TheMagicalGurl

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Review: "Feels like the plot focuses far too much on how messed up the premise is without actually letting you do anything about it especially in the non evil path"

It is not my goal to have good Serena ever do anything about it. PERIOD. "Kevin" is very loosely based on me, the dev. So Serena, by design carries my morals. I don't feel a good person with powers would do anything but try to take a bad situation and make things the best they can. Overcome the evil or bad choices with an understanding nature that people fuck up and sometimes vengeance leaves a sour note... You can disagree, but that's why conquest exists. That's why I literally write two pathways to choose.

Now on the conquest side: OH MAN... You need to see Chapter 3... Things are happening. It's coming very soon. I delayed due to my health... but it's soon to drop... :)

thanks for trying it... Hopefully when Ch 3 goes public, you try it. :)
 
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TheMagicalGurl

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Update. Patreon and Itchio have been updated.

What has changed?

Over 34,000 words. Double the file size. 2 more animations. 2 characters transforming. Orcs and Goblins. Lilith debuts. Chapter 2 now clearly marked as being chapter 2 for those who didnt know where it was. Initial BG image for Chapter 2 in the lab fixed, had Norah weirdly sitting in the center. She is not there now and the image is improved thanks to my improved settings.

OPTIONAL Netori (Clearly marked so you can avoid it). Story. Tons and tons of story.



 

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Game is on sale for the winter. :cool:

Also, a week until the F95 public release of Ch. 3 part 1. :D
 
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TheMagicalGurl

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Chapter 3 part 1 goes public on F95zone...

PC:

Android:

MAC:
 
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Mfka5

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I have to agree with second post above mine.
The game is all cartoonish and the plot is weirding me out, i cant tell what the f*** is going on and who is girl and who is male cuz they all look like a trap.
But i understand dev is trying to scrape some bucks off of this whatever the project is, i guess they gotta pay bills somehow off of this porn site
 

TheMagicalGurl

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I have to agree with second post above mine.
The game is all cartoonish and the plot is weirding me out, i cant tell what the f*** is going on and who is girl and who is male cuz they all look like a trap.
But i understand dev is trying to scrape some bucks off of this whatever the project is, i guess they gotta pay bills somehow off of this porn site
I love you too, man. I am so honored that you have chosen to follow me around the site for 2 months. I am so special. Go me!
 
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lordfridge9

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Yours truly didnt see that and needs to update. Thanks for pointing out oopsie out.

That post was back in March. I still had Serena named "Luna" at that point... She also had the Algis modded in armor parts on her character model. Things have changed alot since the early days.....

Post deleted for accuracy.
Hi,

I'm sorry if this has already been beaten to dead by you, but I just wanted some clarification. Is the protagonist simply going to be "stealing" partners of others/cheating themselves or being 'holded/willingly sharing?
 

TheMagicalGurl

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Hi,

I'm sorry if this has already been beaten to dead by you, but I just wanted some clarification. Is the protagonist simply going to be "stealing" partners of others/cheating themselves or being 'holded/willingly sharing?
There was a netori scene added, BUT it is only one AND optional, you can avoid it and it is MARKED. Anyone else is exclusive to Serena and her whims.....

Is this game futasub mc or nah.
Serena is Futadom, but there are power exchange scenes...

Is Chapter 1 included in CH3?
"Chapter 3 part 1" is just the latest edition..... Everything before is with it... Chapter 1 was mostly upgraded with the Chapter 2 updates...
 

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quantumrex

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Overall, I think your writing is not working with the game format. The descriptions and the visuals don't go together. Even from the earliest scenes, the text describes the MC "in a glass tube" and the picture is "chained to a bed". IF the picture showed what you were intending, you wouldn't have to write dialog for it, and it could be streamlined.

My advice to you, to make the game easier to consume, is to fix issues like this. You don't have to describe a scene if you can show it. Try to focus the text exclusively on dialog and character actions. You need to write a screenplay, not a novel.

Or, move to a mostly text-based engine like Twine, if you really want to make the game's focus on the writing.


I admit, my spacebar was in pain by the time it hit the throne room scene, so:
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Needs work.
 
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