Beautiful artwork and great writing.
I love VNs with good writing. The story isn't bad but it isn't great either. However, the grammar is what I noticed more than anything. It's really good. A lot of times, the grammar looks like the person writing the story is jerking off to what's being written in the process, typing one-handed leaving typos and poor syntax in its wake.
The artwork though, I was blown away immediately. Anime-ish with a Western flair. I love western style art, one reason I love the Queen Opala games. It gives me the choice of Eastern-style or Western-style art. I look forward to future chapters and hope we get into a bit more adult themes.