VN Ren'Py Project: S.P.E.S. [v0.6] [6Rairyu9]

[Jimskeleton]

I want to like this but it's really difficult, would be much better if the MC wasn't such a simp, two of the LIs literally treat him like shit and he just takes it all, and then on top of that he's dumb as hell, being lied to by numerous people and he barely questions anything and when he does a little distraction and he drops the subject, so annoying.

 

[duz1nn]

Well , how to begin , the start was good , shorts updates and content , but was fun somehow and some interesting things happening , but i think you just dropped a bucket of cold water in this last update . I don't hate Sofi just to be clear , but i really didnt liked this idea of her moving in with him. I almost did alt f4 when they mentioned in the game , i just tried to ignore , i will try the next update when it happen , but im very close of dropping this one.

Well if that happens , I wish you a good luck with your project and thank you for sharing

 

[Jnx]

The two "main" LIs are exactly the same. It's so unbelievably frustrating. You have TWO disturbingly one-note tsundere characters and an MC that has NO discernable qualities, but everyone falls in love with him because.... The writer said so. The writing is so babyish and milquetoast that it gives me a migraine. "Why don't we hang out instead?" "Oh! that's a great idea, you are so smart [MC]" "Yes... Sometimes you are not an idiot." They have to commend him just for breathing without thinking. Or stand there for ten minutes to tell Sara how well she cooked bacon and eggs. Also Sofi and Emilia are so similar I would put money down that Sofi was just the beta version of Emilia before the creator realized that fluorescent pink hair doesn't look that good. But no, keep them both because having two characters that act the same and serve the same purpose is good? Question mark? THE EVEN ADDRESS IT IN THE GAME?! And to have Emilia so attached to MC's hip makes her even more annoying. Every line of dialogue from her is "I'm coming too because... Don't worry about it you idiot." She has no reason to like him and he has no reason to do any of the things he does. If anything he should be staying away because the shady father could end his life for doing something to his daughter. But why would we make sense in a porn game? There's also the fact that any time MC is slightly bothered by anything he has to VERBOSELY internally monologue things, that you the reader could EASILY infer, then one or all of the women surrounding him somehow notice he's so troubled. To which they then detract the conversation to facilitate his fragile mind. But don't worry, all those "...alpha" males that whine and bitch and moan about MC being too passive will surely bully the dev into making him some cringey alpha dom that never lets women speak to him louder than a mouse. Which will make the writing even worse because they suddenly switch over to an entirely different feel.

And all of that is pulled down further by exactly TWO facial poses. "Happy" and "Neutral." If a character is anything but happy, they have a robotic neutral expression. Meaning the entire argument with Sofi came of as robotic and boring because she just stared forward with glazed over eyes and no emotions.

Not to mention the world as a whole. What purpose is there to have a society built around slaves, then to have every woman that's not a slave still a demure, obedient cuckquean? Not only that but whatever the title is even about means NOTHING. There have been two scenes that essentially boil down to "Big business doing shady big business things in the background." You're never going to convince me that this tiny Korean Softboi of a human being is some gangbanger that can fight. Especially with lines like "Did he do something? I'll beat him up" Eight year olds say that. Not 20-somethings that live in bad neighborhoods.

I can MAYBE see the glimmer of something that could come out of this. But as it stands, I don't even think the writer knows what the hell "SPES" even stands for. There have been no special abilities. There has been exactly one scene showing people that might be "soldiers" (if you call anime girls that). And the dialogue is mind-numbing. Not only in how they speak but the idle nothings that they talk about. Which has been the whole game. Call me when you figure out what your game is about.

 

[bitsybobs3]

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[Midnight Ghost]

Best part of the game is holding ctrl in between sex scenes. Too bad Ayla and Sara are not the real love interest.
Oh well good luck with the game.

 

[michael1984]

There is a choice to go back home or stay in that place

But does it matter what you pick or will one choice cut out the other female characters in the other place

 

[Havik79]

LOL dude what, she is NINE years old, what did she start puberty at 4.

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[DevinHesi]

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Hi everyone!
I wanted to let you know that I'm about to start working on version 0.7 of my game. These past few days, I've been focusing a lot on improving the lighting as much as I can. The image you see here is a preview with the new settings that I'll likely use for the next version. I've pushed my PC to its limits without causing crashes, so for now, this is the best I can achieve!

I'm a bit behind on starting the new version because, I admit, I got caught up playing Dragon Ball Sparking Zero (if you're a Dragon Ball fan, you should definitely check it out, it's amazing!).

I'll keep you updated with new devlogs as I make progress. Thanks as always for your support!

Talk to you soon.

 

[shitass1001]

The setup in this game is ripe with story telling potential. MC comes from a poor city, he is used to living in relative squalor. He suddenly gets a seemingly free ticket to the high life in a FAR nicer city. There should be so much drama, he should be in awe at everything he is seeing.
He should carry over many of the things that you would have to do to survive in district 6, being overly cautious, carrying a weapon everywhere, stuff like that. Instead we get a limp MC who seems like he read a few articles about living in the hood and thought that sounded fun. He is cautious of Emlilia but almost immediately ingratiates himself with her, even after she blatantly lies to other people about him WHILE he is right there. I understand he is used to dealing with bitchy behavior (I will get to Sofia soon), but he should be smarter.

Emilia has the bones of a well written character, I dont mind her tsundere qualities as it seems like she has an actual reason to put up abrasive walls (I am pretty sure she has a line about the people in her life always leaving, and a line about always being second to her sisters). I think it would make considerably more sense if she didnt trust the MC for a long time, and it took great effort on both of their parts for her to begin trusting him. You are ultra wealthy, and are used to having anything you want at your beck and call, out of nowhere this random poor guy moves into your house and you are forced to share amenities with him, you wouldnt trust him at all right? and given how Emilia is characterized this discrepancy is even worse.

I disagree with the notion and Emilie and Sofia are exactly the same, as stated in this screenshot

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Emilia might seem like that on the surface, but at this point the MC should understand that her walls are dropping and she was much worse before. Sofia on the other hand acts like a petulant child the entire game, she doesn't have walls up, she is the walls. Start to finish she is upset about something, and she makes it other peoples problem.
usually Tsundere characters have a rise and fall to them, first they are rough and abrasive, then they show their softer side for a short while and then back to abrasive. Sofia doesnt have this, she whines and complains, and then her "softer" side is just milder whining and complaining.

I enjoyed this one a bit, but man there is so much missed potential.