- Jun 6, 2017
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The two "main" LIs are exactly the same. It's so unbelievably frustrating. You have TWO disturbingly one-note tsundere characters and an MC that has NO discernable qualities, but everyone falls in love with him because.... The writer said so. The writing is so babyish and milquetoast that it gives me a migraine. "Why don't we hang out instead?" "Oh! that's a great idea, you are so smart [MC]" "Yes... Sometimes you are not an idiot." They have to commend him just for breathing without thinking. Or stand there for ten minutes to tell Sara how well she cooked bacon and eggs. Also Sofi and Emilia are so similar I would put money down that Sofi was just the beta version of Emilia before the creator realized that fluorescent pink hair doesn't look that good. But no, keep them both because having two characters that act the same and serve the same purpose is good? Question mark? THE EVEN ADDRESS IT IN THE GAME?! And to have Emilia so attached to MC's hip makes her even more annoying. Every line of dialogue from her is "I'm coming too because... Don't worry about it you idiot." She has no reason to like him and he has no reason to do any of the things he does. If anything he should be staying away because the shady father could end his life for doing something to his daughter. But why would we make sense in a porn game? There's also the fact that any time MC is slightly bothered by anything he has to VERBOSELY internally monologue things, that you the reader could EASILY infer, then one or all of the women surrounding him somehow notice he's so troubled. To which they then detract the conversation to facilitate his fragile mind. But don't worry, all those "...alpha" males that whine and bitch and moan about MC being too passive will surely bully the dev into making him some cringey alpha dom that never lets women speak to him louder than a mouse. Which will make the writing even worse because they suddenly switch over to an entirely different feel.
And all of that is pulled down further by exactly TWO facial poses. "Happy" and "Neutral." If a character is anything but happy, they have a robotic neutral expression. Meaning the entire argument with Sofi came of as robotic and boring because she just stared forward with glazed over eyes and no emotions.
Not to mention the world as a whole. What purpose is there to have a society built around slaves, then to have every woman that's not a slave still a demure, obedient cuckquean? Not only that but whatever the title is even about means NOTHING. There have been two scenes that essentially boil down to "Big business doing shady big business things in the background." You're never going to convince me that this tiny Korean Softboi of a human being is some gangbanger that can fight. Especially with lines like "Did he do something? I'll beat him up" Eight year olds say that. Not 20-somethings that live in bad neighborhoods.
I can MAYBE see the glimmer of something that could come out of this. But as it stands, I don't even think the writer knows what the hell "SPES" even stands for. There have been no special abilities. There has been exactly one scene showing people that might be "soldiers" (if you call anime girls that). And the dialogue is mind-numbing. Not only in how they speak but the idle nothings that they talk about. Which has been the whole game. Call me when you figure out what your game is about.
And all of that is pulled down further by exactly TWO facial poses. "Happy" and "Neutral." If a character is anything but happy, they have a robotic neutral expression. Meaning the entire argument with Sofi came of as robotic and boring because she just stared forward with glazed over eyes and no emotions.
Not to mention the world as a whole. What purpose is there to have a society built around slaves, then to have every woman that's not a slave still a demure, obedient cuckquean? Not only that but whatever the title is even about means NOTHING. There have been two scenes that essentially boil down to "Big business doing shady big business things in the background." You're never going to convince me that this tiny Korean Softboi of a human being is some gangbanger that can fight. Especially with lines like "Did he do something? I'll beat him up" Eight year olds say that. Not 20-somethings that live in bad neighborhoods.
I can MAYBE see the glimmer of something that could come out of this. But as it stands, I don't even think the writer knows what the hell "SPES" even stands for. There have been no special abilities. There has been exactly one scene showing people that might be "soldiers" (if you call anime girls that). And the dialogue is mind-numbing. Not only in how they speak but the idle nothings that they talk about. Which has been the whole game. Call me when you figure out what your game is about.
