a such vague formulation, that even if you draw it by hand yourself and have it at home without ever showing it to anybody, and even if it does not really show a sexual act but only e.g. some form of nudity, it would be considered illegal.

 

[TomUK]

To someone my age, Myriams age....an 18yo is a kid.

Yes 18 year olds are kids as far as adults our age are concerned, but Myriam was shocked when she found out Aiden was in fact an adult, if she had realised he was an adult (over 18) she probably would never have let him in her changing room. Bit of an oxymoron really as she lets Marc do stuff pretending to herself that she's only doing because in her eyes he's an inexperienced kid. A bit like when she lets actual kids jerk off over her and then tastes their cum.

But even some countries where the age of consent is below 18, take exception to sexual images of people under 18 or who seem to be under 18, with a such vague formulation, that even if you draw it by hand yourself and have it at home without ever showing it to anybody, and even if it does not really show a sexual act but only e.g. some form of nudity, it would be considered illegal.

In the UK where the age of consent is 16, not sure about now, but back in the early 80s the UK even allowed 16 years old to appear topless in national newspapers and it seen as OK, other countries have allowed even younger as long as it's not of a sexual nature.

 

[Maviarab]

Yes 18 year olds are kids as far as adults our age are concerned, but Myriam was shocked when she found out Aiden was in fact an adult, if she had realised he was an adult (over 18) she probably would never have let him in her changing room. Bit of an oxymoron really as she lets Marc do stuff pretending to herself that she's only doing because in her eyes he's an inexperienced kid. A bit like when she lets actual kids jerk off over her and then tastes their cum.


In the UK where the age of consent is 16, not sure about now, but back in the early 80s the UK even allowed 16 years old to appear topless in national newspapers and it seen as OK, other countries have allowed even younger as long as it's not of a sexual nature.

Heh...my Myri never let's Marc near her! (except on a couple of saves to see all the content).

Ahhh yes...the Sun...what an instution...part of my childhood lost...Fox, Lusardi...Guest....good times (along with the yearly Pirelli Calendar my dad got as a gift from suppliers haha)

 

[ccxvidonaferens]

In the UK where the age of consent is 16, not sure about now, but back in the early 80s the UK even allowed 16 years old to appear topless in national newspapers and it seen as OK, other countries have allowed even younger as long as it's not of a sexual nature.

UK age of consent for engaging in sexual activity is 16, however you may not be recorded or photographed carrying out sexual activity until over the age of 18. I guess there may be a grey area where topless only may not be considered sexual maybe unless the law was tightened after the heady days of the 80's.
As an example I remember an incident that took place somewhere where I worked (approx 20 years ago) where a girl between the ages of 16 and 18 (given the place I would imagine closer to 18 than 16) was recorded whilst with two guys who would also have been certainly no older than 19. All consensual as far as I am aware but when the video started to get circulated management came down hard as it was technically an illegal video.

 

[TomUK]

UK age of consent for engaging in sexual activity is 16, however you may not be recorded or photographed carrying out sexual activity until over the age of 18. I guess there may be a grey area where topless only may not be considered sexual maybe unless the law was tightened after the heady days of the 80's.
As an example I remember an incident that took place somewhere where I worked (approx 20 years ago) where a girl between the ages of 16 and 18 (given the place I would imagine closer to 18 than 16) was recorded whilst with two guys who would also have been certainly no older than 19. All consensual as far as I am aware but when the video started to get circulated management came down hard as it was technically an illegal video.

That was probably more to do with doing it in the workplace than their ages.

 

[Maviarab]

That was probably more to do with doing it in the workplace than their ages.

Would have been both, but mostly the ages. Even back in this countries heyday...video's of minors was highly illegal, even in the days of page 3. Traci Lord's first few videos were all banned here under the same law, along with her Penthouse shoot. Page 3 really was a moral and legal grey area (Unlike say, Blue Lagoon & pretty baby with Brooke Shields which had similar controversy but were allowed due to artistic licence and specific plot of story and that parents were on set).

 

[ccxvidonaferens]

That was probably more to do with doing it in the workplace than their ages.

I've been deliberately vague but to clarify they weren't in their workplace at the time though they were in accommodation provided by the employer at the time of the recording. I can state it had everything to do with ages as to why 'management' responded the way the did to encourage everyone involved and those to whom it had spread to delete the recordings.

 

[TomUK]

Would have been both, but mostly the ages. Even back in this countries heyday...video's of minors was highly illegal, even in the days of page 3. Traci Lord's first few videos were all banned here under the same law, along with her Penthouse shoot. Page 3 really was a moral and legal grey area (Unlike say, Blue Lagoon & pretty baby with Brooke Shields which had similar controversy but were allowed due to artistic licence and specific plot of story and that parents were on set).

In Blue Lagoon Shields was only 14 at the time and they didn't really show anything of her nudity, the boy was 18 so was perfectly legal to show his dick, Shields had a body double for any actual nude scenes and they probably had to glue her hair over her tits, I think I read somewhere, on close ups.

Anyway, I never said anything about underage porn being legal, in The Sun they were considered 'Glamour' pics, but we all know they were for schoolboys and men to jerk off to in the toilets at school or the workplace.

 

[Maviarab]

Anyway, I never said anything about underage porn being legal, in The Sun they were considered 'Glamour' pics, but we all know they were for schoolboys and men to jerk off to in the toilets at school or the workplace.

Lies....LIES & SLANDER! *whistles*

 

[TomUK]

I've been deliberately vague but to clarify they weren't in their workplace at the time though they were in accommodation provided by the employer at the time of the recording. I can state it had everything to do with ages as to why 'management' responded the way the did to encourage everyone involved and those to whom it had spread to delete the recordings.

Technically it's still considered the workplace I guess, as it's accommodation supplied by the employer. But distribution of hardcore porn, at any age, was restricted and in most case illegal.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

That is unfortunate to know, i was hoping for Aiden in the social work instead of just those random people who were there.

I thought he was ready made for that social work event. But in his defence, Zorlun has stated previously that not all the characters would get developed significantly. Some of them are just there for one off events, or several relatively minor events which have significance in Myriam's own story. Aiden seems to be one of the latter. His dressing room scene plays a big role in whether Myriam has enough Lust points to get certain sex scenes in the early part of the game.

 

[kiDRetadoR]

For Aiden it was one of the numerous plot line I wanted to explore, notably in the social work, but sadly that might get snipped, though I think try adding another little event with him to have him at least have some naughty content. ^^
For Marc and Nick, yes, there will be some development again, on dom and sub plot lines.

I see, thank you.

It honestly saddens me to see that the social work stuff you had planned for Aiden may not come to be, I have to say since the boutique scene he has become the one character really that I want to know more about. He has always had that air of mystery around him that makes him quite an intriguing character, and I would have honestly liked to see where we could make things go with him. Or even simple stuff such as why is he homeless, and other things.

From what you said though, there is still quite a fair bit of development to go through, so maybe down the line you can make your plans become a reality for him. I'll try to remain hopeful, and if it doesn't happen, I'll try to be content with the sexual scenes you make for him

Thanks for replying

 

[Zara Scarlet]

I see, thank you.

It honestly saddens me to see that the social work stuff you had planned for Aiden may not come to be, I have to say since the boutique scene he has become the one character really that I want to know more about. He has always had that air of mystery around him that makes him quite an intriguing character, and I would have honestly liked to see where we could make things go with him. Or even simple stuff such as why is he homeless, and other things.

From what you said though, there is still quite a fair bit of development to go through, so maybe down the line you can make your plans become a reality for him. I'll try to remain hopeful, and if it doesn't happen, I'll try to be content with the sexual scenes you make for him

Thanks for replying

Even though there's still a fair amount of development to go, Zorlun recently stated that he will be closing out some routes over the next year and then concentrating entirely on those routes which lead to endings, in other words the LI routes, and one for each kink. He still has to cover the other two social work events, and have more dates, plus the cosplay convention and then close out the routes that won't lead to an ending, all during next year. And that's why some things need to be sacrificed, that originally he may have intended to cover. Having said that, he did suggest there's likely to be some form of further sexual content involving Aiden before the end.

I get it, I wouldn't mind this game going on for much longer, so the Dev can flesh out more characters than he has up to now. But in order to do that, he needs to be motivated, and Zorlun obviously wants to move on to newer projects, and he's decided that 5 years is long enough for this one. And I would much prefer that he keeps motivated long enough to bring this game to a satisfying conclusion. Than try to push him to develop more characters than he's comfortable with, and have him give up in frustration before finishing the game. Now I'm not suggesting that would happen, because Zorlun has made it pretty clear he fully intends to finish it, and isn't going to get sidetracked. But I think we should really be supporting his decision to conclude the game in the way that he wants to.

 

[Maviarab]

Never said I wasn't supporting his decision.

It's of course his game and I'm just a simple consumer, so to speak. I wasn't trying to push him to develop Aiden, if it sounded like that, just that it sounded like there might be a possibility that he might get developed. After all, he said: "Might get snipped", so even if there's the very slightest of chances I'll take it heh, and we'll see what happens in the future.

I'm not familiar with what the LI routes are, so if you could enlighten me on that regard, I'd appreciate it.

It is true that there is a fair cast of characters in the game, sometimes it feels like there's way too many. Was checking out all the relationships before and my god, I can't even remember half of all the names I saw in the list XD. I appreciate that Zorlun is taking the time to think which stories will lead to an ending and which ones won't, and motivation is important in game development for sure, I've only been here recently and I've been enjoying my experience with the game for sure, especially because of all of the flexibility it offers.. but it is true that it kind of does leave a bit of a bitter taste to be "teased" with a character that was technically going to play a rather important role in the game and now it may not happen.

It is true that shit happens at times and some things need to be discarded for the sake of development, but I'm sure I must not be the only one who feels the same way about Aiden heh

Whatever the decision ends up being, I'll accept it (and I very much appreciate Zorlun going to lengths to give us some goodbye scenes with Aiden and giving him a sense of closure).

Lucy, Crystal, Kimberley & Nubia
Cleavon. Dave, Mike and Danny.
Bestiality and whatever unknown on neutral alphabetical option.

I have saves posted a couple of pages back of all the LI's up to the phone call to save anyone redoing the start/middle of the VN.

 

[TomUK]

It honestly saddens me to see that the social work stuff you had planned for Aiden may not come to be, I have to say since the boutique scene he has become the one character really that I want to know more about. He has always had that air of mystery around him that makes him quite an intriguing character, and I would have honestly liked to see where we could make things go with him. Or even simple stuff such as why is he homeless, and other things.

Aiden does appear again and saves Myriam, can't remember offhand if there was a trigger for that scene or not.

 

[Maviarab]

Aiden does appear again and saves Myriam, can't remember offhand if there was a trigger for that scene or not.

I don't believe there is unless it's tied to the previous scene.

 

[Zorlun]

Always love to see you all debate on the game (when it ends without dead of course ^^ )...
It's always motivating to see people taken by it.
Thank you all for the love the game and its characters.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Aiden does appear again and saves Myriam, can't remember offhand if there was a trigger for that scene or not.

He may not have reached that scene yet

 

[kiDRetadoR]

Even though there's still a fair amount of development to go, Zorlun recently stated that he will be closing out some routes over the next year and then concentrating entirely on those routes which lead to endings, in other words the LI routes, and one for each kink. He still has to cover the other two social work events, and have more dates, plus the cosplay convention and then close out the routes that won't lead to an ending, all during next year. And that's why some things need to be sacrificed, that originally he may have intended to cover. Having said that, he did suggest there's likely to be some form of further sexual content involving Aiden before the end.

I get it, I wouldn't mind this game going on for much longer, so the Dev can flesh out more characters than he has up to now. But in order to do that, he needs to be motivated, and Zorlun obviously wants to move on to newer projects, and he's decided that 5 years is long enough for this one. And I would much prefer that he keeps motivated long enough to bring this game to a satisfying conclusion. Than try to push him to develop more characters than he's comfortable with, and have him give up in frustration before finishing the game. Now I'm not suggesting that would happen, because Zorlun has made it pretty clear he fully intends to finish it, and isn't going to get sidetracked. But I think we should really be supporting his decision to conclude the game in the way that he wants to.

Sorry, I have decided to delete the reply to your comment and explain myself better why it feels bittersweet to snip Aiden's content, if it ends up happening.

I understand that there are certain characters in a story that are not as important as others, let's start from that, and Aiden doesn't seem to fall in that category at least from what I've played thus far. He is a character that appears twice, in four characters, and everytime he has made an appearance, it was made in a way that made you feel it wasn't going to be the last time you would be seeing him. When you help him out in the boutique, his last lines were: "I hope we meet again someday... and have some more fun".

During Chapter 3, after they go to the police station to denounce the aggressor that wanted to rape Myriam, before she left Myriam said: "Do you know where Aiden is? I wanted to thank him" and a few lines later says: "That's too bad, I hope I can meet him again and thank him". These, as I take them, are clear indications that there are going to be more interactions with him.

And while it might be the case, because as you pointed out (which I've also read in the comments), Zorlun wants to make at least a few naughty scenes involving Aiden.. it's where the disappointment comes from really at hearing the fact that Aiden might not make it, and I say might because it sounds like there might still be a chance.. as slim as it could potentially be.

I will accept whatever decision Zorlun takes for Aiden, of course, and respect it.. but personally, it feels as though it might be a little late to cut his content altogether.. considering we are four chapters in and he has been referenced enough to make us feel he's one of the important characters in the story.

I appreciate the fact that Zorlun has a pretty good idea of what he wants for his story and that he's starting to think which endings does he want to pursuit for his story and which won't, and I also agree that motivation is an important thing to maintain when it comes to game development. It takes a lot of time to do what he does, and I really appreciate the effort, because the game is pretty good and I love the flexibility he offers us when it comes to shaping Myriam, but I'm giving my two scents as to how I feel about Aiden's matter. And I'm sure I'm not the only one who feels a bit disappointed at the prospect of Aiden not being a part of the story anymore.

As for the LI routes, I don't exactly know what you mean by that acronym, so if you can explain that I would appreciate it.

EDIT: Nevermind, just figured it out heh. LI stands for love interest