It is absolutely terrible. Let me just mention some ridiculous crap that I remember out of the top of my head.
1) MC just got 3 new daughters that lost their mom to cancer and decided to go have some free time on dates
2) Which happens to have a waiter than just want to fuck right there!
3) The cop being the most pathetic cliche douchebag and the wife that out of nowhere wants to fuck MC (to be honest this is pretty standard but the level of which it happened is just pure bla)
4) Virgin mother with an adopted that was too busy to date but not to decide to adopt a kid. Seriously.. a virgin mother that had little time for dating but adopts a kid... not a joke here.. that is the character.
5) mother of the child you killed asks for a massage? really?
6) Triplets going from depressed to super horny with daddy.
Let's be honest here. These novel has absolutely nothing going for it BUT the triplets. They were what sell. And the first chapter the premise was a father reconciling with his daughter that are going over a tough moment. It had a good premise and there was potential for a good novel happening there with the triplets that really were among the cutest characters you can find.
And instead of developing the characters in a profound and serious way given the premise on the first chapter, they are turn into fricking cartoon characters: blonde is borderline retarded, redhead jumps to daddy i love you so much in day zero. Brunette I guess its a little better.
hahah well it's true both of us are very cute. But let's be honest here. I am no even remotely as scary as Ava. Not for lack of trying, it's just that girl can really crush your balls, tits or whatever organ you have.
