Ren'Py Raven [Segment 05] [Midnight Stories]

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I think it looks good, best wishes Mr Dev.
I have reached the part where alternate locations are showing at the bottom of the page, but even though there are people at the locations, I can't seem to interact with them.
Also, I can't see how to leave the house and go elsewhere, like school.
Perhaps I am missing something, or is the where this release ends?
 
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The characters look good and the MC's face is funny, at least it's not a face we see in 10 other games.
Beyond the different tags that this game has, my criticism would be with the variety of characters, physically they are very similar, at first glance we can only define their age and role by their type of hairstyle and even in that aspect they all have the hair of the same color (and same eye color btw).
I know they are family but even so, each one could have unique characteristics that differentiate them from the rest, not all members of a family are born with the same color of eyes, or there is also a "rebellious" member who dyes their hair.

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I don't know if you do this as a hobby or looking to be one of the great developers who can make a living creating games, but if your case is the latter, my advice is to vary the character designs, now if you do it as a hobby nobody can tell you anything about it.

I wish you great success with your Midnight Stories project and I hope one day to see "Raven [1.0]".
 
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Rel Teeg

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Love these tags. "Lesbian / Lesbincest, FF, FFF, FFFF " This title got a small splash in Share Your Lesbian+Incest Scenes thread, which is well subscribed and I hope that is enough to tell the Devs there is strong interest and support for a game that spends some time on these types of scenes. I hope they are also not just short five image encounters, but involved, tension building, with kinkier situations as well. Regardless, good luck with this!
 

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Also what devilry is this? Dev figured out the secret to making form fitting tops for women that don't look like titties in socks!
I'm glad someone noticed it. It was pretty hard to make, as they still have their underwears.

if i had to nominate the 4 horsemen of most common daz haircuts, i would say this picture encompasses it perfectly
And you would be right. There are a lot of hairstyles for daz content, but none of them were to my liking.

might as well make the mc a female if it was all about lesbian incest no point in having a male mc if they point of the story was lesbian crap
That's something I don't understand.
Does all the lesbian haters will suddently become quiet because the of a FMC?
You can have a FMC and only have sex with men, as you can be a man and enjoying lesbian content.

Move the notes to your quote since it is originally your words not BasB's.

uhhh I get all that...

But my guy, because the lesbian is unavoidable... the game has no harem. It be Polyamory, just with only one man.

Harem is when the LIs are exclusive to the MC... so no sharing with anyone... male or female, LI or not.

This will be easier when the new f95 tag system comes in because it will then have a proper poly tag, instead of it being lumped into harem.

But yeah, Harem = LIs exclusive to MC, thus not being shared. Poly = many people in a relationship simultaneously, regardless of gender. (can be all men, all women, w/e).

Not "Intra-harem"... it's just poly. by the fact the LIs are being shared at all, means it can't be harem... that would be like calling the color blue "Intra-red".

Now if there are LIs that are exclusive to MC, then there would be some harem LIs... but still no harem route, since you force poly onto the player.

It would still be NTR to the player, had you not given the warning, since you gave warning, the forced choice will only NTR players that didn't read the notes.

Anyway.... might wanna correct your tags since this ain't harem fam.


Also... the 24 girls thing... it wouldn't be sad... because harem is where the girls only care for MC.... so they wouldn't want to touch eachother anyway since they ain't lesbian :| they straight...

And a less lazy solution... would be to just not have such big scenes... on a harem route.... instead of slapping the harem label on polyamory and calling it a day.
I think this a matter of point of view:
For me, it's a harem because the MC will have the girls, and if the MC wasn't here in the first place, none of this would happen, and the lesbian content is a bonus that I particulary appreciate.
For you, it's not a harem because of the lesbian content.

sorry to disagree The mc will agree and encourage the girls to have sex with each other because you, the dev, have decided. and not the player. Example, it's like a li fucks another guy but the dev decides that the mc thinks it's cool to cheat on him. For the player it will be ntr even if the mc has no feeling of cheating. It's the same here, the mc is cool that the girls fuck each other because you, dev, have decided that way. The player does not paint anything. is it kinetic? okay. But you don't want to convince us that it's great because the mc agrees
Well... that's true.
The lesbian content about LIs is always "twisted" when you compare it with another guy.
I made the game based on my own tolerence on the matter. And I think it's good because my tolerence about NTR is veeeery low, and I wouldn't make a game I'm unconfortable with its content.
For me, if the MC said it's okay for girls to do lesbian things because he can't be here for everyone everyday, that's is just the begining of something, but of course, it's not a reason for the girls to go "full lesbian mode behind MC's back the next hour just because he said it's okay". If it was the case, even I would be like: "Eeeh, what? So, the MC said it's okay and then it's lesbian debauchery, just like that? The MC is still in the house, you braindead shits! Is MC nothing in your eyes?! Go and die somewhere else already!" and then drop my own game and blacklist myself.
But as you said, yes, I decided it like that. At the end of the day, the game if especially for people who enjoy lesbian content (and who have some patience because it won't come soon...)
Besides, I think that even if you are someone who dislike lesbianism to the core, the story of the game could still make you have a good moment.
Try and see by yourself.

You have it easy: make the freeroam scenes not mandatory and that it can be finished without doing anything.
I don't think I have it easy, but I want people who play the game to have it easy.
I don't remember how much games I played where the freeroam was a burden because you have to search everywhere for the next scene, and just for 3 minutes of dialogues.
I didn't want the freeroam of my game beeing the same, and in the end, needs a walkthrough...
So that's the solution I came with. Maybe there are better ones.


Perhaps I am missing something, or is the where this release ends?
Yes, this is the end, for now.

Maybe dev have a thing for brunettes..:unsure: Nah :sneaky:
Brunettes, short hairs (or ponytails), big tits.
I fully assume my own tastes. That's the secret of happiness.


Well, I guess with that, the baptism of the game is over.
You guys didn't let me down. Thank you very much.

I hope you'll enjoy the game.

And for those who played the game and wonder what the next update will have, I let Annita and Roger say it.
Damn, I love that duo.

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Can't do shit.
What the fuck is this rubbish?
Can only advance the time.
Just a pile of crap.
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kwazi

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the blue blazes is with the big big or medium big shit just say big or little sister for fuck sakes dev aint using patreon so y censore mc calling them sister nvm its the mc nickname for them
 
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BlasKyau

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Well... that's true.
The lesbian content about LIs is always "twisted" when you compare it with another guy.
I made the game based on my own tolerence on the matter. And I think it's good because my tolerence about NTR is veeeery low, and I wouldn't make a game I'm unconfortable with its content.
For me, if the MC said it's okay for girls to do lesbian things because he can't be here for everyone everyday, that's is just the begining of something, but of course, it's not a reason for the girls to go "full lesbian mode behind MC's back the next hour just because he said it's okay". If it was the case, even I would be like: "Eeeh, what? So, the MC said it's okay and then it's lesbian debauchery, just like that? The MC is still in the house, you braindead shits! Is MC nothing in your eyes?! Go and die somewhere else already!" and then drop my own game and blacklist myself.
But as you said, yes, I decided it like that. At the end of the day, the game if especially for people who enjoy lesbian content (and who have some patience because it won't come soon...)
Besides, I think that even if you are someone who dislike lesbianism to the core, the story of the game could still make you have a good moment.
Try and see by yourself.
Personally, like I said, I don't mind LIs having lesbian content, but I certainly don't feel like watching it. And I certainly won't, if there's no other way, in the skip content part I'll activate "unseen content" (or whatever it's called) and use CTRL. Scenes usually happen so fast that it's impossible to know what's going on, or who's involved, or really anything. So I still won't see them, although it will certainly be more uncomfortable than an option that allows you to skip them without having to do this procedure.

I don't think I have it easy, but I want people who play the game to have it easy.
I don't remember how much games I played where the freeroam was a burden because you have to search everywhere for the next scene, and just for 3 minutes of dialogues.
I didn't want the freeroam of my game beeing the same, and in the end, needs a walkthrough...
So that's the solution I came with. Maybe there are better ones.
Then the freeroam procedure will be, hold CTRL until it ends and we come back to the scenes where the MC participates. Certainly cumbersome,, but this way we can skip all the scenes in a few minutes and without knowing anything about what happens.
 

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That's something I don't understand.
Does all the lesbian haters will suddently become quiet because the of a FMC?
You can have a FMC and only have sex with men, as you can be a man and enjoying lesbian content.
yes they do, and that has multiple reasons
1) I dont play FMC game so filter them out, so I and many others wouldnt be here complaining, about the bastardisation of the Harem tag, that happens once again.
2) its a female MC game the MC is expected to have a shot at any LI, or what are we even here for?

I normally have nothing about lesbian relationships inside my harem, but at the same time im still lucid enough to know that that dynamic isnt a Harem but a poly-relationship.

if you look up my posts from 3 to 6 month earlier I was completely unfazed by lesbian stuff in harem games, but its got to a point where i get feed up, its not like your doing something new or innovative here. Lesbian stuff is literally in every game, its far fucking faster to give a list of games where it isnt part of.
 

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So I take it the current version ends at the point where the girls show their new revealing clothes in the evening? Or is there anything to do afterwards?
 

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31 characters, 26 females, 5 males with mc included, 4 superheroes (2 might be a villains). This is quite a lot of people to keep track of for a first release. Also the nicknames for the sisters are odd, is it like a lost in translation thing? big-big? middle-big? little-big? I'm assuming they are all older than the mc. Also the teachers... just call them Ms. and their first name, otherwise it will just be a confusing mess, which with 31 people to keep track of is already kinda messy.

Why do they suddenly decide to start wearing super revealing clothing out of the blue? I get why as a dev you want to show off some skin, but there is no world building/lore behind it and only if you pay close attention do you even know that one of the aunts has a store that sells clothes. It might make a bit more sense if she was a designer or something and she used the family as guinea pigs to try out her new clothing ideas. Also for world building, if there their society naturally showed more skin or something it'd make more sense. Here are the goods nephew/son/brother out of the blue is just weird though.

I did mention that the dev is talented with making tops that fit women and not the goofy af here is a tight shirt that has 2 slots like potato sacks for the titties. If that is the case why would a woman wear a bra at all if it's just all unsupported. Do you want national geographic titties in society that hang to the knees like droopy snoopy noses? because that is how you get them.

I don't mind the sandbox style to discover new stuff and for a first launch there is plenty to see already. My concern is with so many female characters introduced any character development usually goes out the window and it becomes a shallow mess of a game with 1 dimensional fuckdolls and many devs even skimp on quality sex scenes in favor of hurr durr quantity is king. I also worry that you basically introduced the first 3-4 seasons of characters in one go with more potentially coming. How do you balance any of this?

Lastly, where is any player choice? It's a kinetic story in sandbox wrapping paper. If there is no discovery, 0 options why even make a sandbox styled game? The reason those games are popular is there is a certain level of exploration and reward. Player checks the bathroom and sees a shower scene with one of the love interests, or they go to the laundry room and stepsis has managed to get stuck again! Stuff like that is fun and rewarding and sandbox games can be really good too. Unfortunately there are many many bad ones that just become a skip time until next scene, or grind points like crazy and oh noes those points deteriorate over time because the dev is an asshole!

Anyway, rant over, game looks good, ui/models, mc creepy face please never again. If dev can get some writing to support the models it could be really good.
 

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dialogue needs more work and english dialect corrections.. seems ok aside from that but for those of us who actually bother to read these avn's its a game closer if it just reads like computer translated garbage
 

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Heya,

yes they do, and that has multiple reasons
1) I dont play FMC game so filter them out, so I and many others wouldnt be here complaining, about the bastardisation of the Harem tag, that happens once again.
2) its a female MC game the MC is expected to have a shot at any LI, or what are we even here for?

I normally have nothing about lesbian relationships inside my harem, but at the same time im still lucid enough to know that that dynamic isnt a Harem but a poly-relationship.

if you look up my posts from 3 to 6 month earlier I was completely unfazed by lesbian stuff in harem games, but its got to a point where i get feed up, its not like your doing something new or innovative here. Lesbian stuff is literally in every game, its far fucking faster to give a list of games where it isnt part of.
I see you are a supporter of "My new familly". So, when Alice went down on Rebecca after you had sex with her, did this game became a polyamorous thing for you, because of that?
I don't think so, right?

The context is what made the difference between the harem as a I see it, and the polything your all are talking about. For exemple:
In the game "My new family", it's a harem, because the girls are first for the MC (the MC "gathered" them), and they just do lesbian things because... the context, the atmosphere, the moment. The girls are not "in love with each other" (except for the boss who seems to be in love with the mom? or something like that), and if for a reason or another, the MC is like "Eemm... I stop my relashionship with all of you" I really doubt the girls would still do lesbian things between them (well, at least, it was like that last time I played it, so maybe it changed since then)
In the game "Become a rock star", it's a poly, because that girl with the black hairs (I don't remember her name) join the couple MC-MC's girlfriend (if you take that route), and if the MC stops his relashionship with the two girls, well I think there will still have lesbian interraction between MC's "ex" girlfriend and the girl with the black hairs. Like you would see it in the game "Pine Fall" (? not sure about the name), when the MC comes back into that weird city and see his two girlfriends who continued their relashionship without him.

That's how I see the Harem and the Poly.

And you can have a story where the FMC has only males LI. FMC doesn't mean lesbian.


26 females, 4 superheroes (2 might be a villains).
I first wondered why theses numbers, and then I laughed at my own stupidity for not having noticed sooner you only played the prologue while I know the full story.

For the evening clothes, to keep it short, let's say it's a family who likes to tease their only male member because they know they are hot and the MC is a young adult full of hormones.
A family that cares about the MC. Maybe it was pretty hard to get it because the MC was rather "passive" in the prologue, but normally, if the MC is seeing her sister walking naked in the hallway, he would be more like: "Alright, Sis, now shake dat ass!" and it would be a funny moment. That's a kind a synergy between the family who tease and the MC who takes the opportunity.

And there is no "bitch" big sister who treats her brother like shit until he make her fall for him. I thought I had to precise it. Don't know why.

All the women introduced in the prologue (except Annita and the reporter who interviewed Captain Light) are the futur LIs.
There won't be any new LI showing in the middle of the story (well, some of them will come later, but you already have seen all of them).
Each of the LIs will have her own route (that is the first arc), with the proper development for all of them.
But at the end of the day, it's still a porn game, so yes, character's development is important, but we don't need an Elden Ring lore either.
I know the prologue rushed LIs introduction, that was totally normal.

As I said earlier, the freeroam (or sandbox, but I don't like the term because for me, sandbox is with grind and repetitive scenes again and again to progress in the story, and there is nothing like that in the game) is for the player who wants to see the characters lives outside the story, and to enjoy bonus sexual content with them after you completed their route.
For exemple: you completed Claire's story (a very good one, I love it), and then you're like: "Hey, I want to fuck Claire again!" you can go into the freeroam, find Claire and fuck her (or Hj, Bj, etc...). Easy.

MC creepy face is a running gag, it was not "accidental" or "a bad render". None of what you saw in the prologue was an accident (Annita-Roger, McVowoo, the three bastards, or the characters' dialogues (mostly)).

dialogue needs more work and english dialect corrections.. seems ok aside from that but for those of us who actually bother to read these avn's its a game closer if it just reads like computer translated garbage
I know I need a proofreader, and you are free to PM me anytime to bring some corrections to my bad spelling.
 
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I know they are family but even so, each one could have unique characteristics that differentiate them from the rest, not all members of a family are born with the same color of eyes, or there is also a "rebellious" member who dyes their hair.

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Daz assets without a doubt (which I like fyi, same as brunettes :cool:)
But yeah once reviewers see this pic they will have a field day on how they look like quadruplets (along with MC's face)
Lastly it really bugs me most devs don't know how to make a real milf. Their skin should be tanned, and if over 40 add some lines on the side of their eyes. Perhaps then I'll subscribe on SS. Until then I'll add this on my Watch List
 
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